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ArShi SS: Shine My Life ~ Ch 5 in Page 78 [6/Aug] (Page 15)

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Posted: 12 February 2015 at 10:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pinky.Raizada

Awesome Update, Thanks for the update.

Sagam nidra lo rasinattu vunna...what a stupid comment.

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Posted: 12 February 2015 at 10:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Chaverah_TFC

Oh my my!!!!
 
That was an amazing!!

*donning the investigation cap n pulling up my sleeves *

Arshi had a beautiful relation. Now I'm not sure if it is marital or courtship, but, whatsoever, it was heart rendering and true.

But now she's not with him n he says blame me, I left her for her safety.

He's suffering n hallucinating.

Travelling in times, living in memories, passing away d future mechanically.

And now, why d hell did he do whatever he did?

Lady, you've rocked in emoting the pain. Trust me, I was getting all senti here. Bravo! Job done to perfection.

While I loved n grinned at his memories, I couldn't keep a lid over his present. I know its too much a dwelling, given that its just the first chapter, yet, but as I said, d reader in me won't stop her assumptions, u see.

I loved this particular line, a lot. Uv nailed it!

His heart pained more with these memories but he would rather enjoy the distress of their presence than the emptiness of their absence.


Great going buddy!



P.s: 
That is highly over whelming. Being dedicated an entire work is not something I could ever even think of. I have no words to say how grateful n humbled I am. Love you.


Candy, nee comments chadivi anandham thone nidra kuda pattaledu naaku... Smile
Am so happy.. n thanks a ton, dear !!

I was so unsure if I could describe his pain correctly or not. This SS is to show case an madly in love Arnav.

@Bold: I felt so connected when I added that line. 

And, about dedicating I really really mean it. Mainly after reading all 4 of ur stories, I got the Zeal of attempting this. I will always be grateful for this. I think u didn't even make ur come back when I dedicated this to u. 

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Posted: 12 February 2015 at 11:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pinky.Raizada

Originally posted by Pinky.Raizada

Awesome Update, Thanks for the update.

Sagam nidra lo rasinattu vunna...what a stupid comment.

Nidra lo kuda raasthuntava??

I really have a question. U stay in US.. I see u'll be active in the morning.. in the night.. entire day.. kind of... Asalu nidra pothava eppudaina ??

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Posted: 12 February 2015 at 11:11pm | IP Logged
Ippdudu manchiga comment rastha. Intha manchi chapter atla chethaga yela comment raasano teliyadu.

Khushi ki yem ayindi...naaku teliyali...telisi teerali. (Seethayya...LOL)

Arnav yentha manchigunnado, yetlina naa mogudu kada..Super ga vuntadu.

twaraga update cheyi.

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Posted: 12 February 2015 at 11:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -NainaS-

Originally posted by Pinky.Raizada

Originally posted by Pinky.Raizada

Awesome Update, Thanks for the update.

Sagam nidra lo rasinattu vunna...what a stupid comment.

Nidra lo kuda raasthuntava??

I really have a question. U stay in US.. I see u'll be active in the morning.. in the night.. entire day.. kind of... Asalu nidra pothava eppudaina ??

My sleeping time is 5AM to 11PM EST, Naaku night lo melukovadam ante istam.
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Posted: 12 February 2015 at 11:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pinky.Raizada

Ippdudu manchiga comment rastha. Intha manchi chapter atla chethaga yela comment raasano teliyadu.

Khushi ki yem ayindi...naaku teliyali...telisi teerali. (Seethayya...LOL)

Arnav yentha manchigunnado, yetlina naa mogudu kada..Super ga vuntadu.

twaraga update cheyi.

Telusthundhi.. telisi teeruthundhi.. twaralo... Athi twaralo...Wink

That was nice dialogue, but I hate that man (Seethayya)

Nee mogudu ani fix aipoyava ? Mari Mahesh/Prabhas/Arjun paristhithi enti?

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Posted: 12 February 2015 at 11:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pinky.Raizada

Originally posted by -NainaS-

Originally posted by Pinky.Raizada

Originally posted by Pinky.Raizada

Awesome Update, Thanks for the update.

Sagam nidra lo rasinattu vunna...what a stupid comment.

Nidra lo kuda raasthuntava??

I really have a question. U stay in US.. I see u'll be active in the morning.. in the night.. entire day.. kind of... Asalu nidra pothava eppudaina ??

My sleeping time is 5AM to 11PM EST, Naaku night lo melukovadam ante istam.

U must be kidding me.. U sleep for 18 hrs?? 18 FULL HOURS ???? Really !!??

Wowww... Unbelievable !!

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Posted: 12 February 2015 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -NainaS-

Originally posted by Pinky.Raizada

Ippdudu manchiga comment rastha. Intha manchi chapter atla chethaga yela comment raasano teliyadu.

Khushi ki yem ayindi...naaku teliyali...telisi teerali. (Seethayya...LOL)

Arnav yentha manchigunnado, yetlina naa mogudu kada..Super ga vuntadu.

twaraga update cheyi.

Telusthundhi.. telisi teeruthundhi.. twaralo... Athi twaralo...Wink

That was nice dialogue, but I hate that man (Seethayya)

Nee mogudu ani fix aipoyava ? Mari Mahesh/Prabhas/Arjun paristhithi enti?


Valladi oka level, Arnav di oka level...

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