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Posted: 9 years ago
read all the parts together...
 wow such a beautiful story !!😊
luvd it ...
continue soon !
and pm me when whenever u update next ðŸ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update Vrinda di..
Do continue soon..<3
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awesome dear
thanx for the pm
love
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Lovely update vrinda... finally got to read it :).. hmmn to hero ne aknowledge kar lia dat he loves her.. :) guuuddd!!! ;-) umm update soon now.. its been long ;-)
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CHAPTER 6




----IN GROUND-----


RV-"oji hum toh aa gye tere team ka hero kaha h?"
S-"uski chinta chodo n think abt ur team. Uska kya hoga?"
Pkc-"so lets begin guys. Vd where is ur team member?"
Vd was lukin at his team
S-"vo sir he'll b here soon u plz start vid d comp."
Pkc-"k guys so for d 1st round i.e., musical v hv samir frm team BOYS ROCKZZ"
Samir came n sang Pani Da Rang(vicky donar)

N d whole crowd clapped for him

Pkc-"now its time for team B. So lets welcum on stage RD"

Evryone was lukin hither n thither but rd was nowhere to be found.

Rv-"k ho gaya chori kahi vo thara munda darr k bhag toh koni gyo????"
Av-"ye rd kaha h sanyu? U said he'll b here"
As-"ha vo kaha h sanyu?"
P-"i dont think vo aayega sanyu. I think ur faith in him was fake"
Vids-"i think he is right dear"
Rv-"chal koi na aisa krte h k agar vo aaj na aya ya teri team har gyi toh tu iss collge mei fir na ayegi aur ghar-grihasti sambhalegi"
Sanyu glared at him "Done"

Aayu-"sanyu ye kya kar rhi h if rd nhi aya ya hum haar gye toh..."

Sanyu was fade up of all of dis negative thoughts n turned n startd goin away WHEN...




Hmm.. hmm...

Dehleez pe mere dil ki
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

(SANYU STOPPD N TURND AROUND.SHE SMILD LUKIN AT D OWNER OF VOICE)

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena mere humdum
(RD WAS LUKIN TOWARDS D SKY N A TEAR DROP ESCAPED HIS EYES)
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum

(HE STARTD MUVIN TOWARDS D STAGE)

Dehleez pe merey dil ki
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

(DIS TIME HE WAS LUKIN IN D EYES OF HIS LADY LUV)

Haan sikha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan sikha maine jeena, mere humdum
Na sikha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na sikha jeena tere bina humdum

Hmmm.. hmmm..

Sacchi si hain yeh taareefein
Dil se jo maine kari hain...

(HE KEPT A HAND ON HIS HEART)

Sacchi si hain yeh taareefein
Dil se jo maine kari hain...

Jo tu mila to saji hain
Duniya meri humdum
O aasma mila zameen ko meri
Aadhe aadhe poore hain hum
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

(HE WAS SAYIN DIS LUKIN AT SANYU LUVINGLY N SUDDENLY POINTD TOWARDS HER)

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena, kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena, mere humdum
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina Humdum...
hmmm...hmmm...

AS SOON AS D SONG COMPLETED HE BOWED WHILE D CROWD WAS BUSY HOOTIN N CHEERIN FOR HIM.EVRY1 WAS CLAPPIN HARD SPECIALLY HIS TEAM.

Aftr dis he reachd his team
P-"wah mere sher kya gaya h tune,matlab uss samir k toh 
Band baja di"
Ar-"yaar seriously u hv d same melodious voice as 5yrs before. Maan gaya boss hatsoff to ur talent"
As-"but u had said k vid dadi teri gaane k vajah b chali gyi but fir aaj ye kya tha?"
Rd-"u r right i had said k now i dnt hv a reason to sing(lukin at sanyu)bt today i got it back. N frm now on i'll sing,i'll play my guitar n do evrythin bettr than before"
Vids-"u knw frankly for once v all thought that u wont cum n v'll loose n agar aisa ho jata na toh u wld hv regrettd it throughout ur life"
Rd-"y?aisa kya ho jata?"
Aayu-"vo sanyu ne sart lagai thi rv k sath k if u dnt cum or v loose than she'll leave dis collg forevr"

Rd was luked at sanyu in disbelief. Before he cld say sumthin pkc took d mike,'k guys so d winnr of 1st round is...RSS"
All of dem jumpd out of joy
Vd-"k studnts now its time for round 2 i.e.,brain test n for dis v hv Rv n sanyukta competin each othr frm deir respective teams. So now i rqst both of dem to cum up."

