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SS- NEIRA-(Unnamed) - Part -4 UPDATED pG-9 (Page 3)

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 3:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Luv-IKNMP

WOW! Your amazing yaar! The dialouges and the way you described everythin was just fab!! I totally loved it!!... Heart Heart
Do write more!!... Hug


Aww thanks buddy ...glad you loved reading me ... sure the update will be up tonite... :-) Wink

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 2:30pm | IP Logged
PART - 2


Dr. Neil left with moist eyes lost in his thoughts...

Agar Ragini itni mushkile past karke bacho ki parvarish ki toh Aman kya kar raha tha... Woh toh pati hai ragini ka ...ragini air nacho ke prati uska koi zimmedari nahi Banta kya... Aur Dr. Aman toh Patel house mein nahi rehta hai air ragini Patel house mein bacho ke saath... Agar eh dono ki shadi Hui toh dono Ko ek saath hona chahiye... Eh ragini air aman ke shadi ka mazra kya hai much samajh mein nahi araha hai..."

Dr. Neil phone rings... It's estate broker informing about raginis house... Dr Neil asks about the flat and he leaves to meet the property agent and goes for site visit and is left shocked that it is Raginis house which is up for sale. Neil enquires about what is the reason behind this sudden sale and is left flabbergasted knowing that coz of nishis marriage Ragini is selling this house. He without thinking twice gives a go ahead signal to the agent and informs that there is no need to meet the current owner of the flat as he is ready to pay cheque amounts as agreed upon.

In the evening its a medical conference organized at city hospital where Dr. Aman and Dr. Neil are invited as guest speakers under their segment of expertise. Hospital management being one core concept that needed attention to improve the management standards and the drug supply chain management as to the distribution chain and so on to be discussed the admins from various hospitals were also invited.
Coz of which Ragini too is present.

Dr. Aman and Ragini comes separately which leaves Neil to smell something foul on the overall marriage of Ragini and Aman. As on Dr. Aman arrives local doctors wish him and are full on spree questioning him as to when is he planning to get married as they their relatives looking for alliance. Neil gets confused as there are loose ends in the message he got from karan dimpie and Ragini herself. He is now determined to get to roots of this matter. Considering Pam and niveditas fast moves in regards to his marriage he wants to keep his intentions to self and work on the issue. Ragini comes and the presentation from each hospital is kept before the panel to review the standard that they are following.

Ragini is called on the dias with her mother maiden name... Ragini Patel but as per Neil it has to be Ragini Aman Malhotra. He feels completely out of loop but manages well.

On the other hand at karans house talks are full on for Agams birthday and at patels for Aravs birthday. Agam makes it very clear that he does t want any party and he wants to spend the day with his mom at her place while Arav starts cribbing about his bike and raginis partial treatment by saving everything for Nishi as her marriage is nearby.
Also talks rubbish about her selling the house and becoming homeless. A shaken ragini goes to her room and breaks down thinking what efforts were left in her upbringing.

In the night, Neil in his room recollecting days events and the info he could capture about ragini and wonders where is the disconnect while sipping a peg of scotch.

Next day morning Agam request Neil that he wants to celebrate with his twin bro Aarav and Mom. Before Neil could think of anything Niveditha comes and says that she is planning for a party on the occasion of Agams birthday but he doesn't show any interest whole Pam orders agam that he is celebrating his b'day in the way she wishes which leaves Agam disappointed but he gathers his strength to resist Pam and clears that no matter come what may he will be with his mom and leaves.

Pam rebukes Ranvir in this matter and ran it heads to hospital to meet ragini who is on leave as she is out for marriage shopping for Nishi. He is informed that she can drop in anytime for checking days invoices and few other admin activities. He leaves his number with reception to keep him posted if the lady is in there.

In a midst all this, Neil who is breaking his head to know what the hell is the truth with ragini and Aman though one side believes that they are married his inner self who still is immensely in love with his ex wife and mother of his kids is resisting to accept the reality. Also from other angle the hurt that if he couldn't move on being a man after leaving her how could she? Is torturing his male ego.

He receives a call from Nishi asking him to join marriage shopping. At first he bluntly rejects but later joins them and doesn't find Aman in the group. Nishi is selecting at the wide range of lahengas and bridal wear while ragini excuses and goes to side and is selling her jewelry for   remaking into new ones. Neil who already has turned on his investigative cap on follows her...while giving all the jewelry she points out her mangalsutra which was the symbol of their marriage. She takes the chain back and gives off all the jewelry. Looking at the chain she is lost in her nostalgic thoughts while Neil finds it strange that she still has kept it with her and his heart sheds a silent tear but somewhere deep in his heart he started to feel that he is seeing his wife the mother of his kids instead of a lady who moved on after he broke up with her...

His heart craves to talk with her... But he controls himself and finally shopping is done. In the entire process, Neils credit card gets mixed up with the shopping baggage and Ragini finds it and decides to visit him and give away his card.

