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OS: if only you knew. (NeiRa & RaMan) (Page 2)

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 4:11am | IP Logged
Wow... That was superb !!!
Loved it!!!
Plzzz continue...
And plzz drop me a pm

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 4:37am | IP Logged
too good.. beautiful. pls continue... love to read further. 

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 7:30am | IP Logged
Wow...that was really well written...please do continue. Want to know what happens next!

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 10:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sammie_Ronit

B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L Clap

Thank you Sammie Embarrassed 
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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 10:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by luvrr

very nicely written...i hope this happens soon in the real show also...

Aww Thanks! & Yeah i hope the RaMan fake marriage track finishes this week. 

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 10:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by columbia

Ok I am going to be very honest

I LOVE LOVE your writing! especially the style and the flow it is really keeping me hooked! BUT I have a small problem with the characterization, I don't like how you have written them to be having a war with each other, like this is his win and that is her win, that part I thought doesn't fit in the characterization. 

But please please continue , I would love to see where you take it 

Thank you for being honest. Embarrassed

I honestly didn't think many people would enjoy this piece very much because personally it didn't see this "wow" factor in it. I don't know but this may have been one of my very bad OSs. And, regarding the characterisation, i think i may have gone overboard because i trying hard to portray them as hurt and pissed off at one and another. I wanted to show them as two very egotistical people. But i guess it didn't come across very well and i blame that on my poor writing in this OS. LOLLOL

I think i'll continue after the RaMan fake marriage track is finished. Smile 
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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 10:16pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 12:27am | IP Logged
This is so warmly written. 
I am liking the characterisations a lot. Pl do write sooner Thumbs Up

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