Both of dem went up givin tough luks to each odr

Vd-"k u 2 hv to solve 2 ques. 1 of dem is set by us which is to b solvd in 10 min n d odr u hv d right to ask each odr. N u vil hv 5min for it.So u hv 15min for dis round N ur time strts now"

Both rv n sanyu movd towards d table n turnd deir ques. Papers

Rv smild on seein d ques.(in mind)"ye eq. Toh 1st yr k mid mei kraya jata h isse toh yeh chori kabi na kar payegi"
S(in mind)"uff yeh kya h???? K sanyu shant u can do it...u can" 


There d 11 were gettin tensd on lukin at her nervous face,she lukd at piya whi askd her to b calm thn she lukd at d papr vid a calm head"ohhh yes...yes how can u b so stupid" n aftr dat she strtd solvin d eq. vid a lightenin speed

Sa-"ye sanyu ko achanak kya hua?"
Yo-"ha re iss anarkali k face pe 0 watt s 440 watt ka currnt kaha s aa gya"
J-"ye sanyu ko dkh k lag rha h jaise isse silk mil gya ho"
Aayu-"i toh dont undrstnd sanyu 1 eq. Ko dkh k itni khush ho rhi h"

Their convrsation was interrpttd by a voice"DONE"
Rv lukd up in shock yup it was our gal who solvd it jst few sec bfre rv

Vd-"intrstin v. Intrstn" he lukd at them "so what r u waitin for ask each odr ques. Till ur paper is checkd. So who vil ask first?
S-"sir vo rv is my senior so i wld like to give dis oppurtunity to him"
Vd-"k Rv so u can ask ques. Frm any field any stream n so is it for u sanykta u both hv 5min each"

Rv-"le chori chal jey bata k john keats kaun tha?"
Listenin to dis d 3 gals smild widely
P-"ye tum log hans kyu rhi ho?vaha tmlog ki frnd problm mei h i mean engineerin student k liye lit. Is no less than a problm"
Vids-"kch nhi dkhte jao problm mei toh ab ye rv hoga"
S-"he was a romantic poet who wrote his poems mainly aftr he was ditchd by his lady luv Fanny Brawne. Though like othr poets he had an unsuccessful luv life but still his poems had d best n d most picturesque moments of luv capturd in them,which when read is no less than movie. V can say despite of failin in luv he nevr cursd luv 
Instead he blessd it for givin sum wonderful nomnts to him for his life. Is dat enough k aur b kch btao"
Dat was enough to blow-off not jst rv but evrybdy's head but d gals n vd were smirkin as if dey had won a battle
S-"so i guess its my turn now ready" rv nodded "so tell me mr. Senior k vo kya h jiska prem saririk prem(physical) hote hue b alokikta(souly)k mapdand(balance) pe prem k marmik chitran(picturisation) ka e.g. ban jata h"
If v say Rv was shockd den it wil not b fair his expression was beyond shock. He wasnt able to digest sanyu's ques. Not nly was it rv but evry1 includin rd
Rd-"baap re ye kya puchi h sanyu"
While vd n gals were njoyin evry1's reaction n laughin
S-"say...say..."
Rv was scratchin his head n tryin to undrstnd her ques.
He was in deep thought when "TIMES UP" shoutd vd
Rv was confusd in himself whn vd announced "So as per d 2 rounds d winner r teamB n henceforth d drm team rum belongs to d 2nd team n accordin to d rules teamB is askd to keep a valid name for their team"

Rv-"sir 1 min ye ladki ne galat sawal pucha h. Iska jawab yadi h toh i want to knw"
vd gave sanyu a luk n nxt she knew what she had to do
S-"i didnt ask a wrong ques. D ans. Is quite simple its radha-krisna"
Rv-"wht how is it possible???? Xplain"
S-"its really simple mr. Idiot its nly radha-krisna who r luvrs if v see in worldly bt still deir luv is considrd divine n pious through d eyes of adhyatm(intellect). Intellctually dey resemble aatma(radha) n parmatma(krisna) n deir luv is 
A symbol of how a atma breaks all d ties of dis world just to meet his luv parmatma n be 1 wid him. Hence deir physical luv is worldly yet pious. Hope u understnd"(i knw guys u all mst b eithr holdin ur heads or thinkin k wht was all dis bt dis is d truth guys which i hv to study daily in my stdy of hindi lit. N u knw its borin yet at d same time vry intrstin trust me)

Den she headed twrds her team all jolly. D gals engulfd her in a tight hug while d boys were still in a shock
Av-"ye kya tha sanyu"
Sa-"tu pakka engn. Kr rhi h n lit. Nhi"
J-"sanyu sach bata ye bomb kaha s aya"
As-"exactly keats wala toh atom bomb tha bt radha-krisna toh nuclear tha jisne hum sabki duniya hilla di"
Pi-"chill guys sanyu n lit. Ek dusre k synonym h. Sanyu both hindi n eng lit mei well-versd h kyu sanyu"
Aayu-"so finally our sanyu is bck. Aaj bada sahi din h rd ko uska passion vapas mila n sanyu ko uski atleast 1 zindagi mili"
Sanyu who was smilin till now suddnly her smile vanishd n few tears covrd her eyes
Rd-"kya hua y r u cryin?"

