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INTERESTING ... POST NXT PART SOON NA
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Ahh finally read it !! 
Fantabulous job vrinda di !! 
I mean its such a fresh stry !! 
And it's unbelievable that its ur first stry !! 
Aww love at first site :* 
But this sanyu's mystery sounds interesting!! 
And who is released ?? 
Maybe her father or bro 
Update soon di :) 
Thnx fr the pms :) 
Edited by Sagl - 9 years ago
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oh what a wonderful start
read all part fabulous
eagerly waiting for next part
update asap
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Aww rd in love dabang sanyu
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i have read all parts in one go.
they all are nice.
so next time please pm me
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A/N:-
GUYS MY STRY VIL B SET IN KOLKATA AS M A CALCUTTIAN



CHAPTER-5





The 12 of dem were xcitd to meet each odr alot. Rd was xcitd to meet his angel,arus for piya,parth for vids n vice-versa,n piya for rd n arus.

NXT DAY AT CLLG

D 12 reachd togthr n met at cllg gate
Yo-"helloji hi aap sabhi ka hmari dosti k 2nd day mei swagat h"
K-"thnx! But y r u behavin like dis i mean as if u r our host"
Aayu-"arre nthin new kaustu iss bandar ko yeh sab krne ki habit h" n odrs laughd to it but nt piya as she was in a diff. mood tdy.
J-"chalo ander chalte h"
Evry1 was goin in whn sanyu receivd a phonecall
S-"ummm guys u go in i hv sum work mei khtam kr k aati hu. I'll reach b4 class strts. Bye" n she left frm d cllg gate itself
Sah-"chalo hm toh andar chale"
Pi-"rd 1 min i need to talk to u. Can v go to ccd(sanya yeh teri treat k jagah😊😊)" she said dis in quite a serious tone
Rd-"umm sure v can"
Pi-"guyz u go bt aayu n vids cum wid me"
Arus-"agar aayu n vids tmhare sang jayegi toh i,arav n parth vil also join rd"
Pi-"ok vaise b i was wantin u to b presnt dere too but if parth n arav also wants to cum den i dnt hv any problm. Chale"
Ccd was not far frm dere it was almost walkin distance so dey reachd quickly all dis while rd,parth,vid,aayu n arus were cnfusd while arav was nervous n piya wore a determind luk on her face

~IN CCD~

Dey settld demselvs down. Rd was sweatin out of nervousness
Aayu-"arre rd u r sweatin so mch jabki AC is on. I think u need watr here drink it" she said offrin a glass of water to rd.
Rd took it n was drinkin it when piya Bomberd him wid her ques.
Pi-"so u luv sanyu. R8?"
D mouthfull of watr spill frm rd's mouth out of shck while odrs were too takn abck by dis ques. Of piya. Evn arav had not xpectd piya to ques. Rd directly. He had thought dat piya wld create a bckgrnd where he vil hlp rd.little did he knew wht was cumin his way.
Rd-"wh...wh...what?????" Askd suprisd
Pi-"arre yaar y u guys hv dis stammerin problm or r u deaf? K i repeat my self U LUV SANYU?"
RD was unable to understnd n out of nervousmnt he spat "Yes...i mean no...i nean..." piya cockd up her eyebrws while d gals were in shck n boys were beyond shck it was if dey had been givn a 720watts shck.
Pi-" SAY D TRUTH" she said a bit more strenly makin rd nrvs bt he composd himslf n replied calmly"YES I DO LUV HER"
Now d gals had there mouth shapd perfctly in a big 'O' n d boys were unable to react
Aayu too didnt knw wht to say she shoutd loudly"DO U KNW WHT R U TLKIN ABOUT?????ITS NOT A MATTER OF JOKE DAMMIT" grabbin d attention of d whole cafe  who were now lukin at dem
Pi-"Sory for d disturbance. Aayu shant gal shant"
Aayu-"hw can u ask to b quite whn he is tlkin dis rubbish"
Pi-"arre who is askin u to b quite m jst sayin calm down" n she clmd aayu. 
P-"vids...vids..." he was shakin vids
V-"hu?????? Ha??????"
P-"r u f9????"
Vids jst nooded a yes
Pi(lukin towards rd)-"dkha tumne inka reaction dnt b in shck dis is wht it is to b in luv vid her. Listn rd its not k v dnt want u to entr her life its jst dat u dnt knw anythin 
Abt hr past n Sanyu is a vry delicate gal. Fr her relations r really pious n moreovr..."
B4 she cld continue Rd cut her in btwn n said,"listn piya its true dat i luv sanyu n i dnt knw anythin else. Tmhari kal k baat s itna toh samaj gya hu k sanyu is hvin many scrts vid her jisse mera koi matlb nhi h. I jst knw 1 thing dat i luv sanyu n she is my ANGEL"
Aayu-"bt r u sure of ur feelings? I mean wht if u leave her in midst n"
Rd-"i m RSS main koi bhi kaam bina sure hue nhi krta n rahi baat sanyu ko middle mei chodne k toh dats not possible coz if i do so den i wnt b able to face myslf"
V-"bt sanyu tumse luv nhi krti n vo pata nhi kb tumse luv kare ya na kare"
Rd-"na ka toh koi sawaal hi nhi udthta i'll make sure dat she vil b mine chahe iske liye mujhe kitna b wait kyu na krna pade"
Rd's confidnce had cnvincd d gals
Arav-"n vaise b hmara ek rule h we r 1-woman men n hum joh chahate h vo pate b h" he said dis lukin at piya,makin her turn red.
Pi-"k so jab tum itna hi sure ho toh let me tell u abt sanyu's past"
Rd-"uski koi jarurat nhi h. Main uss baare mei sanyu s hi januga. No mattr how long she takes"
Rd eye reflctd dat hw mch he luvd her
Arav(Av)-"so agar sab kch clear ho gya h toh can v leave fr cllg. Vaise b class ka time ho rha h"
Pi-"hmmm... bt"
Arus-"relax kisi ko b iss bare mei pata nhi chalega. Ab chale"
He said dis in an assurin tone whch cnvicd piya alot. It ws as if a part of a big stone has slidd dwn frm her heart. D gals' faces rflctd dat hw much happy dey were
----IN COLLG----

