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ArShi SS: Shine My Life ~ Ch 5 in Page 78 [6/Aug] - Page 30

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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: kushiarnav1

nice chapter naina...the suspense u r building up while reading my BP went upπŸ˜†...what happend to kushi???hope she is safe and sound...

arnav shame ,guilty, helplessness and his love for kushi written nicely...can not wait to read next chapter..how he solve this puzzle...

wow that letter tells everything about kushi, how innocent and pure she is...

thanks for the lovely chapter...


Thanks dear. BP went up, so I succeeded in writing well.. πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: pree2605

Awesome..

Firstly why did dey break up??or why did arnav break up??nd where is khushi??is she been kidnapped??thn whom??how is shyam related???a huge number of questions...waiting to gt d answers in coming chpts..
thnxx fr pm


Thank u... Little more patience dear. U'll get all the answers one by one.. πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: addicted25

Naina ! where did Shyam jha come from and why is he involved...?, where has the rest of the family gone? What happened to the security he put in place? OK too many questions, I realise you will give us the answers all in good time.. I just cant wait. This story has now got me curious. Why did he leave?...arghh too may questions.. patience was never a good point. Please update soon! Ps love your writing!


Thank u... πŸ€— πŸ€—

U'll get all answers in good time.. Hopefully some will be clarified in the coming update.. !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: Pinky.Raizada

Khushi ki yemindi...More flashback pleejj


Arnav ni choosthe yedupu vasthundi...


Ayyo edavaku Pinky.. Koncham diff ga try cheddam anukunte, Arnav ki paapam ee kastam tappaledu.. πŸ˜³
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: Roop_P

Nice updateπŸ‘

Since you didn't give anything which can help tracking back towards Khushi and her kidnapping so I will wait for it but it might help Arnav in return .He might see the light ,that not everyone around is not going to be in trouble or something like that.Must say his ways of self destructions are not so like his character.


Thank you.. πŸ˜Š.. Yes, they are very unlike his character, and that's what I wanted. Mostly try to behave as a normal guy. I'll take it as a compliment.. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: Aarohi...

I am curious to know, what happened. There are plenty of question to be answered.

But the way you explained Arnav's turmoil is just mind blowing. 
I am already a fan of your writings, dear !!


Oh, thank a lot dear. Fan.. πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³.. I am glad.. πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: gowtu





Loll yeah so many que πŸ˜† πŸ˜† cnt help it... u HV to bear me 😳 πŸ˜†
Okati cheppanaaa... Hhhmm Chalo reveal who r thy...
That is d BIG que r8 now πŸ˜‰


Let's see what u'll get in this update.. πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: pakpearl

Oye..

Unfold the past,seedhe seedhe..
Lest I m gonna die of curiosity...
All the three parts r written so beautifully..
Their relationship was so pure n beautiful..
He confided in her n told all about his dark past,his fears..
He even overcame his demons but...
I wonder what was the reason behind their separation..

Update soon,pls !!!!! πŸ˜ƒ



R u threatening me... πŸ˜†.. Hahah, I don't fear for ur threatens and write entire story in next update it self.. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰. And thanks for stalking me everywhere.. πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: Aarohi...

Am stalking this. Want update...   

I can't see Arnav suffering.. and Khushi missing.. πŸ˜­


Oh yaar... I just love u... U were stalking me everywhere. And, I am truly loving it.. U'll get next update in couple of mins dear.. πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by: canapoem

Wow there is so much of mystery in this story?? Now my mind is thinking of so many questions and I know you will cover all the aspects slowly in the story but just too curious to wait.

Who is the hell is Shyam Jha, and why has he kidnapped Khushi? and from the looks of it Khushi is missing from quite some time.

I think Arnav should find Khushi first and keep her safe before fighting the demons in this mind.



U'll get few answers in the coming update, Kavi. As I see ur comments, u r a good critic, and I am glad I made u curious about this... πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š