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ArShi SS: Shine My Life ~ Ch 5 in Page 78 [6/Aug] (Page 51)

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Posted: 19 March 2015 at 8:57am | IP Logged


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TwisterGirl Goldie

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Posted: 19 March 2015 at 9:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -NainaS-

Originally posted by shalini.ranjan

Naina, when I started with the prologue...I felt that they are already married with Khushi waking up in his arms and...and then...wait a min...<go back and read the last line again>...Arnav jumped out of the window? What the...! not married as interesting..lets continue...Mistakes? Oh this is gonna be a sad story???

Chapter 1-

Oh so Arnav is missing her...he left her? He is alone now and is finding solace in it!

The flashback gave me a glimpse of the rude and arrogant ASR that was missing so far...Their first meeting was extraordinary...wait is it just me or you do have a penchant for making the first Arshi meet most interesting as ever?

Your way of writing is amazing Naina...I especially like the metaphoric comparison of the downpour turned to soft drizzle just like his thoughts.' And the effect Khushi had on him the vigour to seal the deal...amazing connect!

A moment of confession...I was so engrossed in the flashback that I too jumped out of my reverie as Arnav came back to the present...

Nice work Naina...I gotta go now...but I will come back, read the rest of the parts and be sure to drop a word or two to you...take care! 


PS. If you have some spare time, do check out my Arshi FF: The Alternate Universe- Retelling IPKKND...(Link in Signature) will love to hear what you think about it...No Pressure though Wink

OMG, I just love ur comment. Your every word means a lot. U being a writer, I am very glad for getting this feedback from u.. Hug

Hmmm... he is sad now. But, this isn't an Sad story. Coz only reason, I can't see them sad myself.

Yep, and u caught it right. I want to make their every first meets as special as possible. 

And, yeah I have some time back bookmarked ur story, and was waiting for some time to read it. I will update u with my comments for sure. Thanks again, dear.. Smile Smile sweet of you to actually reply to my comment...when I wasn't expecting one Wink
I know, even I cant see them am sure you are going to next sky-rocket them into the zenith of passion...LOL

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canapoem IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 March 2015 at 9:30am | IP Logged
Naina, this has to be the best update you have written so far. Hats off you.Clap
You are still keeping the mystery quotient intact and giving us details about the lovely moments they shared as a couple in the recent past. So both the families were happy with their relationship. Probably they had already started planning a wedding soon. Then why did Arnav drive her away from him?

And Shyam is snakewa here too. He sounds very evilish. Has she kidnapped Khushi and her family?

I loved the first part too where you have described the emotional turmoil Arnav is undergoing now with such fine details. I loved how he even went ahead to seek his father's love and comfort when he  needed it badly.

Finally one question, any idea how long are very in the story? Have we reached the midpoint?

Edited by canapoem - 20 March 2015 at 7:06am

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candyjan IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 19 March 2015 at 9:41am | IP Logged
Thats awesome dear
What happen to khushi

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_Chaverah_ IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 March 2015 at 9:54am | IP Logged
Oh my my..
First things first, though d mystery is still under wrap, d possibilities of d ultimatum have been brought to light, which again, are a lot.

I loved d detailed description of his trauma, d past n comparison with future. At points, it really seemed poetic. Bravo!

 D little details, d simple touches.. Hmm..sensual! 

D pain, d love, d longing n fears.. Perfectly emoted. Visualizing was quite easy n effective. Great job there!

D meet with d in laws was definitely a shocker. Loved it.

Now that its d past is almost meeting d present, I wonder what u have in store for us. Waiting eagerly.


Edited by Chaverah_TFC - 19 March 2015 at 10:07pm

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shekha2012 Goldie

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Posted: 19 March 2015 at 10:00am | IP Logged
ARSHI was sooo in love and what really happen

Edited by shekha2012 - 19 March 2015 at 10:13am

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Naina7 Goldie

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Posted: 19 March 2015 at 10:38am | IP Logged
Posted both parts of Chap 4.

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russelskhushi IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 March 2015 at 11:14am | IP Logged
the mystery is getting really interesting... wonder where the gupta's vanished !!

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