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{--Arjun-Draupadi Kalyuga FF--} Thread 4 [Updated. New Chap in Pg 106] (Page 100)

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Posted: 09 June 2015 at 1:45pm | IP Logged
anywys.. i hate to see fights in my FF.. i am gonna edit my post n so will you.. 

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loving this , the story Draupadi should have gotten

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Good night.. 
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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 9:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Krishnaa_Nair

i know this might be a bad news... 
but only some more chappies... this FF will be complete..
juz wait to see who is the real person behind all these games... the man will be revealed soon... and that marks the end of the FF
Nop Di u are not going to end this FF please . U don know how special this FF has been to  everyone . I joined IF just to comment in this FF and tell u to update . Please Di this Ff has been a big big important part in my IF journey and I m sure,  not only mine but many others too . A big request don end this FF . If u r busy u can update once in a month but please don end this FF . This is and has  been the best FF on ArDi .  
Ending after a few chaps ? Sleepy Then what about our Parth's Pragiti . 
Anyways Di after all it is all up to u and Shriya Di , u both must have thought well and taken this decision . But mine and I know all the readers request would be don don end this FF . 
At least not till it reaches 200 chaps . :p 
Love u and crazily love this Ff . I guess now we will have to spend our time reading the past updates . Cry
Sam 

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okay i have got something big in mind..
this will go on.. lemme see till when

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Posted: 14 June 2015 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
Chapter 135

"this money is enough and more to keep the renovations. By next month end the casino will be up and running." the finance controller shared his thoughts with Dury. "good" he answered monosyllabic and smiled wickedly. Dury have left Delhi after the case dissolved and he is free of charges. Bhavani is with Gandhari and Dhritarastr. Dushy got his bail after one week and he along with Shuakini is now with dury at Goa, where their old Casinos are getting a renovation.

Karna have left dury's company and have started his own company and is in good terms with Kuruvansh and Kuruvar family. He figured out its better to stay away from both. But the surprising news was he found his parents' death was not an accident. He was told that his parents died in a car crash when he was 13 and since then he was under the protection of the Kuruvansh Family. He never knew it was a murder. All he knew was along his course of living in the orphanage, one day he met Dury at school and that friendship have been the light of his life since than. But the news have also paved some seeds of doubt in his heart. "why did kuruvansh family protect him??? do they have something to do with the car crash???? why is he so important to Kuruvansh family, especially to Mrs. Gandhari kuruvansh?? its not just because of the friendship". He shared his doubts with Vrushali. These same questions are also there in her head too, but kept quite seeing the friendship between Dury and Karna. He dont have any knowledge about his grand parents, for his parents eloped at a younger age and was away from their respective homes. He dont know whether he have cousins or uncles or anyone. He met with a private detective and briefed him regarding the same.


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"welcome to the nest baby" Arjun held Abhi baby over his head and showed him the beautiful home. "Paarth... be careful na" Panchali came and took him in her hands. Arjun grabbed the bags from his SUV and placed it in the drawing room. Panchali was simply taking in the aroma of the closed rooms. It didnt smell like a drenched carpet. It smell sweet, it smell home.

The front door opens into the big (yet small when compared to the Pandav Mansion ) living room exclusively for the guests. It was furnished with modern White furniture with a glass center table, two side tables to the sides of the main couch, one with a flower vase and another with a lamp. Beside the lamp there was a huge shrub which overlooked the window beside it. The windows behind the couch opened to the outside garden. There was a graphic designed brown, velvet and rug mix carpet in the middle of the room. On the wall to the left of the couch had two wedding pic of Arjun and Panchali. One of the munnar wedding and another of their official wedding at the Panchal Mansion. On the wall facing the front door held the first pic of Abhi baby.


Panchali looked at Arjun who came around after keeping the luggage in their respective places. She gave a nod appreciating his "upgrading" works on their nest. When they came here first it was a plane living room minus the interior design. "Impressive" commented Panchali. "shall i give you a tour???" Arjun asked with his iconic loopsided smile. Panchali nodded in agreement. He led her to the left side of the room which went straight into the dining area. There are desighed inbuild wodden shelf projecting from the wall separating the dining area from the living room. Right next to this wooden shelf is the stairs leading upstairs.

Just like the living area the dining place is also furnished modernly. A small dining table made out of dark brown oak wood and six white jute cushioned chairs. There were three thick big white candles on one end of the table. Right next to the table was a long lean oak wood cabinet which is build into the wall. It had all the needy crockery iteams in case of a giant dinner party. Above to this cabinet was a wooden frame which had decorative boxes and a lily flower vase.


