Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon... Ek Baar Phir


Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon... Ek Baar Phir
Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon... Ek Baar Phir

#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) (Page 83)

swathin IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 10:57pm | IP Logged
superb update

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vj3072 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 11:15pm | IP Logged
OMG...what Astha planning????...hope she don't get caught. Shlok slowly falling for her beauty Big smile

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srilotus IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 03 January 2015 at 11:24pm | IP Logged
Awesome updates Mahi Clap
ch-17 n 18 fantastic...liked how Astha fought back in ch18
n the asked how many kidnapped women LOLLOL
Mahi ,want to see Astha as tigress ...Shlok falling yr...too goodClap

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ss1609 Goldie

Joined: 27 October 2014
Posts: 1537

Posted: 03 January 2015 at 11:39pm | IP Logged
Awwsome mahi!!!! par mein tumse katti hoon yaar... Made us wait 4 long days yaar and a small update too...
Chalo maaf karthi hoon par ek condition hai, ek chpt full ashlok ke de de yaar.
Show wale tho nahi dethein tu tho de yaar plzzz...

Awesome update dear and thanks for the pm...

(uff hate typing on a phone very difficult )
(and a big hi to all the gals [:D] sorry guys still on phone
and i know all if gals r mahi's fans and wont miss her ff so im wishing
u all girls a happy new year here and sorry a bit late. join u guys soon.)

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Sandy198 Senior Member

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Posts: 678

Posted: 03 January 2015 at 11:53pm | IP Logged
loving the mystery.. when will they fall in love ? *being hopeful*, :-P

Love your way of writing...
happy new year 2015 !

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Subhashiniiiii Goldie

Joined: 09 April 2014
Posts: 1031

Posted: 04 January 2015 at 12:11am | IP Logged
U nailed the Poem Very well Thumbs Up..Its deliberates The Status of Avadhoot Ouch
Ramlal Followed Shlok instructions and he spoken only the details 
that Shlok want convey them...I wonder How ths ramlaal Connected to Shlok did he related to his Family in anyways Confused  thats he obeying Shlok Knowing Avadhoot is Cruel tooDead
Okey Now my Doubt cleared that Avadhoot Loves his Daughter  Sleepy Torn and Blooded cloths...Jarroor Shlok ne Chicken ko Mardiya Hoga aur Uski blood Cloths ko lagadiya Hoga LOL
He remains still that incident he Seeing Astha in her postion ...
Yes Master Player come to his knees now..Shlok is succeed some extent ...
Love the Pic Thumbs Up
Come to  Ashlok What Shlok didn't Seduced her instead he behaved with her harm lessly Heart. ..
its surprising ..I thought Its They try win their Bet together Cry ..Cheater MahiAngry
Any Way one positive Vibe come From Shlok he mesummarised with beauty of Astha for few minuets but he remember who is she is  Angry 
Astha Go girl Devil Melting do some more tricky so he can fall for u Embarrassed
haha She wanted to go Loo ..The entire situation remainds me The Transporter Scene

I have to Pee otherwise i will do into Ur car ..Like that Astha warned him ROFL
I think Astha not Thinking about at perticular time Run away From him..its Long term Plan ..she Planned short term Plan to escaping his seduction Evil Smile which makes her weak infront of him
Any Way Lets see what will Happen if she busted ..eagrously waitining for Next Update Day Dreaming  

Edited by Subhashini_chow - 04 January 2015 at 4:47am

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Sajiie Goldie

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Posted: 04 January 2015 at 12:21am | IP Logged
Brilliant Mahi..ClapClapClap
U r wicked mahi LOLwho got me addicted to ur ransacked soon as I see ur pm I will read that before proceeding to any other job,,,u r a bad girl mahi..LOLlook at me ..addicted badly
first u scared me with his devlishness and now u r showing his tenderness..
I was waiting for my holidays to be over to frame a proper reply to I felt if I write one instantly it will not justify..what I am feeling..
Loved the stubbornness in astha ..please keep her like that itself. Not bending down to his desires easily..then only he will realize there r such woman too in this world...who would not dance to his tunes. Loved the last chapter where some cracks happened in his cold self...showed some emotions..
Waiting for more...
Mahi this is my wish ..he realizes his mistakes  before it's too its imp for him to realize he is making her same as his dear ones by doing doing this he is becoming avdhoot...astha already has a soft corner for him as she can't see him suffer..loved the way story is shaping up...u r a phata ka mahi where were u before...
Waiting for next one ..
Forgot one thing mahi the pictures it's captures the essence of story ...mindblowing mahi...

Edited by Honeypot - 04 January 2015 at 1:17am

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mahirmukhtar IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 January 2015 at 1:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Efinah36

Awesome Update
Very exciting what happens next
Update soon

Thank you so much dear! Big smile Will update soon! Wink

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