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FF: Reflection Of Love~(Manan)~thread#1 (Page 39)

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Posted: 12 February 2015 at 8:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -mehr-

Let me start by first commending on your writing, there are limited good writers in IF and especially in this forum. To be honest I didn't expect many due to expected age group range this forum carries (just too many youngsters,  who haven't tasted life yet to pen down lucrative stories)!  But I am glad to have read your story,  and so far what I have  read, I have truly  enjoyed.

Now coming to writing, it's authentically tough and often befuddled by women when they try to write male POV.  I personally find writing a hero's point of view very difficult, mostly because the men I know in real life are chatty, and at times sensitive, so remember to keep their pov basic and simple. To me men are creatures of action and reaction and talking is secondary, so the only suggestion I can give it don't over-ponder, or over-analyze their pov. Though I feel you have done justice to Manik's pov. Bravo.

As to your story, the attraction (push and pull) between Manik and Nandini is played out so well, I am actually able to connect the dots between them. Their inner turmoil, fighting with one and another is entertaining, just loved reading it.

Now get rid of that writers block, and start penning down the next scene...


wow i'm so glad that you think i'm one of those good limited writers on this forum! that's like one of the most amazing compliments i received!

i know, it was quite difficult to write from manik's POV. 
Nandini's POV's were much simpler to write i can totally understand what u mean by keeping a male's POV simpler. i will try my best to keep in mind whatever you said next time when i write manik's POVs. 
well i'm happy you think manik's POV was well writtenBig smile

thanks you so much for your comment! this means so much to me. it feels like my work is paying off. 
will do the next update sooner.
thanks againBig smile

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Posted: 12 February 2015 at 8:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by appy111

Loved it

thanksBig smile
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Posted: 12 February 2015 at 8:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by BriNi

loved it

thanksBig smile
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Posted: 12 February 2015 at 8:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pkbxo

Yaaay your back Dancing
I loved this! Was nice to know what manik was thinking for once! 
You should do it more often 
Update soon, I'm excited to know what's going to happen in this gameEmbarrassed

hahah yeah!Embarrassed
great i'm happy you liked it, will do manik's pov often Wink
 the next one will be up soon!
thanks
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Posted: 12 February 2015 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
this is raw and cute at the same time.
Please continue soon
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Posted: 13 February 2015 at 1:05am | IP Logged
wow di
super update
manik's pov was awsome
loved the story 
update soon 
can't wait 
thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 February 2015 at 9:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by babita_14388

beautiful,,,,,,,
loved it...

thanks!Big smile
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Posted: 13 February 2015 at 9:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by gauriangel

I thought Manik's pov will take time...
cool u gave it in this chapter itself...He does like her...subconsciously..hehe..

Nice chap..
Thanks for pm..

Pls make the next chapter longer...pls.. 

yeah i'm full of surprises! Embarrassed

yes the bext chapter will b longerBig smile
thanks and keep reading!

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