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{--Arjun-Draupadi Kalyuga FF--} Thread 4 [Updated. New Chap in Pg 106] (Page 92)

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Posted: 23 May 2015 at 3:05am | IP Logged
Arey sassuma maharani charumitra itna accha chappie! It was very nyc .. The whole court procession.. And everything else...mujhe nahi pata tha ki rani charumitra bhi ArDi ki fan hai.. Hehe!
But it was very nice..
Love , ur daughter in law ahankara..

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Posted: 23 May 2015 at 11:10am | IP Logged
Very nice update!
All with the court scene and everything!
Sorry bout the short comments..I'll give you a nice long comment in about 2 weeksLOL
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Posted: 24 May 2015 at 5:34pm | IP Logged
Nice update! Smile
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Posted: 24 May 2015 at 10:17pm | IP Logged
wowieee!! courtroom drama!!! awesomeee babes!! 
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Posted: 25 May 2015 at 1:45am | IP Logged
Amazingly n very interesting update Krishu Di ! 
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Posted: 25 May 2015 at 5:51am | IP Logged
Brilliantly written chapter!!! What's impressive is that your taking care of all the little details...like Parth sitting on the armrest of Kunti's seat. It doesn't really make a difference where he sits but if you imagine the scene it looks so much family like and a sense of warmth and love is thereSmile
Just one thing. Subhadra is getting trained to become a lawyer. How come was there no participation AT ALL from her side in the discussion about the proceeding in the court of lawOuch? It really confused me JeejiConfused. As in she could be the lawyer from the Kuruwars' side. And even if she couldn't cause she was still a student, she could have been a very vital part of the debate that went on later...
I am sorry if my comment was in poor taste but a responsible reader is only one who expresses, what in his/her POV is the best, openly. I say this to such a wonderful and ever evolving writer only with the hope of not being misunderstood and of being a bit help if I maySmile
Anyways...Plzzz continue soonBig smile
n PS waiting for our PP momentsEmbarrassed 


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Posted: 27 May 2015 at 10:52am | IP Logged
res sorry di couldn't comment in time...had exams n now poor net connection... gonna comment by tomorrow for sure...sorry again Unhappy
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Posted: 29 May 2015 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sadiasaba68

res sorry di couldn't comment in time...had exams n now poor net connection... gonna comment by tomorrow for sure...sorry again Unhappy

superb update di...just awesome one...
all the court process was just well explained...
i was imagining the whole scene...
i felt that i was sitting in the court room itself Clap
happy that the culprits got punishment...
glad that everyone is happy...Star
hope no more trouble is coming...
continue soon di Approve
again sorry 4 being late... Smile

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