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{--Arjun-Draupadi Kalyuga FF--} Thread 4 [Updated. New Chap in Pg 106] (Page 85)

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Posted: 02 May 2015 at 10:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sadiasaba68

awe di super cute update Clap
dhrish n shubhi r so adorable Day Dreaming
haha i love khaki's statement ROFL
awe chutku n doodu... super cute Day Dreaming
ok so finally our arjun took abhi in his arms... Big smile
can't wait for the Namkaran Approve
continue soon di Star


danku dear...
yup finally abhi baby is in his dad's arms...
naamkaran... wait meri bachchi!! Wink

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Posted: 02 May 2015 at 10:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aishwarya48

Areee!Cool
Such a cute update!Smile
Loved it sosososososooo much!Thumbs Up
So, we finally got to sneak in some Subhi Dhris moments in thereHeart
And then Priyamvada kaaki interfering!ROFL
When is the naamkaran?Tongue
Looks like our queen is very very smart!Clap
Smart enough to slip out of his grasp..Shocked
AND get Paarth to hold AbhiBig smile
Aww..! I could just imagine a little baby right there crying!Cry
How cute he must be if he was real!Embarrassed
Update jaldi karo!!!LOL

thank you dear...
queen is always smart na.. Wink

naamkaran.. wait puthri... wait!! Wink
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Posted: 02 May 2015 at 10:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by avishkatagore

Omg krishnaa. Awesome update.. Chutku and doodu was so sweet... Eagerly waiting for the naamkaran...do update soon

thank you dear... keep on reading!! Big smile
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Posted: 03 May 2015 at 10:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Krishnaa_Nair

Originally posted by Belle_20

Ohhh god!!!! Parth finally took the baby in his arms!!!!!Day DreamingClap It was really clever of Panchali to plot this Father Son moment!!!!LOLWinkClapLOOOVED IT!!!!Big smileHeart Thank God Pritha didn't take the baby and instead made Parth do it. For a sec I thought Panchali's effort will go in vain!LOL Dhrish and Subhi are sooo cute!!!!LOVELY!!!!& especially the way we got to know abt  Drish's deep feelings regarding her and also tht he observed and understands Parth & Panchali's relationship, was great!!!! & Chutku & Doodu???!!!!!LOLROFL
Was a really sweet heart warming update!Smile Thank you Krish Di!!!!Smile

ha ha Pritha knows Big smileSmileher son well dear!! Wink
It feels grt to see you are taking out the time to individually, reply to all of our comments. I know you must be very busy with work and all.On top of it you are writing new chapters for us every week. And nowadays also replying to our comments!SmileClap
U know it feels amazing to know tht a certain writer is reading your feedback and opinions abt the story.& receiving a reply,is such a cherry on the top!!SmileSmileSmileSmileThaaank you so much,Krishnaa Di!!!!Hug

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Posted: 04 May 2015 at 1:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Belle_20

Originally posted by Krishnaa_Nair

Originally posted by Belle_20

Ohhh god!!!! Parth finally took the baby in his arms!!!!!Day DreamingClap It was really clever of Panchali to plot this Father Son moment!!!!LOLWinkClapLOOOVED IT!!!!Big smileHeart Thank God Pritha didn't take the baby and instead made Parth do it. For a sec I thought Panchali's effort will go in vain!LOL Dhrish and Subhi are sooo cute!!!!LOVELY!!!!& especially the way we got to know abt  Drish's deep feelings regarding her and also tht he observed and understands Parth & Panchali's relationship, was great!!!! & Chutku & Doodu???!!!!!LOLROFL
Was a really sweet heart warming update!Smile Thank you Krish Di!!!!Smile

ha ha Pritha knows Big smileSmileher son well dear!! Wink
It feels grt to see you are taking out the time to individually, reply to all of our comments. I know you must be very busy with work and all.On top of it you are writing new chapters for us every week. And nowadays also replying to our comments!SmileClap
U know it feels amazing to know tht a certain writer is reading your feedback and opinions abt the story.& receiving a reply,is such a cherry on the top!!SmileThaaank you so much,Krishnaa Di!!!!Hug
you guys are my gifts... my precious ones... readers are the real strength of s writer...

