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#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) (Page 62)

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 10:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hp_2006

Oh my my..Shocked Angie's Dad isAvdhooth's partner ..This came as a real real surprise 
Yeah i've got a big box of surprises, from which i release them one by one! WinkLOL

Angie is feeling bad fr what she did to AasthaOuch Or may be she is still working that out..DumboD'ohYep you guessed write Naina she is still working that out! LOL Loved that line by you! Wink

Shlok is doing things to AasthaBlushing Chee chee Shlokie boy.,...Bad bad Shlokie..Booo..Thumbs Down
Ha ha ha just kidding Mahi..I know he has his own reasons for his behaviour and I am waiting for his mysteries to unravel..Wink Yeah he is making her fall for him, by seduction, he know that's her weakness, she is getting attracted to him, and once she fall for him, she won't be able to control herself! EmbarrassedWink

Anyways Aastha has fallen head over heels for his erotic actions..I loved this particular sentence a lot..
She looked like a slender stalk of a plant that was completely at the mercy of a hurricane...

Thanks dear! Wink

and this one too

But he clamped a hand over her mouth so that no sound could escape, in her mindless agony she bit hard on his palm, her body a living breathing inferno, her mind screamed for the angel of innocence that was flying away on white wings. As  a last attempt her arms moved forward to catch it's wing but it flew away from her clutches, giving a tinkling laugh.
 I am awestruck Mahi..You are such a talented writer..Clap

Thank you so much Naina from the bottom of my heart i loved your comments and they meant a lot to me! Hug They always do! Wink


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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 10:04am | IP Logged
Evil queen when will u.update next?

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 10:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mahirmukhtar

Originally posted by Elation

I never stop saying this, you are cruel.Angry  Please, enough of her torture. Let her not suffer for others sinsCry Oh my God jess LOL you called her seduction a torture, OuchLOL gal she got a pleasurable torture! EmbarrassedLOL Sure it is better then rape or do you want me to switch to that! You know i can do that! Evil SmileLOL The more she suffers the more Avdhoot will suffer, Evil Smile and she is not suffering, WinkLOLshe is getting education in erotica EmbarrassedLOL will come in handy as she'll be able to write a handbook on how to get intense pleasure by torturing your partner! Evil SmileROFLROFL
Surely, I will dig a hole and bury your Shlok aliveDead You can! Evil Smile But he'll come out of it remember evil dead! Evil SmileROFL
I hate you and will, everEvil Smile You mean hate you like i love you! ROFL
Mahi, seriously you have lost me.D'oh I dont understand one thing, are you crazy or am I crazy?Wacko
You are amazing me more than your updates Geek wish one day, i'll meet you and... Evil Smile

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 10:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Elation

Originally posted by mahirmukhtar

Originally posted by Elation

I never stop saying this, you are cruel.Angry  Please, enough of her torture. Let her not suffer for others sinsCry Oh my God jess LOL you called her seduction a torture, OuchLOL gal she got a pleasurable torture! EmbarrassedLOL Sure it is better then rape or do you want me to switch to that! You know i can do that! Evil SmileLOL The more she suffers the more Avdhoot will suffer, Evil Smile and she is not suffering, WinkLOLshe is getting education in erotica EmbarrassedLOL will come in handy as she'll be able to write a handbook on how to get intense pleasure by torturing your partner! Evil SmileROFLROFL
Surely, I will dig a hole and bury your Shlok aliveDead You can! Evil Smile But he'll come out of it remember evil dead! Evil SmileROFL
I hate you and will, everEvil Smile You mean hate you like i love you! ROFL
Mahi, seriously you have lost me.D'oh I dont understand one thing, are you crazy or am I crazy?Wacko
You are amazing me more than your updates Geek wish one day, i'll meet you and... Evil Smile

I dunno seriously jess you have that crazy effect on me OuchLOLLOL where i start sprouting out humour and craziness, i'm not that crazy or funny seriously in normal! WinkLOL

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 10:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by charanyaaj

Evil queen when will u.update next?

After two days had to pen down evil words yet my disciple, so your heart could be enslaved by more darkness and evil! Evil SmileROFLROFL


Edited by mahirmukhtar - 30 December 2014 at 10:17am
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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 10:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mahirmukhtar

Originally posted by Elation

Originally posted by mahirmukhtar

Originally posted by Elation

I never stop saying this, you are cruel.Angry  Please, enough of her torture. Let her not suffer for others sinsCry Oh my God jess LOL you called her seduction a torture, OuchLOL gal she got a pleasurable torture! EmbarrassedLOL Sure it is better then rape or do you want me to switch to that! You know i can do that! Evil SmileLOL The more she suffers the more Avdhoot will suffer, Evil Smile and she is not suffering, WinkLOLshe is getting education in erotica EmbarrassedLOL will come in handy as she'll be able to write a handbook on how to get intense pleasure by torturing your partner! Evil SmileROFLROFL
Surely, I will dig a hole and bury your Shlok aliveDead You can! Evil Smile But he'll come out of it remember evil dead! Evil SmileROFL
I hate you and will, everEvil Smile You mean hate you like i love you! ROFL
Mahi, seriously you have lost meD'oh I dont understand one thing, are you crazy or am I crazy?Wacko
You are amazing me more than your updates Geek wish one day, i'll meet you and... Evil Smile

I dunno seriously jess you have that crazy effect on me OuchLOLLOL where i start sprouting out humour and craziness, i'm not that crazy or funny seriously in normal! WinkLOL
@bold, really, I doubt!! But still you are my crazy girl Embarrassed

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 11:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Elation

Originally posted by mahirmukhtar

Originally posted by Elation

Originally posted by mahirmukhtar

Originally posted by Elation

I never stop saying this, you are cruel.Angry  Please, enough of her torture. Let her not suffer for others sinsCry Oh my God jess LOL you called her seduction a torture, OuchLOL gal she got a pleasurable torture! EmbarrassedLOL Sure it is better then rape or do you want me to switch to that! You know i can do that! Evil SmileLOL The more she suffers the more Avdhoot will suffer, Evil Smile and she is not suffering, WinkLOLshe is getting education in erotica EmbarrassedLOL will come in handy as she'll be able to write a handbook on how to get intense pleasure by torturing your partner! Evil SmileROFLROFL
Surely, I will dig a hole and bury your Shlok aliveDead You can! Evil Smile But he'll come out of it remember evil dead! Evil SmileROFL
I hate you and will, everEvil Smile You mean hate you like i love you! ROFL
Mahi, seriously you have lost meD'oh I dont understand one thing, are you crazy or am I crazy?Wacko
You are amazing me more than your updates Geek wish one day, i'll meet you and... Evil Smile

I dunno seriously jess you have that crazy effect on me OuchLOLLOL where i start sprouting out humour and craziness, i'm not that crazy or funny seriously in normal! WinkLOL
@bold, really, I doubt!! But still you are my crazy girl Embarrassed

Yep i am! Embarrassed

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 11:11am | IP Logged
Yes Yes Shlok! You just keep telling yourself its the control and the complete domination of Astha! But really deep down you just can't stop yourself from touching her!!! i am sure in her,  you will have met your match in every way!! Wink Loving the progression of the story and that Shlok has allies every where! Even in the enemies den!! Looking forward to the next one! Thank you Mahir Clap

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