8 Of dem reachd d cllg n rushd twrds deir class rd was runnin fastest n he was at lead whn suddnly he stppd nly to see HIS ANGEL sittin dere wid sum creases on her forehead.
V-"bahut cute lag rhi h na?"
Rd nodded dreamily
Aayu-"kiss krne ka man kr rha h? Thn go n kiss hr lips"
Rd was still not in his senses n said,"lips pe nhi uske head ko kiss kr k sari pareshani le lunga" he was in his own wrld whn piya elbwd him,"jo b krna h mr. Jst beaware coz sum1 is watchin u n dat prsn is vry prtctive of all 4 of us spclly sanyu. She is dat person's life"
D gals giggld n entrd d class while d boys jst stood cnfusd at d gate. Dey were unable to decode d wrds of piya. Dey were thinkin whn yoyo clld out for dem,"arre aaj kya aap 4 ne watchmen banana h?"
P-"nhi hm toh ander hi aa rhe the"
Rd jst muvd n stood infrnt of sanyu,while sanyu who was busy lukin dwn in her notebuk sddnly raisd her head n askd rd,"kya hua aise kya dkh rhe ho?"
Rd-"tumhe"
S-"WHAT??????"
Here in d side aayu thought ye rd sanyu k haath aaj marega. She tiltd twds rd n said,"contrl ur emotions idiot warna ghodi chadhne k pehle hi aarthi nikal jayegi"
Rd cmposd himself
Rd-"ha main tmhe hi dkh rha tha. I m watchin u for a long time tum copy mei dkh k bht tensd lag rhi ho"
S-"oh ye h ye pata nhi kaun sa equation h solve hi nhi ho rha"
Rd-"bus itni si baat lao let me hv a luk"
S-"tum ye solve kr paoge?"
Rd-"dkhti jao madam" n our genius slvd it within a few mins
"See ho gya kitna simple tha"
S-"ha u did it  Mai isse leke itni der s try kr rhi thi n ho nhi rha tha n u slvd it within mins"
Rd-"offo kch nhi h let me xplain it to u" n he xplaind it to sanyu
S-"thnx waise u r quite intllignt"
Rd(bowin his dwn)-"thnx madam btw u r also intllgnt varna nobdy givs try to sch eq. On d 2nd day of ME. Vaise did u had a doubt on my brains"
S-"actually yes. Vo 1st meet mei i thght u to b a arrognt,egoistic,rude n mcp"
Av-"no no yaar hum mei aisa koi nhi h n rd toh bilkul b nhi. Ha mana shrt tmprd h bt dil ka bura nhi h"
Rd-"ek sec ye MCP kya h"
S-"male chaunvista pig"
P-"wow pehli baar ye shrt form suna"
S-"its nt clld shrt frm its clld acronym"
Av-"acro...kya????"
V-"kch nhi tum log ko slwly-slwly sab samajh mei aa jayega" n she winkd


"What is goin on ovr here? Evrybdy bck to deir seats. I m prof. Pkc"
Yo-"oh toh ye golu k team s hume ladna h"
V-"ye toh koi cute sa teddy bear lag rha h"
N den d lect. strtd

-AFTR LECT. IN CANTEEN-

J-"Yaar aaj hmara shikar nhi dikh rha h"
Sa-"kaun jiggy"
Yo-"arre vahi sadda rv"
S-"chdo na guys. Let him b whre evr he is"
"Kyu darr gyi kya hmse??"
S(in low voice)"lo fir aa gya" to rv"aao vahi maine socha k tum aaj ka dose lene kaise nhi aaye?"
Rv-"dose toh hm tuje denge chori. Ready ho ja jaldi hmara 1st comp. Hoga for d drm team rum. Aisa maja chakhaunga k fir sir na utha paegi"
Rd-"kaun kski mundi jhukaega vo dkha jaega as of now phut yaha s"
Rv left frm dere
"Wah rd paji aaj toh sanyu ki kami apne puri kr di"
Arus(AS)-"ye sab chodo n yeh socho k itni 
 Jaldi 1st comp."
Av-"ha hmari toh kch preprtion b nhi hui h"
Pi-"dnt wory vd sir sab kara denge"
S-"hmmm piyu is r8"


DAYS WERE PASSIN. NOW IT WAS A WEEK N SANYU WAS GETTIN CMFRTABLE VID 8 OF HER NEW FRNDS.

