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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 5:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by exploringmyself

amazing!!!!!


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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 5:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -IshRaDivAn-

Awesome updates...
Loved both the parts..You did a fabulous job with their emotions..be it Ishita's dilemma after spending the night with him or be it his desperate need to have her in his his life. It wasn't just sleeping with her..but it was deeper than that, The best part of it was..it was his sexual need but also his heartfelt need to have her.. I loved how you showed both sides of his attraction towards her. Embarrassed

The confession part was simple yet very passionate! Blushing LOL..She is so innocent..The end bit was the cutest..Heart Embarrassed

Thanks for the awesome TS and the PM's..Loved it!!

Do write more.! :)


I am so happy that you liked it... I never thought I would accepted as a writer amoung all the brilliant people here...
Thanks so much!
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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 5:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by remya1990

Fabulous dear...
Your writing took me to another realm, especially the flashback scene. There was something very heartfelt, which I can't explain in words. But its really felt. Powerful use of words and language.
This could not have ended in the cutest way possible than what you have written.
Its really wonderful.


Thanks so much!
I am so glad that you liked it! This last part was very difficult for me, as you know I took nearly a week to built it up all... I am glad that it was readable! Embarrassed
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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 5:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweety2585

Awesome update..Tongue
Loved it..!!

Thanks for PM:)


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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 5:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ABBY92

I liked how it was almost love at first sight for Raman even though he didn't think it was. I'm glad that he came by to Ishita's house and confessed his feelings to her when she quit from his office. And Ishita's questions in the end were so endearing. She's so innocent and I guess that's what Raman loves about her.


I am so happy that you liked it!
I had to pour the innocence that I see in Ishita of the serial sometimes, gosh she is so gullible, and its so... Hot!Embarrassed
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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 5:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sulochana90

awesome

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Originally posted by Ishrafanno1

Nice


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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 5:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pomegranate

This was soo short, are you sure there isn't one more part left?
loved it, and happy that raman went back for ishita at the end.

thank you for writing this!


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No this was the end of this one!Embarrassed

Trust me, pleasure is all mine!Big smile
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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 5:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aishu_divan

This was absolutely brilliant dearClap..Truly amazing..very very hot n intenseBlushing..esp the way you expressed the love making in the first part.BlushingHeart.Absolutely mindblowing... beautiful piece of writing.. PLease write more oftenSmile


Thanks so much!Big smile

I am glad that you liked it... Ohh well the Love makingBlushing, I know... It could have been sensual but... perhaps next time I would make it even better and sensuous!Wink


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