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Aryan & Manansvi {ArSvi} SS ~ Murder Investigation ( Chap 1 pg : 2 (Page 2)

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 5:03am | IP Logged
 
Chapter 1

Aryan entering the house seeing police 

arresting Amrita . 

Aryan screams Chachi and gets up.

No it was not a nightmare it was reality 

that took place few days ago. 

Aryan know his Chachi is innocent & 

he need to prove .                                  

Aryan ( To himself ) : Mai Chachi ko kuch

 nahi hona dunga . 

He picks his phone & Calls Manansvi 

[ the person whom he can trust & loves 

what ... LOVE well yes Love but he 

is unaware of his feelings ] 

Aryan : Manansvi tum mujhsa adha 

ghanta (half & hour) mai Ankita ka 

ghar per milo .                 

After Half & Hour

Aryan : Manansvi tum bhar kyu khadhi ho.

Manansvi : vo Watchman Room no 301 

mai jana hi nahi de rha hai kharha

 hai ki police ka orders hai jab tak case

 khatam nahi ho jata koi andhar nahi ja sakta.

Aryan holds Manansvi's hand and takes her

 Inside the compound . 

Watchman sees them & Stops. 

Watchman : Arrr Arrr kha ja rha ho ?

 Kisa milana hai ? 

Aur tum vahi ladki ho na jo kuch daar

 palha room no 301 mai jana chahti thi. 

Ek baar boli baat samajh nahi aati

Aryan takes a paper &

 hand it over to Watchman 

Aryan : Court ka special order hai . 

Watchman : mujha farak nahi padhta hai .     

Aryan : Lakin Mujha padta hai ...

 ( moving watchmans stick which he had kept) 

Aur jab mujha padta hai to 

Saamne wale ke Sehat per bhi dikhne lagta hai .

Samjha ya samjau .

Saying this he moves Manansvi starring him . 

Aryan : What (With a slight smile) 

Manansvi Touches his mulsular shoulder 

with her tiny figure .     

Aryan : Paaa.. pagal ho ga .. pagal ho gai hai.

Manansvi : Kuch nahi chal.     

Manansvi moves leaving Aryan behind in thoughts.  

Aryan : Manansvi ki bachi javab to de ka ja .

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 5:04am | IP Logged
Pm later 
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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 5:12am | IP Logged
nice. amazing .
arrey wah sys yaha bhi aa gaya.LOL
cont soon.

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 8:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dinazz

nice. amazing .
arrey wah sys yaha bhi aa gaya.LOL
cont soon.

 
 
Thanks Big smile 

SYS ka jadoo ... jispa ho gaya 

Samjho vo gaya LOL LOL

Well there was no SYS .

When i pasted the story on IF . 

I realised that After such an amazing 

Dialogue SYS to banta hai LOLLOL

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 9:51am | IP Logged
nice. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 10:08am | IP Logged
awesome update continue soon
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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 9:45pm | IP Logged
Awesome start dear...
Just loved it...
Do continue soon
Angel_Arya Goldie
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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 3:48am | IP Logged
nice start...
'Samjhe ya samjhaun'   Wink
oh...how much i missed this... Day Dreaming
well...well...
The start is very nice
just as Aryan does...
Well written
Aryan and manasvi go on the murder spot
the guard was too rude Angry
but Aryan's sys ne magic kr diya LOL

conti soon
thanks for the pm

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