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TS: Pleasure Of Pain (Mature) Last-Part Page 10 (Page 11)

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Posted: 02 January 2015 at 8:04am | IP Logged
suprb updte...
finally he confesed...
loved the way he made her his...
loved ishu nd her innocence...

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Posted: 02 January 2015 at 8:27am | IP Logged
amazing!!!!!

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Posted: 02 January 2015 at 9:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arshi21

I just came across this story. Loved it so far. Would love to read ahead. :)


Thanks so much!
It was the last part though!Big smile
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Posted: 02 January 2015 at 9:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aviana

awesome yaar .loved it n thanx fr d pm keep writing

Thanks!
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Posted: 02 January 2015 at 9:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by usaonly

It is  beautiful update.The way you write the emotion of Raman for Ishu  was  so good.The way he desperate to have her in his life and how he have patient around her was well written. I wish you can extend story some more so he finally will get her back with him and marry her or not.Still puzzle.Hope you will continue this story.Thank you.Smile


Thanks!
I am glad that you liked it, but this was the Last part, and I won't be continueing it, though I would come up with different fic soon.Wink

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Posted: 02 January 2015 at 9:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by swathin

lovely update
loved the last part


Thanks so much!Big smile
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Posted: 02 January 2015 at 10:37am | IP Logged
Awesome updates...
Loved both the parts..You did a fabulous job with their emotions..be it Ishita's dilemma after spending the night with him or be it his desperate need to have her in his his life. It wasn't just sleeping with her..but it was deeper than that, The best part of it was..it was his sexual need but also his heartfelt need to have her.. I loved how you showed both sides of his attraction towards her. Embarrassed

The confession part was simple yet very passionate! Blushing LOL..She is so innocent..The end bit was the cutest..Heart Embarrassed

Thanks for the awesome TS and the PM's..Loved it!!

Do write more.! :)

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Posted: 02 January 2015 at 11:19am | IP Logged
Fabulous dear...
Your writing took me to another realm, especially the flashback scene. There was something very heartfelt, which I can't explain in words. But its really felt. Powerful use of words and language.
This could not have ended in the cutest way possible than what you have written.
Its really wonderful.

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