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#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) (Page 89)

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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 5:13pm | IP Logged
Dearest Mahir!!  Don't ever change Your fab story and your dark demonic Shlok!!! We love him... If i wanted a Sugar Romance i would read something else!! I don't. .. i love your story and the way u write!!! These 2 chapters were fantastic! And despite the way Shlok went around it to begin with he felt something for sure apart from the obvious! ! It was not  just sex for either off them...it was  hot and sensual. The fact that he made her look at him when she fell apart means he cares, he needed her to acknowledge it was him!! Oh yes it does..lol... he just dosen't know it yet. In fact it reminded me off a song by The Veronicas called "You Ruin Me" ( some off the lyrics) .Standing Ovation, You got what u wanted, i guess u won!! You play me like a symphony! play me till your fingers bleed!!!
I Can't wait for the next update and the morning after ... Clap

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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 5:38pm | IP Logged
This is for u my evil queen

Thank u for the double doseWink
I have no words to say.. U beautifully explain the emotions of them Clap
Its beautiful..
I feel pity for astha she already fell down and gt injured plus shlok hurting her physically and mentally..
See one day shlok is going to burn on the fire which he kept for astha...
Poor astha! Planning to run away but as usual she gotCryCry
Waiting to see next confrontation...Wink


Edited by charanyaaj - 06 January 2015 at 1:23am

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Sizzling, seductive, hot erotica bundle!Almost had be completely singed beyond recognition! Excellent! Let the fire burn!

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Posted: 05 January 2015 at 8:03pm | IP Logged
Hot hot hot update...Wink

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Reader's NoteLOL
Choco chip ...you writing essays to warn me/readers won't stop us from reading bcos you know the reason...WE'RE ADDICTEDLOL
Then even after reading ur so called warning...laughed my hearts content and scrolled down to read my doseLOL early in the morningSleepy
Results: was totally intoxicated...so prep bf was the last thing in my mindStern Smile so only managed to prep some toast which was not at all edible..ROFL so made some hot hot noodles for myself...selfish me..slurpTongueLOL
And my MIL who's already sick..bcm numb like asthu...seeing me changing colours like a rainbow reading something in my phoneWackoROFL 


CommentLOL
Choco chip love ya for double delightHug...kinda overdoseLOL but loved itEvil Smile
Ikr..u asked me to remove my rosy glassesGeek but i couldn't...so I thought he won't do anything*cough* that was somewhat unexpectedStern Smile
I better not talk about astha and her agony.. you have written it with such description and detailing...thati felt everything was happening with me...It took a while to clear my head...am just reading itOuch my heart goes to all the astha's of the world!
Take a bow my dear choco chip for writing  fantabulous updatesHug



Edited by Priya_ShrAvi - 06 January 2015 at 7:28am

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omg
too cruel with too hot 

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awesome update loved it thanks for pmSmile

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I just asked forthe update and here it is...woo hoo.

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