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Taste of motherhood- an ishra ff- chap6-pg15 (Page 3)

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 5:41am | IP Logged
Great story
Its an interesting concept
Continue soon!

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 6:24am | IP Logged
wow... so interesting yaar..but ver heart touching update... so namita is with shagun... namita pain pictured nicely  ...
beautifully written...

plz update soon 
eagerly waiting

thank u 
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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 8:22am | IP Logged
A completely unique and very emotional story ... interesting ...Thumbs Up 
Continue soon and Please PM me ... Smile
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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 10:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by The_Imane

Great story
Its an interesting concept
Continue soon!
thnxx..update ll b soon
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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 10:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ekta979

A completely unique and very emotional story ... interesting ...Thumbs Up 
Continue soon and Please PM me ... Smile
yup surely
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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 10:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Akshatha19

wow... so interesting yaar..but ver heart touching update... so namita is with shagun... namita pain pictured nicely  ...
beautifully written...

plz update soon 
eagerly waiting

thank u 
update ll b soon..

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 9:42pm | IP Logged
thnxx for all ur comments.. here goes second chap
Chapter-2
 
Ishita left her daughters room and walked towards her own..As she entered she was stuck at the door luking at the mesmerizing view..
in front of her.. there stood India's best business tycoon THE RAMAN KUMAR BHALLA...the man in his 50's still had stunning luks of sum1 in 20's.. his smile made young grls go gaga.. his personality made grls run behind him.. and his romance still skipped ishita's heartbeat.
he saw her staring at him.. he went near her and just snapped her out of her thoughts..
ishita"aaj kuch special? waise kafi ache lag rahe ho.."
raman"oh my god.. my wife praising me.. waise shayad tum abh buddhi hogai ho.. bcoz aaj kal tumhe ache se dikhta nahi hai.. i always get ready well.. aise nahi padti ladkiya mere piche.."
ishita just smirked..
raman"waise yahan koi insecure ho raha hai kya?"
ishita denied it and just held his collar" budhav jada udo mat.. char char bache hain tumhare.. so apne limit main raho.. aur haan ye shinning maarne ki age ab ansh and adi ki hai so their self assumed handsum dad must stay a step behind"
ishita left from their walking towards mirror adjusting her hairs...
raman goes near her and says" ohh world accepted budiya.. jada sajo mat.. waise bhi sivay buddhe aur chot bache aata kaun hai tumhare clinic main? so make up pe paise waste karo mat.. and bhullo mat tum bhi char char bachon ki maa ho... and abhi ruhi aur nami..."
raman just held his tongue in his teeth as he was about to say namita...
namita.. his youngest child.. he was biological father of his each child.. and so he assumed he had more right over them than their self accepted moms.. he knew adi and ruhi loved ishita more than him but then he sumtym used to tease them calling her to b their stepmom.. and ansh.. blessed with charming luks like his father.. was apple of everybody's eye...  
but then namita.. how did she luk? how tall she was? how beautiful her smile was? raman knew nothing..the only memory he had with her was wen he heard her crying for the first tym after she was delivered.. wen dr. tld raman he was blessed wit a 
daughter he was on cloud nine.. amma and mummy hugged each other telling another laxmi in their house.. but then their happiness was shadowed by a cunning lady..
raman was more happy for the 
daughter than his son as he felt daughters are the best treasure a man has.. and now his jewel box was filled..
but his past deals made a hole in his bag and tuk away his most precious jewel from them..his namita...
ishita weeped in memory of their daughter and also his family shedded tears for his 
daughter and her fate.. but then tears were nvr for him.. he faught all worst and stood strong.. but his pillow displayed his grief.. his pain.. his love for his long lost daughter
namita had a mother.. good or bad.. she had sum1.. but she wud nvr get a father.. her father.. yes raman was her father..
raman came in reality.. ishita was staring at him.. he said sorry holding his ears..ishita smiled wit a nod
ishita says" hope u remember kal ansh aur namita ka bday hai..and u have already bought their present"
raman nods saying"ofcourse and this tym aswell my gft ll be best among our.."
ishita says"ansh only lyks a gft by its price and has no feelings for the love behind it.. and ya dnt forget i always win for adi and ruhi"
raman agrees
raman says he has to leave as he is getting late..
they came near dinning and he sat on the table..
he called sum1 and asked them to deposit 5 lakhs in namita's account..
ishita was shocked..
raman said" main adi ruhi ansh ke har bday pe unke account main 5 lacs deposit karta hoon.. as u have limited their pocket money they can use it wenevr they need and namita bhi meri bachi hai.. i dunno whr she is.. but uska bhi ispe pura haq hai.. wen she ll get back to us.. i ll give all this money to her.. as raman kumar bhalla apne kisi bache se kam ya jada pyaar nahi karta hai.. chae woh uske paas ho ya na hoo"
ishita got tears in her eyes.. raman wiped it and kissed her forehead and left from there..

In mumbai
as  the poor soul saw the man at the door.. she was sure that there will be another show of their respect getting tarnished..

she walked towards those greedy eyes.. with no penny in her hand she approached him..
the man asked for his dues.. the grl had nthng in her wallet except few chillars and some notes,,
that greedy eyes were demanding for those.. but she also had sumthing in her wallet the list of money lenders her mom tuk loan from..

that grl had no energy to fight with the man whom inspite denied gave her mom that loan to waste in her liquor and then force them with big loans..

she just showed him, her empty pocket and the few chillars and notes in her wallet.. the man just tuk it and counted that to 150 and left from there..

the grl just sat at the door shocked.. no tears from her eyes.. it was months last week and having such few money in her wallet was also a blessing to her but then that rascal tuk away that aswell
now still the month had 5 days to go.. 5 days for her to get her salary.. 5 days she had to spent wit 0 amount in her hand..

she just sat there still with tears automatically rolling down her cheeks.
(yes, the daughter of millionaire sat there.. were did she know lakhs of rupees were deposited in her account at the same tym.. the account and the bank she felt only rich ppl had)
 
to be continued..


Edited by ragnacrazy - 25 December 2014 at 11:30pm

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 9:50pm | IP Logged
very emotnal...
want to slap shagun...
pls yar itna emotnal parts math liko...im alrdy crying...aur emotnal tho shayad updte ke baad bhi rovonga...


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