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ArShi SS: Shine My Life ~ Ch 5 in Page 78 [6/Aug] (Page 61)

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Posted: 21 March 2015 at 9:26am | IP Logged
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Posted: 21 March 2015 at 9:41am | IP Logged
Sorry for not replying earlier. I was going through a phase of being mad at every piece of excellent writing that made be jealous of the protagonists' love.
Yeah, petty, I know. Sue me. All your fault for bringing their love alive with words. 
I think I am a big fan of your Arnav. Not so much Khushi. But ArnavHeart

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Posted: 21 March 2015 at 10:03am | IP Logged
well written update...Thumbs Up

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Posted: 21 March 2015 at 10:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by canapoem

Naina, this has to be the best update you have written so far. Hats off you.Clap
You are still keeping the mystery quotient intact and giving us details about the lovely moments they shared as a couple in the recent past. So both the families were happy with their relationship. Probably they had already started planning a wedding soon. Then why did Arnav drive her away from him?

And Shyam is snakewa here too. He sounds very evilish. Has she kidnapped Khushi and her family?

I loved the first part too where you have described the emotional turmoil Arnav is undergoing now with such fine details. I loved how he even went ahead to seek his father's love and comfort when he  needed it badly.

Finally one question, any idea how long are very in the story? Have we reached the midpoint?


Wowww... Getting hats off from one of the best critic...  I am so so happy. Smile

Midpoint.. already??? NO. It would be approx 15+1 chaps. Don't worry mystery won't be for long. It would be fast from coming updates. And, story won't be dragged.. Smile Smile

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Posted: 21 March 2015 at 10:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Chaverah_TFC

Oh my my..
First things first, though d mystery is still under wrap, d possibilities of d ultimatum have been brought to light, which again, are a lot.

I loved d detailed description of his trauma, d past n comparison with future. At points, it really seemed poetic. Bravo!

 D little details, d simple touches.. Hmm..sensual! 

D pain, d love, d longing n fears.. Perfectly emoted. Visualizing was quite easy n effective. Great job there!

D meet with d in laws was definitely a shocker. Loved it.

Now that its d past is almost meeting d present, I wonder what u have in store for us. Waiting eagerly.

Love&Hugs.

Thank you, Candy...Every word means a lot.. Smile Smile
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Posted: 21 March 2015 at 10:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pinky.Raizada

Yemani varnichanu ee update ni..

OMG, I can't see Arnav all sad, You are making my hubby sad...Cry. Nannu maa ayana ni thondaraga kalupu please, can't take the seperation. 

Flashback was just...Blushing. NO MORE WORDS TO DESCRIBE BETTER THAN THAT EMOTION. 

Thanks Pinky... Smile

Yemani varninchanu ante, podigavanukonaa??? LOL

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Posted: 21 March 2015 at 10:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 6thelement.

Thanks for highlighting my post in your update.Tongue

Still left in mystery..? i thought it will be open with this chap.
Anyways excellent portrayal of the flashback and current situations.Clap



Yep, little more suspense. Thanks a lot, dear... Your comment is always special to me. Love & Hugs... Hug Heart Hug
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Posted: 21 March 2015 at 10:51am | IP Logged
you are going on building the suspense waiting to know how they got seperated

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