--IN RAILWAT STATION--

A man in his mid 50s"bhAiya 1 tickt kanpur ki" he was thinkin"u didnt did it right now u'll pay. B ready kab tak chupogi once i reach kanpur i'll trace u down. I WONT SPARE U.I'LL MAKE U CRY D TEARS OF BLOOD"

--IN D DRM TEAM TUM--

J-"Sanyu bata hua kya h"
Yo-"kch toh bata yaar"
Rd-"sanyu luk at me(he made her face him) kya hua btao"
S-"kch nhi bus m not goin to participate in any lit ques"
"Kyu nahi karogi" came uo a voice frm d door
S-"da...sir"
Vd-"tell me y wont u give me a valid reason"
S-"u knw evrythin n still.."
Vd-"jst shut up yes i knw evrythin but tum kar kya rhi ho???? U hv no idea how r u spoilin urself u hv so much in u n jst becoz of dat bl**dy man u r sacrificin it all. He didnt wantd u to b happy n what u did provd him right(clappin loudly) wow sanyukta agrwal m so proud of u...u knw wht d best thing n a real slap on his face vil b whn u really xcel in both dat vil b d proud momnt for us not whn u jst do wht he wantd u to do. Think frm ur brains u idiot tum use vo de rhi ho jo use chahiye tha tum apni innr quality spoil kar rhi ho n u say u r r8. Think it urself stupid"

Aftr hearin all dis sanyu just ran away frm dere.
Vd calld sum1"vo sahi time aa gya aaj hmne pehla vaar kia aaj vo bahot royegi sambhal lijyega. Mai apni responsiblity bhulla nhi hu she is d nly 1 i hv n i vil take care of her"

Aftr dis he turnd towards his team who was now in a shock by seeib d suddn outbutst of vd on sanyu
Vd-"relax. Go home v all vil meet here tomrrw"
Nobody was able to ques. Vd bt yoyo sumhow managd to gain d courage for his anarkali
Yo-"sir per apne sanyu k saath aisa kyu kia?u hv any idea how much vil it hurt her. V knw she is ur studnt but u cant hurt her"
Vd-"she is not jst my studnt n i hv full right on her n u r no1 to ques me NOW LEAVE"

--ON OTHER SIDE--

(ON PHONE)"ha main aa rha hu b ready. V dont hv time. I cant wait anymore. Usko uski aukad batana jaruri h. They must knw deir real place."



PRECAP:- A SMALL PEEP INTO SANYU'S PAST





A/N:- guys m again repeatin myself
I send 50 pms n in return i get only 12likes n 8 commnts
I know most of u r writers so do tell me what vil u feel if u get d same response on ur work

Guys jst open,read n comment
Dis time i didnt felt like updatin seein such a response but i updated on insistence of sum 
So PLZ COMMENT N PRESS LIKE

D NEXT UPDATE DEPENDS ON D RESPONSE I GET
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsme update
Loved it to the core

Everybody so worried
Bt sanyu had firm faith on rd
Usne RV se bet b laaga li

Crrct tym par entry mari

N the song was superb
I m so in love with this song


Sanyu ne kya band bjaya uss RV k

Vd sir ka burst out on sanyu
Feeling bad for her

Bt this was needed

Who's that person
He wants to take revenge from sanyu

Cnt wait for next
Update soon

Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago
Resss hahaha
UNRESSS HOHO
Omgeee yeh kya tha???
Itti literature mujhe nhi aati!!
I KNOW aap hin n eng literature mein...like...D best ho,
Par mujhe toh nhi samajhti!
Anyways, i caught on to sum of ur explanation abt radha krishna so im ok i guess
Ab yeh naya joker kaun hain kanpur stn pr!!!???
Gosh i never knew SANYU'S life ws filled with so many problems...
But its ok as far as she has frnds with her
And she always will have.
Ok, now toh i gotta go 2 scul
Baadme aake agar time mila toh aur likhungi aage
Warna bas itta hi
Update soonish
And ab update de diya hain toh scraps k bhi reply de diyo
I know i trouble u a lot hehe
Ab choti behen Mujhe banaoge toh jhelna padega
Just ask tamu di hehe ussey v nhi choda
Ok bye mom is getting srsly mad at me now
Have a nice day
Looots of luv
Sanyu
Ps-song selection ws LOVELY...one of my favs!
S
Edited by saddahqrocks - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Firstly give me a tight hug for choosing jeena jeena ðŸ¤—
Gosh !! Love u atif <3 
And the update was fabulous <3 
Rd's entry 😉 
Who is the man now :o 
Excited :D 
Update soon 
Thnx for the pm :) 
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey.. amazing update.. You knw what I just luv hindi... and what u hv written is jst awsm.. conti soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsme update
Sanyu have full faith on Rd
Rv se bet bhi laga li
Entry on right time
Sanyu ne barabar band bajai RV ki
Update soon...:)