Oh my my!!!!
That was an amazing!!
*donning the investigation cap n pulling up my sleeves *
Arshi had a beautiful relation. Now I'm not sure if it is marital or courtship, but, whatsoever, it was heart rendering and true.
But now she's not with him n he says blame me, I left her for her safety.
He's suffering n hallucinating.
Travelling in times, living in memories, passing away d future mechanically.
And now, why d hell did he do whatever he did?
Lady, you've rocked in emoting the pain. Trust me, I was getting all senti here. Bravo! Job done to perfection.
While I loved n grinned at his memories, I couldn't keep a lid over his present. I know its too much a dwelling, given that its just the first chapter, yet, but as I said, d reader in me won't stop her assumptions, u see.
I loved this particular line, a lot. Uv nailed it!
His heart pained more with these memories but he would rather enjoy the distress of their presence than the emptiness of their absence.Great going buddy!
P.s:
That is highly over whelming. Being dedicated an entire work is not something I could ever even think of. I have no words to say how grateful n humbled I am. Love you.
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