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Posted: 04 May 2015 at 1:42am | IP Logged
BTW.. Shriyu will be updating.. Wink

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Posted: 04 May 2015 at 1:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Krishnaa_Nair

BTW.. Shriyu will be updating.. Wink

Ok! Waiting...Evil Smile  

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                                                       CHAPTER 131

  (No proof reading, im writing after long so pls forgive d mistakes)

Parth woke up & looked at the alarm clock beside him. It was 5:30, he still had half an hour of sleeping time but he wasn't able to sleep. Today was the big day!! His boy's

naming ceremony!! Though he was quite clear on what he wanted to name his son,
he doubted if panchaali would agree with it, cos she was preety serious about
naming him aankhon ka kajal'!!! he chuckeld to himself. His panchaali, his
life... every word she said, serious or joke was like a law to him. He wanted to
fulfill her evry dream even before she expressed it. She derived it, she deserved
much more, now that she had given him the most precious gift of his life!!! The
baby peacefully slept in his cot. He was a good boy, dint trouble them much. He
was a happy baby, no one wanted to let him go. As he was about to go pick him
up to cuddle him,panchaali placed her arm around him. He looked at her n saw
she was still asleep but those luscious lips parted slightly in her sleep to
invite him. He took them in his own & sucked hungrily at them. His kiss
woke her up. She smiled & kissed him back with passion. They had such a
passionate moment after a really long time &they wanted to savour it, but a
loud knock on the door forced them to break apart..


"helllooo???? New mommy?!?!?!?! Wake up wake up!!!!"

shouted a chirpy girl. "ullo its only 6!! She might have not wokwn up!!" came
another girl's softer voice. "well aunty
said she is supposed to wake up by now!!! N I cant stay away from the bundle of
joy anymore!!! PANCHUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!" uloopi banged the door &
parth got irritated. "I almost forgot about that hurricane"he said ruefully. "well
she not someone you can forget easily"winked panchaali. She forced him inside
the washroom to freshen up, adjusted her clothes & opened the bedroom door
to be smolthered by her two besties. "so much happened with you n we couldn't do
anything!! We saw dhris yesterday, ofcouse he is coping up but it must be soo
hard..." chitra almost began crying. But before panchaali could console her
saying things are fine, ullopi did the job in her own way by putting the baby
in her lap. Then all worries, all sadness was forgotten. Parth literally had to
beg them to leave the room so that he could change..


Panchaali had tough time choosing between a salwaar n a

saree, was she in right shape for a saree?? Will her stretch marks be too
evident?? She dint even have much time!!
The guests started arriving & pritha began to freak out!! "wear a saree
jiji!! No one can match up to u in a saree!!"said subbi. But ofcourse,
subbi,like parth loved her in whatever she wore. But when uloo,chitra,hema n
all others too convinced her, it did seem like a better option. "yes chachi u
look veeerrryyy beautiful in a charee!!" said ghato. She went &
kissed him on his cheeks & said "ok big boy, how about I wear that red
saree???" Ghato gave a thumbs up & hugged her."but what will chootu baby
wear??" ghato asked. "well chootu baby is feeling hot so he'll waer something
light!!" said hema & engaged him in a conversation as panchaali went to get
ready...


The guests were pouring in their congratulations for the

birth of parth & panchaali's miracle baby. Both families were overwhelemed
with joy!! Dhris was super happy & super eagar to take part in the
functions but his injuries dint allow him to do so. But subhadra supported him
in everyway. "dauu is a totally convinced about dhris now, he plans to talk to
mr drupad right after their studies r over." Madhav told parth. "He has definately
proved himself worthy!!"said parth. Well deseved happiness was at last coming
in dhris & subhadra"s life. "So decided the name??"madhav asked. "you know
me madhav, I have only one name in mind, its your sakhi who takes d final
decision!!" said parth. "but where is she?" madhav asked looking for her. But just
then they heard the sweet noise of the baby"s laughter...

The turned to see panchaali descend down the stairs with the

baby in her hands. He was awake & looking all around with excitement & curiosity.Subhadra,dhris,ullopi,chita,

the brothers...no one could stop awing at the baby. Ghato never left his chavhi
& his chootu's side. Dadu, dadi,pritha,pandu & drupad had tears of
joy!!! Panchaali's eyes met her govind's & she saw immense happiness
there!!!


That happiness only increased a 1000 times when the pandit

asked her the name she had in mind & she proudly said, ABHIMANYU...


Baby gif by krish & abhimanyu gif from tumblrBig smileBig smile



Edited by Shriya95 - 05 May 2015 at 5:29am

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