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Taste of motherhood- an ishra ff- chap6-pg15

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Posted: 24 December 2014 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
Hey m newbie in writing but a silent reader of this group since months..
Reading all those beautifully scripted ff os ts as m really inspired to write my own story..
My story has no reference wit the on gng track but it ll take all my readers to 20 yr ahead of ishra's lyf..
Its about a mother who lost inspite winning and about child who got nothing inspite having everything
..

Prologue
In Delhi
Ishita sat on sofa of bhalla mansion thinking about the past 20 yrs of her lyf.. Her lyf tym a drastic turn after ahe married Raman the love of her lyf. She tasted motherhood from ruhi..became her ishima. Got adi the heir of bhalla mansion and also she herself conceived twins.. yes twins ansh and namita.
She was always tagged wit an infertile tag but this two angels made her taste the journey of motherhood.. they were symbol of her and Raman's love and tapasya of her mamyji and amma and blessing of pappaji and appa and wishes of her ruhi and adi.
The day wen she gave birth to her twins was most unforgettable day of her lyf.. yes she became a fleshed mother.. The happiness in Raman' s eye was beyond measure..
But then it was her fate tht nvr blessed her wit prolonged happiness.
Yes she lost her namita to a devil..yes to a bitch whom she nurtured in her own garden..yes she lost her namita who was 5 mins younger to her twin brother and therefore the youngest among the whole bhalla and iyer
But she thanked God tht at least her namita was alive sumwhr..
But the mother inside her died for the ans for her questions..
DID THE THING SHE DO WAS RIGHT???WHR IS NAMITA???



In Mumbai
Walked a girl in 20's hearing the cries of her mom..
 
prologue-page1
chapter1-page1
chapter2-page3
chapter3-page5
chapter4-page7
chapter5-page11
chapter6-page15

do tell me if I must continue??


Edited by ragnacrazy - 17 April 2015 at 5:13am

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Posted: 24 December 2014 at 5:41pm | IP Logged
Good start!continue soon! 

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Posted: 24 December 2014 at 6:10pm | IP Logged
nice start...
plz continue soon
PM me if possible...

thank u

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Posted: 24 December 2014 at 6:33pm | IP Logged
intrstng...
dont say me namtha is with shagun...

pm me if poss...
continue soon...

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 12:20am | IP Logged
thnxx for ur lyks..
update is on its way
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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 12:24am | IP Logged
awesome start
do continue soon
n pm me

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 12:56am | IP Logged
Chapter 1
In mumbai
Walked a grl in her 20's towards her mom's cry. her mom was lying on floor in a drunk state and there was a lots of commotion surrounding her. the grl just managed herself among the crowd and got inside to meet her mom. yes her mom in 40's was on street in a drunk state with all people around abusing her nature.
the grl who already was already agited seeing her mom such a way just gave a disjusted look to those standing there  and helped her mom get up.
yes her mom who mite have just broke up with her nth boyfrnd and now njoyng its grief by drinking and lying on the street embarassing all standing there.
the grl managed her mom and tuk her to their house making a way outside the watching crowd. the grl entered their one bedroom flat and made her mom lie on the bed covering her.
all ladies in that colony were gossiping about this daily seen of that family. a typical show they always possessed.. one among them said y dnt they take out the family out of their decent colony but one among them stopped her saying no the daughter of that lady was a sweetheart and its just her and her sweet talks that people in that area dnt wish to take those people out of the colony. the other woman agreed and said the grl really has some other blood and she dnt possess any high fandu quality of her mom.
the grl stood at the threshold of her mom's bedroom luking at her horrible condition with just a tear in her a eye.
she cursed that nth boyfrnd of her mom.
and then she cursed that lady who is responsible for her such condition. ya their condition in which her dad was stole by a lady.
her dad and her sibblings who were black magiced by a devil..
she wished tht she was never born.. her birth..the day her mom lost all. yes she lost her husband to a woman.. she lost her family and ya her two elder siblings... she hated that lady and her dad to core.. and never ever in her life she wish to c their faces
their was knock on the door with the money lender waiting for his dues.
seeing him standing at door made the grl feel it was the worst day of her life..
she had no penny in her hand to pay his dues..
 
(yes, to say she was daughter of india's best ceo and  one of richest man in India.. but her fate copied that of her flesh mom.. the grl born with a silver spoon.. had no penny except tears..)
 
In Delhi
Ishita's thought process was interrupted by the high volume music in ansh's room. she got up with a curve on her lips and went near his room...
she went inside his room and lowered the volume of his music player..
sudden interruption made ansh yell at his mom. ishita asked him to b calm as its ruhi's exam in a week and she is studing and also his grandparents are sleeping so its better he dnt make any loud music...
but he avoids her saying its his bday tmrw and as there will be sum grand party by his dad tmrw and for tht he has to prepare a dance for celebration.
ishita remembered that day.. 20 yrs b4.. she bcame mother.. and 20 yrs b4 she lost her daughter in a deal.. she lost the deal and lost her daughter..
she left the room and entered another locked room which was decorated in a grls fashion wit pink cushions pink curtains and pink walls.
and on one of the wall hanged the framed photo of her namita..
a single snap she had that too wch was taken by romi at the tym she conceived, with the fear the child do not get misplaced in hospital..
and on the bed lied presents of her daughter for each of her birthday from each family member..
she just cried luking at her photo..
and said she is really sorry..
and then she opened a drawer which had a gold chain.. the first gft she brought for both her kids and said she ll always love her namita and will wait for her..
 
to b continued..


Edited by ragnacrazy - 25 December 2014 at 11:25pm

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 1:20am | IP Logged
very eomtnal nd heart touching updte...
so shahun madam namitha ko ishra ki against kar diya...

waitng fr nxt...

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