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FF: Reflection Of Love~(Manan)~thread#1 (Page 140)

zooni.shah Senior Member

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Posted: 29 July 2015 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
Simply perfect! It just felt soo good reading it it was so natural and real the moments you created between them were just blissful, I could imagine the whole scenario, everything set perfectly from the writing to the explanation of the feelings the lines the way u described everything was just sooo damn good! And am glad that you used the kiss part here honestly I wasn't expecting you to write a kissing scene this soon but you did and am happy that you did coz it was much needed and their talks were simply beautiful, it gave me the feelings of what actually happens in real life a young girl falls for a guy who is just so opposite to her and her wishes, the person who never fits in her life, she is falling for him and that to madly, You gave me the feeling of First Love here, just awesome, KEep doing the great work, your writing gives peace and I hope u maintain the same track.. Take care 

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BlueJayFire Goldie

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Posted: 29 July 2015 at 9:51pm | IP Logged
Writing is an art and you do it so perfect..We need to build the characters..the thoughts, emotions, features..then progress..Its not overnight that people fall in love..but its a progression that you are taking us through so beautifully..Thats what happens in real life too.>And thats why I am so totally in love with your presenting concepts..

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anushi3012 Senior Member

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Posted: 29 July 2015 at 10:39pm | IP Logged
hey hi... trust me I was missing this story...was checking everyday for the update
Well, this chapter turned out to be worth the wait!! Wink
The road segment reminded me of Damon from Vampire Diaries, but Manik is not less!!!

I so like it that Nandini and Manik has been able to talk!!! 

And no miss kiss this time as Nandini gave the green light awwwee!!!
When he bid her goodnight, love his way of doing it!! Wink

Every emotion you described here was beautiful, and like we could feel her blush Blushing

Please do continue, literally dying for your next update, as we want to see what will be their feeling after their kiss... especially Manik, since Nandini of course will be blushing blushing blushing EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

And yes, thank yyooouu sooo muccchh for your efforts. Keep it up with your awesome writing!!! 

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manya_189 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 29 July 2015 at 10:43pm | IP Logged
Your post made my morning :D !!
Loved the emotional Manik.
And they finally kissed!!! Woohooo
Great work!!

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baisakh45 Goldie

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Posted: 29 July 2015 at 11:05pm | IP Logged
it was perfect to the T.i loved it.you are a wonderful writer.i don't want you to rush this story.it deserves perfection.

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jesse93 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 29 July 2015 at 11:07pm | IP Logged
That was seriously mindblowing dear. Hah finally he opened up infront of Nandu, was waiting for it from a long time, aur toh aur that kiss uff was like icing on cake.
Waiting for next update.
Love you dear, continue soon and take care.

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reena002 Newbie

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Posted: 29 July 2015 at 11:08pm | IP Logged
Hi I am member but it's not openn Sleepy
Alishba145 Senior Member

Joined: 24 May 2015
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Posted: 29 July 2015 at 11:13pm | IP Logged
Superb update 
Continue soon 

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