The dining area was directly connected to the Kitchen area. The kitchen also shared the blend of dark brown oak wood mixed with some steel effects to add to the modern touch. A working counter in the middle which had 4-5 vertical cabinets and a wide cooking counter to the length of the wall equipped with all the modern kitchen instruments. Above to the cooking counter there were horizontal cabinets. The door to the right side of the kitchen also opened up to the Garden and to the backyard.

"how much do you spent altogether Paarth???" "thats none of your concern dear. Consider it as my... welll.. umm...never mind" panchali looked with wide eyes. "Is this his gift!!!!" she wondered,but suddenly Arjun grabbed her arms and pulled her towards the stairs leading upstairs. The stairs ended to another living area, but this one was exclusively for the family, which is right above the living area downstairs. It had the same projected wooden shelf as its entre part. The shelf held a wide LCD television and the sliding door next to it opened to a wide balcony, which is right above the garden outside. Opposite to this living area that is right above the Kitchen and the Dining area are the bedrooms. But unlike the dining and kitchen area which leads from one to the other, here the space is equally split in to two bedrooms. The door of the master bedroom was on the wall leading from the stairs and the door of the second one is on the wall facing the stairs.


The master bedroom was yet another surprise for Panchali. Last time they visited this room she was adamant in making out with him, which ended up with her kicking Paarth out of the bed coz she was "late" for something. Upon entering the giant bedroom both of them laughed their guts out. So many things have changed after that. Arjun have changed the entire look of the bedroom coz it reminded him of so many things. The bed was placed towards the wall on the right side of the door, with a giant leathered bed post and four fluffy soft pillows and well folded white and black stripped blanket.


The two side tables had night lamps and opposite to the bed there was the most beautiful dressing table. "hai.. thats my dressing table.. how..." "i had them hand-made" He whispered in her left ear and took abhi baby in his hands.She blushed suddenly on hearing his husky voice. There was a door in between the dressing table and the wooden cabinet which was build-in just like that in the dining area but of a lesser length. Panchali opened the door and her jaw dropped. "Are you serious???" All those gifts he bought her on their first date were arranged jux like the trophies arranged in the showcase of one's house. This was only the small lean passage which lead to yet another door on the right. This door was that of the closet, which is split into two, one side had Paarth's clothes and the other Panchali's. But the interesting thing was they had moving dress hangers. All she have to do is to press the button on the remote and the dress rack will move towards the left, like the rolling belt in a manufacturing company."you are crazy!!!! you are spoiiling your wife" Panchali said as she closed the door behind her and came near to Paarth who is lying on the bed with Abhi baby on his chest playing. "how many times i have told you i am insane about you!!!!". Panchali also laid down beside him on the Bed.

"you know what lil guy, your mother knew about your exsistence here and your mommie was so out of her control that she started to walk up and down and even scolding daddy. She thought it was just us here, but we were never alone here. You were there all the time." Panchali laughed and shook her head. "yes. And i kicked your dad out of this very same bed." Panchali said by turing to face arjun. Arjun placed abhi baby right in middle of them and pulled Panchali towards him. "you will have to gift me what ever i ask for dear."he said this and raised his eye brows. Panchali narrowed her eyes. "aah ha.. i knew it. There is always a catch." Arjun's eyes sparkled the profound mischeif he has always when he is alone with his beloved wife. But even before arjun could pull her close enough to kiss her, his phone rang. He looked at the screen and saw govind's number. He did give out a curse under his breathe before picking up the call

"i know its bad timing my dear cousin. But this is way more urgent than your romance" Madhav teased Paarth as Paarth said "Hello" in a heavy voice. "what??? how..." "that little curse and that heavy voice says it all. Pass on my hello to sakhi Paarth also how is my nephew??" "they are fine Madhav. How is my nephew???" Paarth asked laughingly. "Inside her mother's womb, waiting to jump out any moment" "her????? so its a girl???" 'i dont know!!! i guessed it would be a girl!! jokes apart. I need to meet you with Satyaki next wednesday. Things are getting more and more tangled as days pass. This certain someone is going underground. He have eyes and ears even in our own house." "sure madhav. Sat is a call away. We need to get to the bottom of this thing as soon as possible". Madhav hung up. Arjun fisted his arms and gave a shake to himself. He turned around but Panchali was no where to be seen. He heard sounds coming from down the kitchen. He changed his clothes and went downstairs.

Panchali have also changed her clothes and have also changed abhi baby's clothes. He is covered from neck to toe in a white baby suit and is now lying in his baby seat.

Panchali have placed him on the small kitchen table near to her working area and she is busy checking the fridge and the cabinets. "its fresh dear. I filled them up this morning". He came near and sat beside the table where abhi baby is placed in his baby seat. He started to play with him. "okay what do you want for dinner??" "Its weekend. We ll order something from outside" "No. Paarth. Please.. at least let me cook here." "okay then. Cook whatever you like" "no no.. you cooked for me in Greece. Now its my turn." "umm..." Arjun thought for a second and said "make something special!!!". Panchali smiled at his request and nodded.

