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Fasle updated chappy 17 on pg 72 updated on 23/01/17 (Page 9)

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Lovely update... Remember the scene in JA, hope he meets Jo soon..
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Awesome story loved it.. Sorry for the late cmnt.. I was a bit busy..

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Awesome story loved it.. Sorry for the late cmnt.. I was a bit busy..
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nice update but very short

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Originally posted by aliyagupta

nice update but very short
I'll try and update long chapters
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Chapter- 3        

Love touches us one time and lasts for life time.-Anonymous

Jalal smiled after seeing blood flow down continuously from his hand.  He could clearly see that a pond of blood had formed due to the continuous dripping of blood. He felt a slight pain in his hand, but his happiness outweighed the pain. He was happy that he hurted himself. He very well knew that he deserved more pain than the pain that he has received right know, but first he needed to find her. He needed to know where is she is she in any trouble or is she safe and sound the way he wanted to find her. When Jalal was extremely busy thinking about his Jodha a peer baba comes. He takes out a white cloth and cautiously holds Jalal's right hand to Jalal's surprise.  He stares at the peer baba while the peer baba ties the white cloth on his right hand to prevent the flow of blood and to avoid infection due to air contact. The peer baba's smiles at way Jalal is staring at him. The peer baba speaks up- Aise kya dekh rahe ho? Jalal gets embarrassed by his childish act and stops staring at him and begins seeing down towards the ground. Jalal says - Voh... Hum. The peer baba silences him by saying - Hume kuch batane ki jarorat nahi hai. Hum tumhare bare mai sab jante hai. Tumhare parishanion ke bare mai bhi jante. Allah ne tumhare dua qubool kare li hai. Tumhari murad bohut jald puri ho jayegi .Tum bohut jaldi apni mohabbat se milo ge. Par kuhd ko takleef paunchake kya faida hoga? Yad rakhna kuch fasle dilon ke fasle mita dete hain.  Aur abhi yeh fasle tum done ke dil ke fasle humesha ke liye mita dega . Is bad tumhare bich kitne bhi fasle ajaye tumhare dil ek dosoron karib hi rahege. Tumhari mohabbat ki bahut parisha le li Allah ne.  Ab aur nahi. Ab tum dono mohabbat karne wale jald hi miloge. Aur phir mohabbat ki ek nayi dastaan suhru hogi. Jise pidyon tak yad raha jayega aur yeh mohabbat ki dastaan sunhere paono mai likhi jayegi. Khush raho. After saying this peer baba goes away, but Jalal was so lost after hearing his words that he had lost his senses. He was so happy, automatically he smiled and his smiled grew wider and wider until his smile had no more place to spread. He never felt so happy in his life that he had lived right know. He was so happy imagining how his life would be when his Jodha would be there with him forever and always. Suddenly he begins walking he does not where, but he is walking without his knowledge that he is walking.  Suddenly he falls down because he trips over a small stone. Jalal comes out of his dreamland and smiles at his stupidity. He sends a small prayer of thanks to Allah. He thinks after a long time of struggle I'm gonna met her, my Jodha, will be there in front of my very eyes. Jalal says- Is ke bad Jodha Begum hum kabhi bhi apko humese dur nahi jane denge. Apko humesha ke liye apna bana denge. Suddenly he realizes something that makes his face gloomy and lousy. He realizes that he has hurted Jodha beyond any extent and he still has doubt whether she will forgive him or not, because he had not questioned a mere woman or a Mughal woman's character. He had questioned a Rajvanshi woman's character and for a Rajvanshi her character, her dignity is everything and Jodha was not a mere Rajvanshi woman she was woman  for whom the cost of life was nothing compared for saving her dignity. She would give her life if somebody ever tried to touch and Alas! He had questioned such a woman's dignity, but he told himself Jalal thinks positively, she will forgive you. He says to himself - Jalal stop getting overexcited and too worried. First, you have to find her then you think what do next. How to convince her that you are really sorry. Jalal again begins his mission to find Jodha.  He goes from place to place again asking people for his Jodha, but again embraced failure, but he was not that disappointed as he used to be because he had hope because of peer baba's words. Jalal has no soldiers with him, he has sent to find Jodha. Jalal has been walking for a long time when he reaches near a forest which was very close by Mathura. He sees' a bunch of hooligans at some distance and he decides to go and ask them if they have seen his Jodha. He very well knew that these men were not nice, but how could he miss a chance for knowing about his Jodha. What if he missed this chance and these hooligans knew Jodha's whereabouts or had seen her. So, he goes and approaches them to their surprise, as no common man had the guts to face them, but little did they know who was facing them right know. Jalal speaks up humbly asking have they seen a woman with average age and height, her skin  colour fair porcelain and her hair were black, black as the night without stars, but little did Jalal did not know that these men were not only hooligans, but also were men who had lust for woman. Jalal sees' around and estimates that there were about some ten men. One man speaks up- Are bahya agar mil jaye toh hume bhi bata dena, agar sunte hoye itni sundr lag rahi toh dekhne mai toh... before he speak further Jalal speaks in a fit of rage- Jaban sambalke bat karo.  Second man speaks up- Dekhne mai toh Hindu lagte ho, par basha Muslim jaise hai tumhari bahya kya baat hai? Jalal says cooling down - Tumhe is se koi matlab?  Third man- Koi matlab nahi par use stri  ko jaror ek bari humare pas lana . Kamse kam ek din toh bita sakte hain na  uske sath. Jalal says- Apni had par mat karo. Tum nahi jante kit um kis par ungli utha rahe ho? Second man speaks again-  Akhir lagti kya hai voh tumhari? Jo tum itna bawle hoi jar a ho. Jalal- Humari Sharik E hayat hai voh. First man speaks up mockingly-  kahi kisi gair mard ke sath bagh toh nahi gaye. All the men there began laughing hysterically.This is more than even to make Jalal extremely angry who is already trying to control his anger. This man has poured oil on fire and he has no clue with whom he is messing with. Jalal thinks nobody has got the damn right to point at my Jodha's spotless character. Jalal roars- Tumhari yeh majal, and he takes out his khanjar which he has kept for emergency and kills the first man in the flick of second, shocking everybody present there. The other men present over there draw out their sword for the fight and Jalal uses the sword of the dead man. He kills seven men in few seconds, but he is also badly injured. He has deep gash on his cheek and arm and blood was continuously oozing out of his arm and cheek and he had a few minor bruises. The sword of Jalal and the left over three men were clashing and their swords' clashing sound has disturbed the peaceful environment. Jalal manages to kill one more man, know only two were left, but he began to feel weak and dizzy, because of the scorching heat and because he had not eaten anything since the morning. His vision begins to fade , but still two men were thirsty for his blood. He prays to Allah to give him strength. Suddenly he sees an elderly man fighting with the two men who were left and he faints of.

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Sorry 4 d errors, no proof reading done.So, guys how was it? Hope uliked it. Plzzz hit d like button and cmnt if u liked the update. Thanks 4 reading.

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