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FOOLS IN LOVE - An Ishra OS (Page 3)

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Posted: 24 December 2014 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
OMG what a beautiful scene!!...makes me long to see it rendered in the show.   What a beautiful way to show the sanctity of the RED Maang...and to impart upon Shagun that whatever she may have, its one thing that she can never have...especially not Raman ke nam ka kumkum!!   I loved how you built up her insecurities...its very real and relatable. No matter how confident and successful we women are, we somehow let other women be our downfall, and we allow them the power to impact us in such an elemental way!!  

Brilliant writing and storytelling...i loved it!!Clap


Edited by --Nargis-- - 24 December 2014 at 12:57pm

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Posted: 24 December 2014 at 2:29pm | IP Logged
Awesome story..Clap
specially loved the last part..Embarrassed


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Posted: 24 December 2014 at 2:58pm | IP Logged
Lovely
Especially the last three lines! 
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Posted: 24 December 2014 at 5:11pm | IP Logged
thank you for realistic ishita- it is unbelievable what they're showing.  i really do think that ishita would face this kashmekash with herself over adi-shagun stay
loved raman and his silent, and not so silent ;), gestures
beautiful as always but i have to confess the story of your teacher touched me more than the os.  i think because with raman and ishita i expect romance but with a teacher you peg them in that hole so hard to see them as husband/wife to someone
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Posted: 24 December 2014 at 6:16pm | IP Logged
Firstly, thanks for the PM!

Next, can I just tell you that i love your inspiration story as much as I do your story itself, very lovely to hear things like that.

As for the story- wonderful.  Well written, very believable insecurities and  I adore the way RKB dealt with it all.

That last scene reminded me of Ishu imagining Raman confessing his love after she worked with Mani to save his Asian head title- what a wonderful memory.

Great job, hope to read more from you soon!Smile
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Posted: 24 December 2014 at 6:21pm | IP Logged
Lovely just lovely 
Am not watching this track so don't know if  this insecurities have begun but hats off to you for portraying them realistically which is so not how the cvs do it!!! 

Thanks for the lovely read 
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Posted: 24 December 2014 at 9:09pm | IP Logged
Awww B, that's such a sweet sweet story. So romantic yaara, now we have another Romance Queen. Clap Clap
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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 1:42am | IP Logged
That was absolutely Beautiful. *Jaw on the floor*
Simple, but brilliant. Kudos!

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