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FF: Reflection Of Love~(Manan)~thread#1 (Page 36)

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Posted: 10 February 2015 at 9:11am | IP Logged
A maniks pov finally.and his mind is well interesting.i like it.i dont know why but i love reading love storys from boys pov.and you killed it.awesome.he is still is denial.that is good.keep him there.and i have a question what about alya? Wasnt she maniks girlfriend?anyways not important.btw loved his threat.so manik style.keep writing sweetheart.and congo on the exam postpon.i know the happiness.
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Posted: 10 February 2015 at 9:22am | IP Logged
Manik's pov!!!! Was waiting for an insight in his mind! He thinks that she is just an infatuation!? That would be cleared soon I bet!
BTW, awesome update!! Loved it!!
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Posted: 10 February 2015 at 9:23am | IP Logged
How cute was that. ...innocence meets hotness. ...I so loved it...
Very creatively put...ClapClap
Thank u
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Posted: 10 February 2015 at 9:37am | IP Logged

Let me start by first commending on your writing, there are limited good writers in IF and especially in this forum. To be honest I didn't expect many due to expected age group range this forum carries (just too many youngsters,  who haven't tasted life yet to pen down lucrative stories)!  But I am glad to have read your story,  and so far what I have  read, I have truly  enjoyed.

Now coming to writing, it's authentically tough and often befuddled by women when they try to write male POV.  I personally find writing a hero's point of view very difficult, mostly because the men I know in real life are chatty, and at times sensitive, so remember to keep their pov basic and simple. To me men are creatures of action and reaction and talking is secondary, so the only suggestion I can give it don't over-ponder, or over-analyze their pov. Though I feel you have done justice to Manik's pov. Bravo.

As to your story, the attraction (push and pull) between Manik and Nandini is played out so well, I am actually able to connect the dots between them. Their inner turmoil, fighting with one and another is entertaining, just loved reading it.

Now get rid of that writers block, and start penning down the next scene...



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Yaaay your back Dancing
I loved this! Was nice to know what manik was thinking for once! 
You should do it more often 
Update soon, I'm excited to know what's going to happen in this gameEmbarrassed

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