Brilliantly written chapter!!! What's impressive is that your taking care of all the little details...like Parth sitting on the armrest of Kunti's seat. It doesn't really make a difference where he sits but if you imagine the scene it looks so much family like and a sense of warmth and love is there😊Just one thing. Subhadra is getting trained to become a lawyer. How come was there no participation AT ALL from her side in the discussion about the proceeding in the court of law? It really confused me Jeeji😕. As in she could be the lawyer from the Kuruwars' side. And even if she couldn't cause she was still a student, she could have been a very vital part of the debate that went on later...
I am sorry if my comment was in poor taste but a responsible reader is only one who expresses, what in his/her POV is the best, openly. I say this to such a wonderful and ever evolving writer only with the hope of not being misunderstood and of being a bit help if I may😊
Anyways...Plzzz continue soon😃
n PS waiting for our PP moments😳
Edited by subhadra14 - 8 years ago