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"when will chottu baby comeback??" Ghatto asked the 10001th time to Daadi. "he will come soon dear" Daadi answered with a tint of smile on her face while she looked at him through the gaps of her rectangular glasses. Now a Days his favorite chachu is not available to play with him, so he will spent his time with daadi in her room. Daadi tell stories to him and at times Daadu too play with him. Ghatto who was busy with his new found interest of painting looked at daadi with an unconvinced face. "and one more thing dear. He is not chottu baby. He is abhimanyu. Abhi.." He left his crayaon canvas and stood up "but badi daadi he is the chottu baby na. So why cant i call him chottu baby???". Daadi kept the book she was reading on the table and took out her glasses. She pulled Ghatto and with all her strength took him on to her lap. "woohh.. my chotta bheem is becoming bigger day by day!! uum??" she pulled his cheek and tapped her head with his. "you cant call him chottu baby because he is not the youngest one. There are lot of babies yet to come. If you call him chottu, what will you call them all???" "More babies??? woooww... when will they come? when will they come??? tell na badi daadi!!" "ha ha ha ha... i dont know when will they come. But they will be here." ghatto eyes widened and he jumped off from her lap and ran. "ghatto where are you going?? baby??" "one minute badi daadi!!".

He ran towards the family living room where there were discussions going on how to plan a surprise party for daadi and daadu on their 65th wedding anniversary. "mama, mama... when will be more babies come???" he asked in one breathe as he entered the giant room. Hema who was sitting at one end of the old Victorian couch looked surprised. "more babies???" asked a surprised Pritha who was sitting next to Hema on a single chair with a tab in her hand. " yes daadi. Badi daadi said i cant call chottu baby as chottu baby because more babies will come here." Pritha laughed at his innocent face. She placed her glasses over her hair and passed the tab to Kurenu who is sitting on another couch. "My bachcha... come here" she extended her arms to him and ghatto ran towards her. "you are your mother's baby na??" He nodded his head. "like that draupadi aunty also had her baby na??" "i am also her baby!!!" "yes yes.. juz like you both more babies will come." "so all aunties will have babies???" All on a sudden Devika who was having a glass of water suddenly had hiccups. Kurenu started to giggle under her breathe and Vijaya looked away scratching her head. Pritha laughed aloud but didnt comment on it. By the reactions she got she knew exactly what was going on. "okay big guy enough of your doubts. Come here." Hema got up from her seat and took him in her arms. "let me take you for your bath before more weird questions come up!!"

"what weird questions???" Bheem asked as he entered the room."Dont sit on the couch Bheem. Go get yourself cleaned up first" Pritha said in a stretch before bheem or anyone can say something. "but maa...". Pritha gave him a strict look. Bheem held his head down and walked to his room. Behind him Hema chuckled and Ghatto giggled. "what weird questions??" "baby questions!!" Hema answered. "Bheem turned readily and took Ghatto from her hands. "hai big guy you want babies???" "yes dada.. i want a lot of brother, so that i can play with them." "playing is fun. But teasing them is more fun. You know annoying them, snatching things from their hands" "Look teddy... thats not good... you are asking you son to annoy his brothers." suddenly ghatto looked at Hema. "Dont look at her. Havent you seen how dada play with your uncles, especially Nakul Chachu??? umm.." hearing nakul chachu's name Ghatto got excited. "yes dada.. next time i ll do that to abhi baby" Hema's jaw dropped hearing this. She pinched bheem on his shoulder. "ouch... what??" She took ghatto from his hands and placed him on the bed. "abhi is too small. If he annoy him, he will start to cry. He is too small to take it as fun like Nakul" "but i used to annoy him then also!! Hai big guy next time na i'm also with you!!" Hema did a face palm on hearing this. She shook her head. She started to take off ghatto's clothes and as soon as she was about to place the clothes in the laundry basket Ghatto jumped from the bed and ran out naked. "baby,.. come back.. this is not the time to play hide and seek.. baby... " she ran behind him and again after a long time the Pandav Mansion echoed the soft giggles and naughty foot steps.



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Posted: 14 June 2015 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
cute chapter KrishnaaEmbarrassed

Edited by Nonie12345 - 14 June 2015 at 12:20pm

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Posted: 14 June 2015 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
very cute chappie!!ghatto ...can't stop adoring tat champ!!Two lines r 20 lines,everything turns out to b epic wen it cums to my PARAV!!n di expecting more parth-panchali and parth-abhi-panchali scenes!! overall a happy happy chappie!!

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