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She leaves a happy Jalal behind. He was happy because he was winning her back and he knew it for sure, her sarcastic remarks were her way of disguising her emotions as annoyance. She is never annoyed of him, she just acts because shes wants him to win her back. He looks at the tent and says- challenge accepted Jungilli billi, and goes inside to annoy her, but finds her sleeping, he thinks probably she is too tired so she dozed off so early. He goes near her and caresses her cheeks and gently pulls them, he did not know why but he had always found her cute, even though he never confessed it. He kisses on her forehead gently and says- tum sirf meri ho, aur tume hum banake he dam lenge, and he dozes off. Early in the morning the whole crew leaves for Agra as Jalal wanted to reach before nightfall.    Jodha had been stealing glances at Jalal during the whole journey. In, the way they stop that is when Jalal comes near Jodha comes and says- Lo hume agayeJodha gives him are you mad wala look. Jalal gives her I'm not mad look and says- Voh kya hai , Jungilli billi tum pure safar mai humari shakal dekhne ki koshish kar rahi thi, is liye socha darshan karwa lon. Jodha turns red due to embarrassment and says- Hume tume kab dekhe? Jalal says- Jungilli billi hume ishq kya koi khata ya chori nahi ki hai. Jodha says annoyed- Apni fati hoye shayari mara na band karo samjhe. Aur haan hume koi ishq vishk nahi hai tumshe samjhe. Aur tumhari shakal kya Kohinoor hai jo hum uske darshan kare? Jalal says- Tumhari nazar jidhar bas jaye voh cheej kohinnor se kimti ho jati hai . For a moment she was quite, but her razor- sharp tongue could not keep quite. So she says- Apne moh miyan mithu( it's a proverb probably used when one's praising himself/herself, but i'm not sure. Sorry if it's wrong) Apni shakal kabhi dhayan se iyene(mirror) mai dekhna phir pata chalega tum Kohinoor jaise nahi koliya jaise dikhti hai Jahanpanah and she smirks. Jalal says- apki nazaron nahi hume kise cheez ke kabil toh samjha, shukhriya and he leaves. She smiles and goes out to and sits in her palanquin. It's almost sun down when they reach Agra. Agra was decorated like a bride, welcoming its lost soul, its pride. Jodha feels touched with this gesture. Finally they were back in Agra, her abode. The place where she has bitter sweet memories, yet, now this was the place where she would love to spend the rest of her life. Her anxious hear was racing like the wind, wildly and untameable. She did not know how would people look upon her? With pity probably, probably not, with downcast eyes or with envy as Jalal had left everything for her. She had never confessed but it was true that his act made her fall for him again. Finally, they were entering the fort she closes the curtains of the palanquin as she was feeling shy correction awkward, that how will she have eye contact with everyone after that unfortunate incident. She kept on mumbling- Jodha calm down, everything is going to be alright, but it did not . She could hear the sound of the horse hooves fading away and finally everything seemed silent. All she could hear was her heart beating. She touches her left breast and feels her heart beating so fast and thinks if her heart beats any faster she might have a heart attack. She chides herself saying- shut up Jodha. Could you please shut up your big fat mouth? By now Jalal had dismounted from his stallion and he headed towards her, as he knew what might be going in her mind. He mentally says- I insulted you and threw you away from Agra, but I promise to restore your pride back, no matter what it costs. I promise I'll mend everything back. At least we can start a fresh again. All I need is your consent. Just once. .. He opens the curtains and says- chalo... giving her his hand. She nods indicating a no she didn't know why she behaved childishly. Jalal's eyes widen and he says softly- Hum hain tumhare saath. She shouts mentally on herself- Jodha stop acting like a baby and get up and get out, face the world. You have not done anything wrong. There's no fault in you. The fault lies within. And she holds his hand and gets up; she comes near his ears in such a way that it doesn't seem awkward and says to Jalal in her usual sarcastic tone- tum ho uski ka toh dar hai. There's a flower shower on her. HB immediately takes her into her embrace and inquires about her , so does Salima, but the most unhappiest of all were obviously Hukka Begum and Maham, their dismay could not been hidden from Jodha's eyes