Here Niveditha is in full geared mode preparing cake for Agams birthday. She is full on showing off her skills to Neil. He steps inside the kitchen to have some water she is showing him what all she did that day and in the process Neil finds some flour on her hairs and face and helps her wiping off with tissue. For his unfortunate fate ragini just then coMes only to see these two together and says " sorry mein woh aapke lonlely moment Ko disturb kiya par aapke much cheezein mere bag mein matlab Nishi ke bag mein reh gaye toh socha aapko dedu taki sap tension na le isliye chali aayi... Mujhe maaf kardijiye mujhe knock karni chahiye thi..."

Niveditha: Arey ragini waisi koi baat nahi jaisa Tum samajh rahi ho... Woh tohvmeon bass agam ke birthday PE surprise Dena chahti tho toh mein cake bana rahi hi air Ata pura Baal pe ...toh Neil help kar rahe the waise kal Ko agar mere sure Neil ke shadi hone ke baad agam mere beta hoga na... Toh abhi se mein use jaan ne ki koshish kar rahi hu... And toucheS Neils shoulders...

Raginis running nose on reddening her face she rubbing the bridge of her nose says Woh meta saga beta hai aur mein bhi much tayari kar chuki hi...woh mujhe call karke request kiya hai Ko woh kal mere saath rehna chahta hai... Air waise bhi jitne jaayaz mere rishta hai usle sath utna jayaz shayal is duniya mein koyi bhi rishta hoga... Manti hi hum pichle 15 saal door hai par phir bhi khoon ke risthey kabhi pheeky nahi padte..."
Neil observes her possessiveness for her kids and her stand in terms of her relation mentally but wantedly says... " jaayaz rishton ke barein mein Tu na bolo toh teek hoga ragini... Matlab mein jaayaz tareekey se rishta jodunga kisi ke saath aur zaahir si baat hai agar niveditha agam Ko jaan na chahti ho toh... Isme tujhe kyun farak pad raha hai and turns to niveditha wiping the flour...

Raginis anger forgets limits by looking at that... She answers back..." Sach hi kaha aapne... Aapke jaayaz aur najaayaz dosti ya rishton se mujhe koi farak nahi pasta aur na mein utaaavli ho rahi hi jaanke dekhne keliye... Mein toh bass eh card dene ayi thi and arrogantly throws the card on his face and leaves.

Smirking Neil thinks that of she really did move on in her life why is his closeness with niveditha affecting her and recollects her cute fight with him in his past when he supported his friend and not her and feels contented... The moment she leaves he moves back from nivedita and leaves...

In his room he is in his own world recollecting her expressions when she saw him close with niveditha, the mangalsutra event and he calls Nishi.

Nishi who is elated to see her father calling her receives call but is unable to talk to freely due to raginis presence in her room...before Neil could ask anything... Nishi says " ha bolo neelam mujhe padna hai abhi aur mom mujhe kal haha nahi bhejegi Aravs birthday hai aur tujhe toh pata hai na mom kitni strict hai... Exams ki date agaye toh no phone calls no outing with friends... Air toh aur Tu ne raat ke 10 Ko phone kyu ki...matlab Tu bhool gayi kya meinne tujhe bataya na raat ke 8 ke baad mein phone calls nahi leti aur na baahar jati... Kal call karo pls sorry yaar ...

Neil who is on the other side tries hard to control his laughter looking at the way his daughter is scared of Ragini and is cooking up stories on one hand and also feels sad that her kids are preferring to fool her for their freedom... When he is about to cut the call he hears raginiz voice and requests Nishi not to cut the call...

Ragini goes on: Nishi tumhare friends Ko koi kaam nahi hai kya...koi bhala raat Ko padne ki bajaye phones karte kya... And so on...

While arav comes and asks for bike...but ragini denies and he starts off his fight as he is becoming a sacrificing lamb being only male in the family for which ragini clears that she doesn't require any male presence in her family to fulfill her responsibilities and till date she single handedly managed everything and leaves.

The word single handedly managing and doesn't require any male presence hits his brains... And makes him restless ...



Here ends the update of this part ... Dear friends if you really liked this update pls kindly hit like and share your views ... Will continue if I get your share of interest in reading me


Adios and signing off

-shakti

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 3:03pm | IP Logged
Nice update. Do continue.
Liked the phone conversation concept of disclosing Ragini fake marriage.

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 3:05pm | IP Logged
Trying to keep it natural without OTT of Pam dear... So bit slow ... @aati glad you liked it

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 3:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Romanticfreak

Trying to keep it natural without OTT of Pam dear... So bit slow ... @aati glad you liked it

Thanks for no Pam!! Wink
Everyone is better than her. 

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 3:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aati1429

Originally posted by Romanticfreak

Trying to keep it natural without OTT of Pam dear... So bit slow ... @aati glad you liked it


Thanks for no Pam!!Wink
Everyone is better than her.


ROFL Pam is big time SPAM even in our imaginations lol

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 4:49pm | IP Logged
Wonderfully written... please continue ...could really feel all the scenes happening on screen... dialogues, expressions - Bang on!!... and special thanks for not giving Pam any space here ... 

Edited by smgayatri72 - 27 December 2014 at 4:54pm

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Posted: 27 December 2014 at 4:57pm | IP Logged
very well written...liked the fact that Dr. Neil  is trying to put the pieces together to find out about Ragini and her  husband  Dr. Aman...??!!SmileSmile

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