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#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) (Page 96)

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 12:24am | IP Logged
Sweety...ur writer note...
 
my god...u r giving us so much warning...
 
dont worry dear...we dont throw tomato or eggs on you...
 
whoever love ur writing wont do that...
 
if they find it too hard...they have the right to critise ur writing...
 
but the love they have on your writing will not reduce...
 
i am rushing to read the update...
 
will comment as soon as i finish reading...

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 12:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Elation

Thanks for the note! Evil Smile
Contemplating whether to read or ROFL

If you laugh at it jessie then Mahi gonna gobble you up! Evil SmileLOL

Do read it you'll not regret it i know! Evil SmileEmbarrassed

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 12:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Efinah36

Great updates
Hot hot hot Embarrassed

Thanks dear! EmbarrassedWink
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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 1:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by potomac

Speechless mahi...totally worth the wait...gifted writer is an understatement...please let us know when u make it big...I am sure you will...Clap...awestruck with ur word choices and the pace of the story...it was the hottest update till date...I felt bad for astha...a gal should never go through what she had been through...shlok is a normal guy with the devil mask...my fear is nothing worse should happen when he falls apart...hmmm.once he avengeS astha ..he will remove the mask...in front of Avdoot I guess...then astha will choose who...am I anywhere close to your storyLOL...awesome update dear...keep up ur good workThumbs Up

Thank you so much Deepa! Big smile Your words of appreciation means a lot to me! Hug

Yep it was bad for Astha, Ouch but she couldn't help herself, infront of his dark seduction. EmbarrassedWink

And about closer to my story, i should say you are beginning to understand me buddy, WinkLOLmind turning develish! Evil SmileLOLLOL

And thanks again Deepa! Big smile Will continue it! Wink

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 1:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ChattyRach

Dearest Mahir!!  Don't ever change Your fab story and your dark demonic Shlok!!! We love him... If i wanted a Sugar Romance i would read something else!! I don't. .. i love your story and the way u write!!! These 2 chapters were fantastic! And despite the way Shlok went around it to begin with he felt something for sure apart from the obvious! ! It was not  just sex for either off them...it was  hot and sensual. The fact that he made her look at him when she fell apart means he cares, he needed her to acknowledge it was him!! Oh yes it does..lol... he just dosen't know it yet. In fact it reminded me off a song by The Veronicas called "You Ruin Me" ( some off the lyrics) .Standing Ovation, You got what u wanted, i guess u won!! You play me like a symphony! play me till your fingers bleed!!!
I Can't wait for the next update and the morning after ... Clap

Thank you so much Rach! Big smile And nope not gonna change the storyline or Shlok! Wink

And thanks dear for your kind words of appreciation! HugI'm happy that you like my writing! Big smile

And yep Shlok was totally in the act and wanted her to feel pleasure too, and acknowledge him as her lover! Wink Thanks dear for telling me about the song. I'll definitely listen it. Wink I love those kind of songs. Tongue

And will continue soon buddy! Wink

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 1:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Surish

Sizzling, seductive, hot erotica bundle!Almost had be completely singed beyond recognition! Excellent! Let the fire burn!

Thank you so much Surish for your comments! And agree with you buddy i'm definitely gonna let the fire burn! EmbarrassedWink
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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 1:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by bobbiedhillon

Hot hot hot update...Wink

Thanks bobbie! Wink
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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 1:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by swathin

omg
too cruel with too hot 

Thanks dear for your comments! EmbarrassedWink

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