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Familiar Strangers - OS (Page 13)

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Posted: 18 January 2015 at 3:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Anku-

WOW Aani, a beautiful piece of writing yet again. I've read it twice already. Adi is definitely going through a hell lot of turmoil and your story has highlighted all that he's bearing and thinking so clearly. Adi has never had a family to love him, or anyone to attend to him, his likes and dislikes. He's been ignored, left alone and not cared about.. More than anything he's been poisoned. Now in this house which is his family, but still seems like a house full of strangers, he's so confused between what he's been told and what he sees. A loving father, a caring mother an even more alert and always ready to be there family including siblings and grandparents. He's vulnerable, but still welcome to the love he is finally getting. 

It was amazing how you put in the moments he witnesses, how they affect him and what he thinks of everything happening around him. It was a deep, thoughtful and beautiful story. 

thanks Anku 

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Posted: 18 January 2015 at 4:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vidya.anand

Awesome OS! hope something similar happens and Adi knows Ishita's goodness soon!

thanks Vidya 
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Posted: 18 January 2015 at 4:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by desire_nikki

Wow...it was such a beautiful os..!! 
Loved it..!! 

thanks Nikki
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Posted: 18 January 2015 at 4:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RomComFan

Love this story, so glad you started wring again!Smile

Thanks so much for the PM- very glad I did not miss this.Big smile

Your story is so sweet,  reads very naturally and I love the idea of Adhi as a silent witness.  Seems this is the best way for him to find out the truth about it all.  Love the way he reflected on his father's relationships... and the last couple of thoughts as well. 

Oh and the ISHRA romance- do I even need to tell you how much I love it?






thanks dear 
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Posted: 18 January 2015 at 4:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jojo1986

Loved it

thanks Jojo
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Posted: 18 January 2015 at 4:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ankita_sidana

I really wanted to read something from adi pov
and i got this one
must say...loved every bit of it
superb os
thnks for pm

thanks Ankita 
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Posted: 18 January 2015 at 4:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by daisydee425

Awesome

thanks DD
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Posted: 18 January 2015 at 4:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by CavingIn

For the first time I am witnessing the child Adi,  Aani.  So far not even once have I felt a sympathy towards this character even though I knew he is just a misguided child.
You gave him the much needed human feel. It was nice to read an OS from his point of view.
Lovely work dear.

thanks Nidha 

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