in spite of their rehearsed fake expressions, but she choose to ignore them like she had always done. Atgaha Sahab beamed with Joy, but her eyes were hunting for someone else, when she sees a small figure running towards her, she beams with joy. Rahim- Chotti Ammijan ap agaye? Jodha carries him and kisses on his forehead and says- haan Rahim ke pas toh hume ana he tha. Rahim makes a cute angry face and says - Apko pata hai yahan koi bhi achi kahaniyan nahi sonata. Ammijan bhi nahi, aur badi Ammijan ki kahaniyaan , kahani kam damki jayada lagti haiRukaiya looks with shock and anger. Jodha, Jalal, Salima and HB all try and control their laughter and manage to do so. Jodha says to pacify Ruks - Rahim aese nahi bolte voh apse badi hai. Salima takes Rahim and says- Rahim Chotti Amijaan safar se aye hai thak gaye hain bta. Unhe aram karne do. Rahim nods and leaves for his room. Jodha heads towards her chamber, she could here whispers from wherever she passed but she chose to ignore them for right know. As, right now her concern was how would she mange to survive in that HORROR ROOM, yes that's the new name she gave to her room. Horror room, the title just seemed so apt to her as the room now seemed more like a room in a haunted house, which is possessed by a spirit, but the only difference over here is that she would be not haunted by a ghost but by memories, bad memories worser than nightmares, which were scarier than ghosts. Moti calls her she says - haan. She notices that she has crossed the chamber. She turns back and enters her chamber and feels that the air of the chamber is trying to choke her up, and all the memories of that unfortunate night returned , become afresh again . She immediately steps out of the chamber Moti understands but she does not say a word. Jodha says to herself- You are brave Jodha. You can live in Horror house, you'll be alive. You can fight off that nightmare, those memories; you can keep them at bay. Remember when you were young Sujamal Bhaisa used to ask- who's the dauntless? You used to say me. So Jodha being dauntless does not mean only in the battle field. The person who is really dauntless is the one who manages his / her personal life without fear, so be the dauntless. Wake up Jodha does no Masa, Bapusa, Bhaisa or anyone to whom you can run for shelter. Your alone and probably will always be. So, be your own guardian angel, your own teacher. Don't let your emotions manipulate. You have suffered more than you could tolerate. You have suffered more than you deserved. And your pain has made you numb towards feelings do you understand, so just step in. Step in Jodha. Be the dauntless you always wanted be, and she steps in her chambers. She felt choked again but she did not run she whispered to the air around- try harder, this won't kill me and goes for getting fresh. She wore her dress, but it did not fir, it loosely hung on her body that is when she realizes the amount of weight she has lost. There's a knock on the door and a dasi comes with clothes she says Malika Azam ne bijvaya hai. Jodha nods and she keeps the clothes and leaves. Jodha feels more than grateful. She finishes her dressing up and stares at the mirror- She notices that she looked more like a bag of bones than a royal lady leave a queen. She feels bad.   Thats when Jalal enters, he says- Tumhari Khubsurati bayan nahi ho sakti. Jodha is surprised find him there. She is grateful for his compliment, but she maintains her poker face and says- ho gaya tumhara. Jalal says- Hum tayar toh sadiyon pehle hogaye the, vaise tum par yeh hara rang bahut jaj ta hai. Jodha looks with disbelief she should have known that it was him whom sent her the dress. Jodha looked at him and says- dhanyawad , humare pas tumse ladne ka samaye nahi, hume Ammijan ne bulaya haiJalal looks with disbelief and says- tum hume chod kar ja rahi ho? Jodha says- haan. Toh?   Jalal says- intizar kab tak hum karenge bhalla, jungilli billi ? Jodha says- Hume toh tume rukne ke liye nahi kaha. Tumhari Rukaiya Begum mari ja rahi hogi tumse milne ke liye and she leaves. Jalal says- Jungilli tumhe hume tadpane mai bahut mazak ata hain na ab humari bari and he gives his signature smirk and he leaves.
Promo- Jalal defends Jodha.
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akdha back to agraBig smile
poor jodha disturbed with bad memoriesCry
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Wow jo back to Agra. . Ja adamant win her back. ..interesting precap continue soon nd do pm

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