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#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) (Page 98)

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 1:50am | IP Logged
Maahi...BlushingBlushing
it was wait worthy update ...2 chaps full of Aashlok or say hot burning scorching AashlokBlushing

i literally did not expect  their final union not at all maahi.. but it was really surprising and shocking for me ...how could she give up yaarD'oh

hope after this encounter he feel different for her and make her to stay with him with love and care unlike past days... but same time i want aasth to teasing n torturing shlok and making him insane for her

and shlok to feel her pain he gave her and regret Disapprove

Wonderful writer you are maahi Clap
feeling blessed to have you on this forum
TF PM
UPDATE SOONEmbarrassed


Edited by SahriShrAvi - 06 January 2015 at 1:49am

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Wow awesome 
Hot Hot!!
Love it 

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 2:07am | IP Logged
Chapter 20&21:
 
Mahi...u r truely a gifted writer sweety...
 
u set the table on fire...
 
Its tooo hot to handle my dear...
 
I feel really sorry for astha...why she has to pay this much for her father's deed...
 
Is giving pain is the best solution of pain...
 
shlok would have seen the pain and cry from his aai and Taai...
 
dont he feel bad and sad when he see the same pain and cry from astha...
 
does he find peace and happiness when he see her like this...
 
its really a very hot update and u have written it so well...
 
u deserve a big hug for write such an dark romance dear...
 
Thanks for the wonderful treat...
 
 

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 2:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by charanyaaj

This is for u my evil queen
Rose accepted my pupil! Evil SmileLOL
Thank u for the double doseWink My devilish pleasure buddy! Evil SmileWink
I have no words to say.. U beautifully explain the emotions of them Clap
Its beautiful.. Thanks dear your evil queen too loved writing about it! Evil SmileLOL
I feel pity for astha she already fell down and gt injured plus shlok hurting her physically and mentally.. Yep but she didn't feel that hurt while Ahem Ahem! EmbarrassedLOL
See one day shlok is going to burn on the fire which he kept for astha...
Poor astha! Planning to run away but as usual she gotCryCry 
Yep she is stuck with him forever! Evil SmileWink
Waiting to see next confrontation...Wink Will continue soon buddy! Evil Smile

P.S: don't forget to hit the like button dear! LOL


Edited by mahirmukhtar - 06 January 2015 at 2:51am

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 3:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SahriShrAvi

Maahi...BlushingBlushing
it was wait worthy update ...2 chaps full of Aashlok or say hot burning scorching AashlokBlushing
Thanks Sahrish! Embarrassed

i literally did not expect  their final union not at all maahi.. but it was really surprising and shocking for me ...how could she give up yaarD'ohNope she didn't give up, she just followed her basic instincts and he had wanted to beg him, but she didn't beg, and they both fell equally in lovemaking! EmbarrassedWink

hope after this encounter he feel different for her and make her to stay with him with love and care unlike past days... but same time i want aasth to teasing n torturing shlok and making him insane for her Yep she will, not beg, but will make him crazy for her. From lust to love! Wink

and shlok to feel her pain he gave her and regret Disapprove Yep he will in the future! Wink

Wonderful writer you are maahi Clap Thank you so much dear! Big smile
feeling blessed to have you on this forum Really feeling overwhelmed buddy! Embarrassed
TF PM
UPDATE SOONEmbarrassed Will do buddy! Wink

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 3:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sathuraj

Chapter 20&21:
 
Mahi...u r truely a gifted writer sweety... 
 
u set the table on fire...
 
Its tooo hot to handle my dear... 
Thank you so much sat! Big smile
Dear your words means a lot to me! Hug
 
I feel really sorry for astha...why she has to pay this much for her father's deed...
 
Is giving pain is the best solution of pain...
 
shlok would have seen the pain and cry from his aai and Taai...
 
dont he feel bad and sad when he see the same pain and cry from astha...
 
does he find peace and happiness when he see her like this... He's grown into a sadist with time, some people break down when they feel pain and some grow in to a sadist, hurting others, so that the burning pain that they feel inside can somewhat lessen. And on top of that he also see Avdhoot in Astha. When he'll understand her as an individual and will know that she is not her father, then he'll regret for what he had done!
 
its really a very hot update and u have written it so well... Thanks sweetie! Big smile
 
u deserve a big hug for write such an dark romance dear... Thank you so much dear! Big smile
 
Thanks for the wonderful treat... My pleasure buddy! Hug
 
 

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 3:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hajr

Wow awesome 
Hot Hot!!
Love it 

Thank you so much dear! Big smile
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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 3:17am | IP Logged
Yup doneSmile
Waiting buddy

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