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#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) (Page 7)

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Posted: 23 December 2014 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
Contratz on ur new thread

Sorry for going missing some days

Actually my bro is fighting to get the laptop just now I got some time only for 1 hour

And again I am here with my review LOL Embarrassed

Part 6

Great start buddyyy
A horrible nightmare
It seems like something is really bad gonna happennn

Even I don't believe in superstitions but my heart something is waiting for aastha outside in her future storeee
Let's were what r u gonna Sooo mahiii

Ohh man SHLOK is angryyy
Very very much angryyy

Bappa aastha ko raksha karo
Poor tinyyy due to her he is roaming like a caged tiger

Another twist
He wanna take revenge from her for longgg timeee
That's horrible for why?????

First innocence and now spirit tooo
Sounds interesting mahiii

What he had done by ordering someone through phone
Hmmm ... I love suspenses
Let's seee

Poor tiny is frightenecdd alottt
And the nightmare is adding fuel to her scariness
And even she can't concentrate on her fronds birthday party tooo

Okay wait...she is going to a washroom with out reading the out of order sign in it
(Hitting my nails n want to read more)
What r u planning mahiii

Its really superb SHLOK followed her and locked her tooo
Oww waiting 4 d next parttt

Superbbb


Big smile

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Posted: 24 December 2014 at 12:21am | IP Logged
Ohh Mahi
Back again for uuu

Why SHLOK is stalking aastha??
Do they have any pasttt connection??
Revenge???

Okay part 7
The sub tittle is superbbb
First lesson
What do u mean??

I think its the first fight romance between themmm
Embarrassed

I love the poem u have written on the top
Ohhh lovelyyy one
Its explaining how the attraction is turned into the dose of dark loveee

SHLOK is watching her pale face with a satisfaction smileee
Sooo cruel he isss

Poor aasthu
It will be really horrible
She is shivering in fearrr

And aasthu feels like a jungle cat stalking its preyyy
Wooww Mahi what an example u have thrown to express ur idea
Hats offf budddy

But even in that horrible situation tooo
She thinks about hot breathe and cold touch combination

That's reallly superbbb

So finally SHLOK accepts that he has lust for herrr
What a weird imagination SHLOK had
He wants to feeel her each an every sense and also he wants to break her innocence

It seems like aasthu is in real troubleee

He kissed her
That too with lip to lip
Woowww amazing cold love storyyy

I love the way u expressed and portrayed the whole scene by wordsss
Crushing her warm lips against his cold oneee
Woow u r a real poettt

He bit her lip
And I love the way u r saying that
He didn't kiss but he did raping with her mouth

Simply superbbb honeyyy

Ohhh so cruel
I didn't expect these from SHLOK
But its unique as uuu

Okay now I am really excited to know what will happen nexttt

U know my eyes r wide open when I was reading this chap
Even I didn't blink
Really he is Sooo cruel
I don't know how aastha is gonna handle himmm

And even after all those situation tooo he demand her a kissies that tooo on lipsss

Sooo scary maaan
And poor she
What can she do other then fulfilling his demandsss

The ending was tooo scaryyy
The destruction started...ohhh reallly amazing storyyy

And he wants more...
That scares me alot


Angry Clap Hug. Hats off buddy
Wants to read more n more
Bcoz my lust for ur story is also seems like not satisfied

But my brooo Angry
He is fighting again for lappy
So my time is overrr
Will read red tomorrowww

Edited by ashlok - 24 December 2014 at 12:24am

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Posted: 24 December 2014 at 12:26am | IP Logged
 
 
 
CONGRATS ON THE NEW THREAD MAHI DARLING...
 
WAY TO GO GAL...
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Posted: 24 December 2014 at 12:50am | IP Logged
Congratulations for your second thread!
...See I am dancing because I am happy for you!
 
Interesting teaser, waiting for next update.
 
I am working during Christmas time, so I may not be able to comment your next update, but I will try to read when I have breaks.
 
Happy Christmas & Happy Holidays to all! Hug
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 24 December 2014 at 2:07am | IP Logged
congratulations .. mahi.. for new thread...

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Posted: 24 December 2014 at 2:18am | IP Logged
Congrats for new tread and curious teaser

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Posted: 24 December 2014 at 2:40am | IP Logged
mahi...firstly congrats for your second thread Party beautiful post...waiting for your next chapter and lastly thank you so much for giving unique fiction or fact you can say in some part of the story Big smile

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Posted: 24 December 2014 at 3:35am | IP Logged
Congrats on the New Thread
Great teaser
Update soon

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