~ONE DAY IN VD'S CABIN~

YO-"ji apne hume bulaya sir?"
Vd-"yes yoyo. So luks like k kafi achi frndshp ho gyi h"
S-"yes sir now u r meetin a team"
Vd-"hmmm intrstin vry intrstin sanyukta. So i hv clld u all to tell abt ur 1st chllnge for drm tean rum. Ye vo rum h jo agar tmlog ne jit liya thn it vil b d bst thin. Ye comp. 2 levl mei hoga n i hv choosd my players dey r rd n sanyu. Rd u vil prticipate in musical round n sanyu in theory round"
Rd-"sory sir bt i cnt do it" n he lft d rum
S-"ise kya hua?"
Av-"vo actually rd ne music aaj s 5 yrs phle chod dia h"
Pi-"wht bt y?"
Vd-"dis comp. Is vry imp"
As-"i knw sir n ye b sure h k if rd participates den nobdy can beat us"
Sanyu was jst listenin quietly n den she left frm dere
P-"ab ye kaha gyi?"

~IN BB COURT~

RD was playin whn sanyu came. She was huffin
S-"hufff...tm yaha ho n i searchd u in d whole cllg"
Rd-"kya hua?"
S-"kya hua? U r askin me i mean tm vaha s aa gye n u r askin me. Tell me kya hua h?"
Rd-"kch b nhi hua h"
S-"hmm samaj gyi u dnt cnsidr me yr frnd isliye u r nt tellin me.Hai na?" She said poutin
Rd(in mind)"oh God kitni cute lag rhi h MY ANGEL"(to sanyu)-"leave it tm nhi samjhogi bht hi cmplcatd h"
S-"tab toh i'll pakka undrstnd coz my life is also cmplicatd. Toh tell"
Rd-"u really wnt to knw?" Sanyu 
 Nodded like a kid
Rd-"to listn. My dadi was d 1 who brght music in my life. I usd to play my guitr n sing for hrs for her. U knw my music was my soul bt 1 din dadi left me n unke sang mere music k vajah b gyi. Nw i cnt play it"
Sanyu was quite whole time now she spoke up"wht do u think ur r8?" Rd lukd at her cnfusd
S-"rd u said ur dadi luvd ur music toh kya she'll b hapy to see dat her pota is sad n left his soul coz of her. No rd instd she'll smile seein u singin n who said she has lft u she is dere vid u in ur hrt,hr blessin is vid u"
Rd-"bt sanyu i hv nt sung fr whole 5yrs n ab sidha tdy in comp i mean dis is really imp for us n wht if v loose?"
S-"who said dat v'll loose. Rd u nly said music is ur soul toh kya tm apne soul s alag ho skte ho? No u jst give it a try i knw k u vil sing d bst n vil win it. N tumhe preparatn j koi zarurat nhi. Musuc is in u. Jst believe urslf n do it n remmbr i knw n believe in dat u can do it. Rst is ur decision comp agle 10 min mei h.tmhara guitr aa chuka h i'll b w8in for u on d ground"
Rd was stunnd to hear sch wrds frm sanyu. He was now sure k his decsn was not wrong. BUT HE WAS NRVOUS

HERE odrs were w8in fr sanyu
S-"dnt wory he'll cum. He has to cum. I knw dat"
Piya smild seeib sanyu's cnfdnce
Pi(in mind)"so rd u hv strtd makin place in my frnd's heart varna vo tmhare piche nhi jaati n na hi tmpe apna cnfdnce itne haq k saath dikhati"










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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsme update yr
Totally loved it

Priya k interrogation
Poor rd kya halat hogi thi uski
Everyone so shocked


Bt rd made everybody believe he truly loves sanyu
N will make her his


He was so cutely admiring her
He was lost in her


Now all has come so close to each other
First competition on the corner

Sanyu so easily handled rd
She convinced him to sing


Cnt wait for next
Update soon


Luv u
Keep smilingEdited by newmoon18 - 9 years ago
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awesome... luvd it.. so rd finally confessed that he loves sanyu.. conti soon and thnx 4 pm..
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Hey di amazing wala update 👏⭐️
Aaye meri treat ki jagah 😉😃😳
Aww he loves her 😳
And the way ahe conviced him to sing 
And the way piya felt that he is 
Making place in his heart 
Was a pleasure to read ⭐️⭐️
This stry is quite interesting 👏
Update soon 
Thnx for the pm 
Edited by Sagl - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely dear
just loved it so damn much 
thanx for the pm
continue soon
love
pari