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Fasle updated chappy 17 on pg 72 updated on 23/01/17 (Page 67)

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Originally posted by SWARNA99

Lovely story. ...
Please update soon. .
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Chappy- 14

They all had been travelling in a caravan and it's almost nightfall.  Jalal decides to take rest he sees a rest house and decides to go and talk. All are allotted their tents.  The ladies were requested to go and give a hand in cooking, so Jodha leaves a dreamy Jalal who is busy remembering the day's events how childishly he had been stealing glances at Jodha as if he was her secret admirer, afraid of being caught by his lady loves father. He decides to go do his favourite business, irritate her.  After a while of hunting he finally spots her making chapattis it reminds him of the first time when they had come out as commoners, she was doing the same. He goes near and lightly hits her head to gain her attention and Jodha makes a stern look on her face and asks him-  Apne  yahan ane ka kasht kyun kiya hai Jahanpanah hume bol dete kiske dura  adesh deke, hum he ajate . Jalal says- voh kya hai na jungilli billi tumhe toh hume  yaad karne se rahi hume socha  hum he tumhe yaad karlete hain. Jodha says- Jahanpanah urf Jallad humare pas shabad he nahi  hai apna abhar parkat  karne ke liye. Ab jab Jallad tumne apni ankhon se dekhliya hai ki hum jivit hai toh tum ja sakte , khud toh kuch kam nahi kar sakte ho ,hum toh karne do. Jalal says- hume kam karna ata hai. Jodha says- toh karke dikho? He moves his hand forward to pick up the chapatti on the pan but in the process burns his hand as he keeps his hand on the pan as an immediate reaction he removes his hand and blows air on his hand.  Jodha feels concerned but keeps  her stern look on and hits her head with her hand and says- na jane kya soch kar Kanah ne hamare vivah is Jallad se karvaya. Kuch bhi kam sahi se nahi kar sakte sivaye yeh bolne ke hum Shehanashah Jalalludin Mohammad hai, humare pas dil nahi, aur pura Hindustan hum se khoof khata hai. Jalal smirks at her statement and makes puppy face and says- kya hua Jungilli billi  tumhe apne masum shohar par daya nahi arahi dekho humare  hath jal gaya. Tum kya kehti ho, haan insaniyaat. Tum humesha insaniyat ke path(lesson) padathi ho, ab tumhari andar insaniyat nahi hai kya?  Jodha feels a bit embarrassed but gives him a look, which Jalal could easily read it as innocent and you my foot. Jodha says defending herself- humari insaniyat kahin nahi gaye. Asal mai kya hain na Jallad jo jaise hai uske saath vaise he pesh ana chaiye toh, isliye tum Jallad ho toh tumhare saath Jalladon walla vehvar(behaviour) he karna padega na. Vahan par ek   matka hai paani dal lo apne hath mai  thodi se rahat milegi. Jalal is stubborn enough to tend his wounds himself and Jodha notes it, but now she could not keep her worry aside she gets up and gives him a hand to get up and says- chalo hum hi kar dete hain.  Hati (stubborn)kahin ke. Jalal holds her hand tightly but does not get up further annoying her Jodha says-Jahanpanah tum uthne ka kasht karoge toh hum tumhare bahut abhari honge.  Jalal gives a wide smile sways his head indicating a no, this further annoys her, she is busy looking here and there to  stop her  outburst of  anger , that is when  Jalal suddenly gets up with a jolt, Jodha who  was not ready falls down  in the process . Jalal bites his lips in order control his smile which is creeping in uncontrollably, Jodha gives him I am going to kill you  look and  dusts of her clothes and she is  about to get up when Jalal gives her his hand and makes a shocked expression and says- Hoh! Jungilli billi tum kitne kamjoor hogaye ho, lo humare hath padk lo varna  vapas se gir jaogi. Tumhare ander jan he nahi. Agra  jake ache se kaha lenna , phir hume uthalene. Jodha looks shocked, and is about to get up on her own when Jalal takes advantage and holds her hand pulls her towards him, she comes banging her body with his she immediately hugs him to gain stability, but Jalal enjoys it, and he says- Tumhe apne shohar ka faida uthna ache se ata hai jungilli billi. With this statement Jodha realizes what she is doing she immediately breaks the hug and  bites her lip to control her smile and  blush and finally manages to do so and says- Hum aur tumhara faida uthenge, apni shakal dekhi hai . Voh bas... Jalal cuts her and says in a husky tone- voh bas.. kya? Jodha could fell her heart racing, her heart says to her- You are losing it. Jodha says- Voh bas kya, matlab  kya hai tumhara? Galti hogaye.  Aur  tumhe  mai uthongi? Pagal toh nahi hogaye ho? Hume toh bhul he gaye the tum toh Agra ke Pagal khanne ke Jahanpanah ho , is nate tum sabse bade pagal hua na, apna wajan(weight) jante ho , hathi(elephant) se bhi bhari hoge  tum. Aur hum hathi nahi uthte. Chalo ab tumhe dard nahi ho raha, and drags him towards the pot. Jalal says in a husky tone- tumhari is galti ne hamare dil ko khush  kardiya. Jodha blushes at this statement but thankfully Jalal does not notice this as she is busy talking water from the pot, she gently pours the water gently blowing air on the burn that is when Jalal says - agar hum hathi hain toh use nate tum bhi hathi ho, kyunki tum humari biwi. Aur vaise bhi tum hathi jaise he dikhti ho, moti (fat).  