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Familiar Strangers - OS (Page 15)

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Posted: 18 January 2015 at 4:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by CavingIn

For the first time I am witnessing the child Adi,  Aani.  So far not even once have I felt a sympathy towards this character even though I knew he is just a misguided child.
You gave him the much needed human feel. It was nice to read an OS from his point of view.
Lovely work dear.

thanks Nidha 

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Posted: 18 January 2015 at 4:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rozy77

this was really wonderful dearClap
enjoyed itBig smile
it was nice to read something positive on aditya..Thumbs Up


thanks Rozy 
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Posted: 18 January 2015 at 4:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by THEfanOFheartz

Hey! Hug
Amazing!!xxxHeart
I loved how you did it in Adi's POVBig smile Truely
Nicely written!Clap Comparing his life style to theirs. Than how he felt; his emotions.
The depth you went into with portraying him before unwrapping the gifts than after unwrapping them. The laptop scene aww poor Adi he thought it was from his motherCry but wasn't and that romance scene of Ishita n RamanLOL Loved it!!Heart
I could connect with Adi in every line...how he was feelingEmbarrassed...
 Fab!!Big smile Everyone has made some good valid points that i don't need to say anymore.Star
Your such a fab writer!!!Thumbs Up
Enjoyed reading it!Wink
@Thanks for the PMBig smile



thanks dear 

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