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#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) (Page 99)

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 3:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by charanyaaj

Yup doneSmile
Waiting buddy

Thanks my devil pupil! A big devilish hug from me! Evil SmileHug

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 3:20am | IP Logged
Oh my my Mahi u r really the Devil Queen what a double dose dhamaka yaar Clap Clap Clap. Shlok's past is so dark I can't condemn him for his darkness feel so sorry n Cry for that child who lost his mother n asking warmth from her dead body that's really heart wrenching. Astha in her blabbering nature awake beast in him n he take win his challenge she try her best to protest but finally she give up to her dark desire. That part was really very very hot n sensuous Wink. Now I'm eagerly waiting to see what will be Shlok's next step after having his prey fully in his control update soon. Thank u so much for PM dear muahhh Big smile.

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 3:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jhumjhum

Oh my my Mahi u r really the Devil Queen what a double dose dhamaka yaar Clap Clap Clap. Shlok's past is so dark I can't condemn him for his darkness feel so sorry n Cry for that child who lost his mother n asking warmth from her dead body that's really heart wrenching. Astha in her blabbering nature awake beast in him n he take win his challenge she try her best to protest but finally she give up to her dark desire. That part was really very very hot n sensuous Wink. Now I'm eagerly waiting to see what will be Shlok's next step after having his prey fully in his control update soon. Thank u so much for PM dear muahhh Big smile.

Thank you so much sweetie! Hug Yep Shlok has grown into a sadist because of his dark past. You really noticed and understood his flashback! Thanks dear! Big smile

And agree with you Astha truly woke up the beast inside him, but in the process her earthly desires, that were hidden inside her for so long were brought to the surface. And that too by his beast. EmbarrassedWink

Thanks dear, you are welcome! And will continue soon buddy! Wink

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 3:46am | IP Logged
Marvelous updates,written brilliantly

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 4:07am | IP Logged
       WOW!!! MAHI IT WAS                            
     


Edited by .Biggi. - 06 January 2015 at 4:10am

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 4:12am | IP Logged
Mahi...thanks so much for the note..it helped me a lot as I knew what to expect..never thought this will come this fast..poor thing didn't know what hit her...I feltbad for astha as she didn't have a choice.waiting for the day when he realizes the pain he has given her..eventhough I expected her to fight a little more...u know what I liked the most she didn't beg...eventhough it was his plan to make her beg through seduction...he completely forgot about that .now he didn't know what hit him...Wow...mahi
U r a superb writer..
Thanks so much for the double dose..
Waiting for the next  dear.




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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 4:17am | IP Logged
Mahiii..Mahiii..MahiiiPartyWhat an update buddy..Blushing
You are such a sizzling writer oh my god..!!!Star

No chappals, No dandaas, No tomatoes and No eggs...Here take all my hugs..Hug and loveHeart

You are a blessed writer dearest...Big smile

Hmm ..Now coming to my comments..

PART 21

Aastha really got herself hurtLOL it was funny the way shlok was staring at her...

But still her helped her up and then he has those flashbacks againShocked Poor thing..I feel so much pity for that kid Shlok now..Cry Such a sad and touching flashback it was..

But then our sarcasm queen can't keep her mouth shut and she taunts him.. D'ohand the Devil is back again..Wink

Hmm and what followed after that...I have no words Mahi..You are just brilliant..

Their sexual act was scorching hot and their chemistry is just mind blowing..Blushing I can't deny that this dark lustful love of Shlok is getting into my veins and I am craving more for this drug..Wink


Edited by hp_2006 - 06 January 2015 at 4:14am

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 4:20am | IP Logged

Awesome, fabulous double update! Star

But I really don't know what to feel right now...

First I feel bad for Shlok. A young boy losing her mother.. It must be devastating for him.  

So in a way I can understand his hatred. Such a emotional flashback.

But is right thing to take a revenge on Astha? She is unaware of her dad's crimes.

And their union Blushing -> I didn't see that to come. It was very sensuous and hot scene, very well written too.

But I wonder did it break Astha's spirit? I hope she will not be his "puppet" from now on.

And will Shlok ever be able to feel something else than hatred, like regret or sorrow? Will he ever be able to feel love, sympathy?

And the final question; what will Shlok do next?

 

Thanks for pm.

Continue soon!Hug

 

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