R.. He decides to keep quite seeing Jodha's facial expressions.  Jodha gives a fierce glare as he she knew who he is going to refer and thinks I am fat. Is he blind? I am not going to leave him at least this time, He does not even have a brain to think that calling a girl fat is indecency and takes out water and throws water on his face and says -  aur hum. Moti hogi  tumhari  jotti(shoe, tumhari Begum. That is when she realizes what she had done she has to correct her statement, so she says- Humare matlab Begum se tumhari Rukaiya Begum, kyunki voh bhi bilkul tumahri thara hain, nirday. Mano jaise mere Kanaha aur tumhare Khuda ne Jodi banaye ho.   Jao aur chulu bahar pani me dob maro, ya phir kahin aur jake mar kyun nahi jate and leaves angrily. Jalal smiles and thinks woman have different ways of venting their jealously out and think if Rukaiya comes to know she will kill Jodha. By the way the last time I had seen Rukaiya I did notice that she is gaining weight but I could not tell her, would have loved to see her reaction when she would hear what Jodha said and shouts form behind saying- tumhari mohabbat mai toh til- til  ke mar he rahe.  Tumhare tekhi juban aur nazar jab dekho humare dil pe ban chale rahe   hote hain aur vaise bhi tumari mohabbat mai toh maut bhi  manjoor hai hume. The last line melts Jodha's heart further she smiles and leaves.  After some time everyone is eating food, Jalal notes that the couples are sitting together and eating but Jodha is nowhere to be found.  That is when she comes with to plates of food and keeps it in front of him and says- Jahanpanah apka bhojan hazir hai. Jalal smiles he notes that he has been given chapattis and curd whereas Jodha is eating chapattis and vegetable. Jalal says- hum yeh kahanna hai. Jodha say - Jaise apki icha Jahanpanah  Jallad and switches his plate with hers and she starts eating curd and chapatti. Jalal takes a bite with his left hand as his right has been burnt the moment he keeps the morsel of food he could feel that his tongue is on fire, he could feel tears roll down his eyes. Jodha gives him water he immediately drinks it, and it soothes his burning insides. Jodha says- Isliye kehte hain jintna dimag hai utna he chalna chaiye. Jalal immediately understands why he has been given curd instead of vegetable he could feel his heart race in joy, he says- shukhriya. Jodha says- theek hai, jasbati hone ki jarorat nahi and gives him back his plate. Jalal smiles at her. Jodha who has been eating her food peacefully could note Jalal's struggle while eating as he is not used to his left hand, she is finding it hard to control herself form going and feeding him. She says to herself Jodha control yourself. Remember you are angry on him, you are upset with him. Only if she could go somewhere else where she could ignore him, but then people will think wrong, finally she gives up. She goes and keeps his plate on her lap to his surprise and forwards the morsel of food towards him, he smiles and eats the food, after a while he notes that she has put forward the last morsel of his food, naughtiness sparks in his mind, while eating the morsel of food he knowingly bites her fingers, she immediately withdraws her hand in anger and leaves. Jalal could see her anger is serious and he also notices that she has not eaten her food he goes behind her with the plate towards the tent.  She sits on the bed with her hands crossed. Jalal comes near and sits beside her and keeps the plate aside and says- Kahanna kha lo, he puts the plate forward. Jodha says- hume bhok  nahi hai. Jalal says- Acha baba hume muaff kardo agli bar se aise kuch nahi karenge. Jodha says angrily- Nahi hume bhojan chaiye aur na hum tum shama karenge, jao yahan se. Jalal smirks and says- Pyaar se manjao Jungilli billi varna.. Jodha looks at him and says- varna kya? Hum darte thodi hai tumhare dhamkion se. Zabardasti khiloge hume bhojan. Khila ke dekho, hum tumhara kya hushr(condition) karenge? Jalal says- tum apne Jallad  ko itna bhi nahi samjhti Jungilli billi zabardasti karna ata he nahi. Hum toh kuch aur karne vale hain. Jodha says- Jo karna hai kar lo hume nahi khanna. Jalal says- sachi, chalo jab tume izazat dehi de hai toh kar lete hain and he kisses on her checks.

Promo- probably more Akdha

Sorry for the errors. Hope you like the update, because I enjoyed a lot while writing.  If you liked the update please cmnt and hit the like button. Criticisms are also welcomed.  Thanks for reading, love Ana. 



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Lovely update Ana just loved their fighting nd ja teasing . ..pls update next chapi soon nd do pm
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Joja nokjoke woow supurb chappy dr
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