Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by jyoti06


Reopened on request
Thank youπŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 6 years ago
ye kab hua? maine ye pdha nahi..
3 saal ke baad to be continued 😲
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by Flame_of_Forest


ye kab hua? maine ye pdha nahi..
3 saal ke baad to be continued 😲
u didn't read it

ab I'm in a mood of a mystery/ thriller

so πŸ˜†


Posted: 6 years ago
ye toh super interesting mystery hai..πŸ‘πŸΌ


MSK ek khooni darinda 😲

ab Geet ka kya hoga 😭😭

I think Geet should blackmail him for some green and purple papers πŸ˜‰ har bar cops kyun phayada uthaye 😑

it will be picture perfect then..murderer and blackmailer   who would know it better than Geet since she is a photographer..πŸ˜†

(mera aaj lame jokes karneka mood hai..😳)

OMG..Maan is going to take her to a secluded place 😲
Maan ek shaatir khiladi lag raha hai.. πŸ€”

uski chalak nazarein are following Geet..πŸ€”
Geet is in danger..

better you play the blackmail card Geet or call the police..
kya Geet ko tai-chi ata hai..for self security? πŸ˜•

aaj ke emoticons ka quota pura ho gaya πŸ˜›

on a serious note it is good to read a mystery story after a long time..😊

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 6 years ago
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by Flame_of_Forest


ye toh super interesting mystery hai..πŸ‘πŸΌ


MSK ek khooni darinda 😲

ab Geet ka kya hoga 😭😭

I think Geet should blackmail him for some green and purple papers πŸ˜‰ har bar cops kyun phayada uthaye 😑

it will be picture perfect then..murderer and blackmailer   who would know it better than Geet since she is a photographer..πŸ˜†

(mera aaj lame jokes karneka mood hai..😳)

OMG..Maan is going to take her to a secluded place 😲
Maan ek shaatir khiladi lag raha hai.. πŸ€”

uski chalak nazarein are following Geet..πŸ€”
Geet is in danger..

better you play the blackmail card Geet or call the police..
kya Geet ko tai-chi ata hai..for self security? πŸ˜•

aaj ke emoticons ka quota pura ho gaya πŸ˜›

on a serious note it is good to read a mystery story after a long time..😊

let me also help😳
I'm attempting something like this for the first timeπŸ˜† wo baat alag hai k har cheez i attempt is for the first timeπŸ˜›

itne sare pj πŸ˜²

glad you liked itπŸ˜ƒ

will start updating in a day or two
q k uss se zada time laga tho I'll lose interest again🀣

Thanks for reading!πŸ€—
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by sporthy_smile28


let me also help😳
I'm attempting something like this for the first timeπŸ˜† wo baat alag hai k har cheez i attempt is for the first timeπŸ˜›

itne sare pj πŸ˜²

glad you liked itπŸ˜ƒ

will start updating in a day or two
q k uss se zada time laga tho I'll lose interest again🀣

Thanks for reading!πŸ€—


pratiksha mein

Posted: 6 years ago
AWEsome work
Totally different πŸ˜‰
Posted: 6 years ago
fresh concept
want more
maan murderer and business tycoon
geet photographer
seems interesting
waiting for more
Posted: 6 years ago
Nice start... Maan killed his father n geet saw it... Still she is not saying anything to anyone... Is there something more to it.. 
Posted: 6 years ago
waiting for the second murder plan..😳

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