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Let me start by first commending on your writing, there are
limited good writers in IF and especially in this forum. To be honest I didn't
expect many due to expected age group range this forum carries (just too many youngsters,
who haven't tasted life yet to pen down lucrative stories)! But I am glad to have read your story, and so far what I have read, I have truly enjoyed.
Now coming to writing, it's authentically tough and often befuddled by women when they try to write male POV. I personally find writing a hero's point of view very difficult, mostly because the men I know in real life are chatty, and at times sensitive, so remember to keep their pov basic and simple. To me men are creatures of action and reaction and talking is secondary, so the only suggestion I can give it don't over-ponder, or over-analyze their pov. Though I feel you have done justice to Manik's pov. Bravo.
As to your story, the attraction (push and pull) between
Manik and Nandini is played out so well, I am actually able to connect the dots
between them. Their inner turmoil, fighting with one and another is
entertaining, just loved reading it.
Now get rid of that writers block, and start penning down the next scene...
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