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#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) (Page 57)

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 1:58am | IP Logged
chapter 16:

what the hell is avdooth doing??? does he really love his daughter??i hate him to the coreAngryAngry
because of he's lies many people are sufferingAngryAngry i hope shlok beat him until he became pulpEvil Smile

i heard someone wants to lick shlok's demonic sweatEvil SmileROFL hmmm...astha having nirma thoughts in the middle of torture sessionROFLROFLi will not be surprise if astha will harass shlokROFLROFLmaybe shlok would see his heaven when astha started her innocent actROFLROFL

oh astha finally asked shlok that what is her fault?? but our shlok is not going to spill the beans that easily after the author of the story loves to tease her innocent and impatient readersLOLLOL

wohoo shlok seducing astha again i got only lil overdose from thatLOLEvil Smile

thanx for the PM Hug

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 1:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ANNMARY25

wonderful updateClapClap
i loved ur way of writting


Thank you so much dear for liking it! Hug
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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 2:03am | IP Logged
brilliant update,written superbly Clap

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Mahi...i read both the chs...16 and 17th...loving the updates
will comment properly sometime later..not well...
HNYBig smile

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Both the updates are nice. Thanks for the PM>

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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 2:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pirate.hunter12

chapter 16:

what the hell is avdooth doing??? does he really love his daughter??i hate him to the coreAngryAngry
because of he's lies many people are sufferingAngryAngry i hope shlok beat him until he became pulpEvil Smile He hadn't only lied, he had done worse things than that! Ouch And good advice ramit about beating him to pulp, will do that in some future chap! Evil SmileLOL

i heard someone wants to lick shlok's demonic sweatEvil SmileROFL hmmm...astha having nirma thoughts in the middle of torture sessionROFLROFLi will not be surprise if astha will harass shlokROFLROFLmaybe shlok would see his heaven when astha started her innocent actROFLROFL Yep she can't herself, she has no control over her jumping harmones where the demon king Shlok is concerned! Evil SmileROFL

oh astha finally asked shlok that what is her fault?? but our shlok is not going to spill the beans that easily after the author of the story loves to tease her innocent and impatient readersLOLLOL 
Yep she is not, Evil Smile secret! WinkLOL Had to trap innocent readers in her net! Evil SmileLOL Otherwise they'll ran away! ROFL

wohoo shlok seducing astha again i got only lil overdose from thatLOLEvil Smile You'll get more overdose dear in future! Evil SmileWink

thanx for the PM Hug Welcome buddy! Wink

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chapter 17:

awesome updateWink

ashlok part was so intenseBlushing don't have any word to describe it was wonderfulBlushingBlushing shlok is christian grey loves to tease asthaEvil Smile

oh that fatty angie is still aliveAngry so avdooth and sid are partner's in crime shlok doesn't know about siddhart??
avdooth dig his own hole by trusting ramu kaka aka ramlal, but he deserve thatEvil Smile he is truly foolish doesn't know how to play chess he must learn from shlokLOL  so what we have in the store??? what will shlok do next?? can't wait for the upcoming updatesDay Dreaming

thanx for the PM daughter of a devilEvil Smile
do update soonLOL

 ADVANCE HAPPY NEW YEAR!!



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Originally posted by whitelily

brilliant update,written superbly Clap

Thanks dear! Big smile

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