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#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) (Page 93)

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 3:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sathuraj

Chapter 20&21:
 
Mahi...u r truely a gifted writer sweety... 
 
u set the table on fire...
 
Its tooo hot to handle my dear... 
Thank you so much sat! Big smile
Dear your words means a lot to me! Hug
 
I feel really sorry for astha...why she has to pay this much for her father's deed...
 
Is giving pain is the best solution of pain...
 
shlok would have seen the pain and cry from his aai and Taai...
 
dont he feel bad and sad when he see the same pain and cry from astha...
 
does he find peace and happiness when he see her like this... He's grown into a sadist with time, some people break down when they feel pain and some grow in to a sadist, hurting others, so that the burning pain that they feel inside can somewhat lessen. And on top of that he also see Avdhoot in Astha. When he'll understand her as an individual and will know that she is not her father, then he'll regret for what he had done!
 
its really a very hot update and u have written it so well... Thanks sweetie! Big smile
 
u deserve a big hug for write such an dark romance dear... Thank you so much dear! Big smile
 
Thanks for the wonderful treat... My pleasure buddy! Hug
 
 

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 3:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hajr

Wow awesome 
Hot Hot!!
Love it 

Thank you so much dear! Big smile
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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 3:17am | IP Logged
Yup doneSmile
Waiting buddy

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 3:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by charanyaaj

Yup doneSmile
Waiting buddy

Thanks my devil pupil! A big devilish hug from me! Evil SmileHug
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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 3:20am | IP Logged
Oh my my Mahi u r really the Devil Queen what a double dose dhamaka yaar Clap Clap Clap. Shlok's past is so dark I can't condemn him for his darkness feel so sorry n Cry for that child who lost his mother n asking warmth from her dead body that's really heart wrenching. Astha in her blabbering nature awake beast in him n he take win his challenge she try her best to protest but finally she give up to her dark desire. That part was really very very hot n sensuous Wink. Now I'm eagerly waiting to see what will be Shlok's next step after having his prey fully in his control update soon. Thank u so much for PM dear muahhh Big smile.

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 3:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jhumjhum

Oh my my Mahi u r really the Devil Queen what a double dose dhamaka yaar Clap Clap Clap. Shlok's past is so dark I can't condemn him for his darkness feel so sorry n Cry for that child who lost his mother n asking warmth from her dead body that's really heart wrenching. Astha in her blabbering nature awake beast in him n he take win his challenge she try her best to protest but finally she give up to her dark desire. That part was really very very hot n sensuous Wink. Now I'm eagerly waiting to see what will be Shlok's next step after having his prey fully in his control update soon. Thank u so much for PM dear muahhh Big smile.

Thank you so much sweetie! Hug Yep Shlok has grown into a sadist because of his dark past. You really noticed and understood his flashback! Thanks dear! Big smile

And agree with you Astha truly woke up the beast inside him, but in the process her earthly desires, that were hidden inside her for so long were brought to the surface. And that too by his beast. EmbarrassedWink

Thanks dear, you are welcome! And will continue soon buddy! Wink

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 3:46am | IP Logged
Marvelous updates,written brilliantly

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Posted: 06 January 2015 at 4:07am | IP Logged
       WOW!!! MAHI IT WAS                            
     


Edited by .Biggi. - 06 January 2015 at 4:10am

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