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AKDHA FF: AASHIQUI (chapter - 3 , pg - 8 updated) (Page 5)

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 9:54pm | IP Logged
you are doing great
suggestions: write smaller and longer chappies... Big smile
loving your ff a lot..do pm me dear! Clap

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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 10:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by anael24

you are doing great
suggestions: write smaller and longer chappies... Big smile
loving your ff a lot..do pm me dear! Clap
thank you for your suggestion i will try my best to write longer chapters and will update soon.Smile
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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 10:21pm | IP Logged
nice update pls pm me whenever update
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Posted: 28 December 2014 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
AWESOME FF...Clap
SO JODHA HAD MISUNDERSTOOD JALAL...Wink
PRECAP SEEMS INTERESTING...LOL
UPDATE SOON...Day Dreaming
AND CAN U PLZ PM ME .. IF POSSIBLE...WinkBig smile
A UPDATE A LONG CHAPPY...Wink
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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 12:24am | IP Logged
Hi
Nice update
So jalal is innocent...
Pls clear their misunderstanding
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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 5:05am | IP Logged
awesome , continue soon and do pm me
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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 5:40am | IP Logged
So JJ are friends before, but Jo misunderstood Jalaal in the matter of Adham.. Waiting for next update.. Clap

One suggestion will you wirte little bit bigger chapters dear...
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Posted: 01 January 2015 at 1:49am | IP Logged
CHAPTER - 3 (TEASER)
"But i never wrote this message! in fact I am shocked to see this since during that time I was struck in some em migration procedures and I was not able to come to India!" answered a shocked Jalal.
"What!!!!!!!!!!!! you dont even anything that happened 2 years ago?????" 
"but may I ask you something?"
"puchhoo."
"aisa kya hua tha Kritika di aur adham ke beech mein jo tum mujhse itni naraaz thi?"
"Adham kritika di ko Blackmail kar raha tha. usne di ki ekk video banali aur unhe majboor kar diya ki agar unhone uski koi baat nahi maani to woh video leak kar dega. usne di ko bahut torture kiya, aur jab uska man bhar  gaya to usne unko maar dala aur to aur usne sare sabut bhi mita diye. Yeh sab dekhke mummy - pappa ne bhi suicide kar liya. Usne meri puri family ko barbaad kar diya!" Jodha said completely breaking down.
"Jab mujhe tumhari jarurat thi tab tumne mana kar diya yeh soch kar main tumse bhi nafrat karne lagi." she continued, her cry converting into sobs.Cry



i will update soon.


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