Loving an Angel----CHAPTER 32 updated - Page 2

Posted: 9 years ago
U shud hv pmd me :-(((

but koi ni

awsome concept darlo
go ahead vrinda n dont u dare not pming me :-)))
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by Daddysdoll


U shud hv pmd me :-(((

but koi ni

awsome concept darlo
go ahead vrinda n dont u dare not pming me :-)))


So sory😃
Nxt time pakka pm krungi

Posted: 9 years ago
Sory for being late guys. Here u all go with the CS



SANYUKTA AGARWAL-a strong headd girl,teekhi mirchi has goldn hrt n spr talented. Luvs her mothr n her 3 besties alot n can do anythin fr thm.


RANDHIR SINGH SEKHAWAT-a fun lovin easy goin man,hot headed,handsome;girls go gaga ove him bt he paids no heeds to thm waitin for hs grl of drms n  obvious a genious wid golden voice


PIYA-sanyu's bestie n a lovly girl. Lot talentd. Livs wid sanyu as her family stays abroad. The nly one to knw abt sanyu past


VIDUSI-anodr sanyu ki bestie n an orphn also livs infrnt of sanyu's flat. Dsnt knw anythin abt sanyu past bt luvs n cares for her alot


Aayusi-sanyu ki 3rd n last bestie. Admires sanyu fr d courge she hs n luvs her alot

The 4 share an insepreable sisterly bond. N undrstnd each odr quite well. Nobdy can say by lukin at dem tht dey r frnds n nt sis.


ANJU AGRWAL-sanyu mom n luvs all her 3 frnds as her own daughtrs


KISHORE AGRWL-sanyu dad.sanyu hates him alot.


ARAV-randhir bestie a grt guy n handsome


PARTH- rd's frnd n a cool dude. Dsnt gt hypr easily.


AARUSH-rd frnd. Dnt get into fights easily n cn do anythin with cars.


RENUKA N HARSH SKHWT-rd mom dad. Luvs deir son alot n can do anythin for his happiness


VARDHAN SURYAVANSHI-the mentor of d 8 of dem n a guardian figre for sanyu. Luvs all d 4 gals like his sis spclly sanyu. The nly one odr thd piya who knws abt sanyu past n d real sanyu


YOYO N HIS CHAMCHAS-a gud at hrt persn. Connctin bridge btwn rd n sanyu.



So dis is it guys let me knw ur views on deir chrctr sktch. U vil gt to knw more abt dem in d stry.
If got gud respnse den d 1st chappy vil b up soon.


Luv vrinda,
Posted: 9 years ago
interesting!!
continue soon
Posted: 9 years ago
nice.cs waiting for part1 n bdw aarush is dere in my story too ;-p :) lov
Posted: 9 years ago
Hey dear..
Nice cs.
Update soon..
Thanks for pm..
Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome prolouge and CS...
do update asap...
Posted: 9 years ago
i just read you ff prologue
and cs
wow.. its sooo good
if possible pm me
keep writing
update soon
with love
RIDDHIMA
Posted: 9 years ago
loved it dear
hell excited,pls update soon
love

pari
Posted: 9 years ago
CHAPTER 1


"Sanyu!beta uth ja late ho jaega for cllg" shoutd anju frn kitchn

"Rehne dijye aunty vo kumbhkaran aise nhi uthegi hm dono jagate h sleepin beauty ko"chirppd piya frm d room n she n vidu wnt twrds d rum were a girl was smilin in sleep

"Hayee dkh kitni tnsion free lag rhi h hmari jhalli" said vidu who was lookin at d sleepin girl

"Ha ek yahi 1 time toh h jab ye shanti mein rhti h. Varna toh uthne k sang hi fir vahi yaade aa jati h usse haunt krne" sighed an emotional piya as a tear drop escapd frm her eyes.
Although vidhushi nvr knw abt sanyu's past but she nvr questiond abt it to her or anyone coz she knw dat it was a piece of glass stuck in her heart d more anybdy tried to take it out or touch it d more pain it vil give to sanyu n she cldnt see her frnd in any more pain.

"Arre sanyu uthi kya????" Dis call frm mrs.anju took both of dem out frm their thoughts.

"Ready?"ques. Piya wid an evil smile on her face.
"Yup!"replued vidusi
"1,2,3,ATTACK!" N with dis d 2 frnds strtd hittin sanyu wid pillows thus disturbin her deep slumber which resulted in a entertainin pillow fight among d 3.

"HEY BHAGWAN!" exclaimd anju lookin at her 3 daughters playin like 3 yr old kiddos. "yeh kya kar rhi ho tmlog. Late ho jayega cllg k liye. Chalo get ready fast. Breakfst taiyyar h n bina khaye jaane nhi dungi"

All d 3 were laughin n anju was gettin emotional at such a beautiful scene like any odr mthr.
All d three got ready n were leavin for their cllg when sumone clld dem frm back

"Arre kutt* kaha chali mujhe chod k
"Shit! Today she is gonna eat us" said a scared vidusi
"Shut up! I knw how to handle her"said a girl in her mid 19 n turnd around.
Before d girl approachin d gang of 3 cld say anythin d latter retortd back n strtd shoutin "what is dis aayu?koi itna late krta h kya. Aaj agr tum abi nhi aati toh v wld hv late u as ur punishment. Ab nxt time se aisa mat krna considr it as ur warnin. Hmmmppphhh" n wid dis she turnd around n strtd walkin without lettin her talk n leavin her face open in a big 'O'

"Chal ab muh band kar makhi ghus jaaegi n late v ho rha h"said a laughin vidusi.

"Sanyu...u...tujhe toh main chodungi nhi" chirppd aayusi who was now runnin behind 3 of dem. N dis was how all d 4 frnds muvd towrds their cllg. All dis was also witnessd by 2 ladies.
"Bus inhi 3 k karan m abit relievd for sanyu varna wo past toh meri bachi ko andar hi andar kha k khatam kr chuka hota" said anju while wipin her tears away.
"Tu chinta mar kar anju sanyu 1 bahut hi strng ladki h joh har difficlt se difficlt situation s deal krne ki himmat rakhti h. Mana vo apne dard andar hi rakhti h par uski 3 frnd uske dard ko samjhti h aur use sambhalna v janti h. Ab tum jaldi ready ho jao vrna skul k liye late ho jaaega" said priti,anju's frnd (M SORY GUYS I FORGOT TO INFORM U ALL THAT ANJU IS A EDUCATED LADY N Q TEACHR IN A REPUTD SKUL N PRITI IS HER COLLUEGE N BEST FRND WHO KNWS ABT HER PAST N WHAT SHE SUFFRD FRM. SHE IS ALSO AAYUSI'S MOM N A SINGLE MOTHR 
LIKE ANJU N ALSO CONSIDERS N LUVS D 3 GIRLS LIKE HER OWN DAUGHTER. N 1 MORE THING FRNDS ALL 4 OF DEM LIVE IN SAME SOCIETY,SAME FLOOR IN OPPOSITE HOUSES).


"AANSU VO NHI HOTE JO BAH JAATE H,

DASTAAN-E-DARD VO NHI JO KEH DIYE JAATE H,

AISA NAHI H K ZAKHM VO NHI JO NAZAR NHI AATE H,

BUS UNHE DIKHA KAR HUM KAMJOR NAZAR NHI AANA CHAHATE H"


Ok so dis is it guys i knw its nt dat intrstin bt it is d base of d stry. Nxt part vil b intro of rd n a deepr luk in sanyu's character

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