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#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) (Page 54)

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
Chapter 17:
 
What an amazing update dear...
 
Police commissioner is also supporting Adhvoot...
 
Why they have to break the law...
 
Angie...i guess she is going to play a major role in finding astha...
 
Ashlok...
 
Poor astha lost all the courage to fight back with shlok...
 
she does have strength...hope she recover herself...
 
so that she will fight back...
 
Shlok...does he get happiness by doing this to astha...
 
he took her to the special bedroom...
 
feeling really sorry for Ashlok...
 
Ramukaka...the man who play double game...
 
he is the trusted man for both shlok and adhvoot...
 
Adhvoot figured out the kidnapper to be anjali niranjan's son...
 
Shlok told ramalal to inform abt him to adhvoot...
 
he is keeping a checkmate to adhvoot...
 
Thanks for the wonderful treat dear...

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sireesha76

superb update
beautifully written Clap

Thanks dear! Big smile
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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 11:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sathuraj

Chapter 17:
 
What an amazing update dear... Thank you so much sat! Big smile
 
Police commissioner is also supporting Adhvoot...
 
Why they have to break the law... corruption all the way! Ouch
 
Angie...i guess she is going to play a major role in finding astha...
 
Ashlok...
 
Poor astha lost all the courage to fight back with shlok...
 
she does have strength...hope she recover herself...
 
so that she will fight back...
 
Shlok...does he get happiness by doing this to astha... His revenge is his greatest satisfaction! 
 
he took her to the special bedroom...
 
feeling really sorry for Ashlok...
 
Ramukaka...the man who play double game...
 
he is the trusted man for both shlok and adhvoot...
 
Adhvoot figured out the kidnapper to be anjali niranjan's son...
 
Shlok told ramalal to inform abt him to adhvoot...
 
he is keeping a checkmate to adhvoot...
 
Thanks for the wonderful treat dear... My pleasure dear! Wink And thanks sat for your lovely comments and for loving my writing! Big smile

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 11:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SahriShrAvi

Mahi... sooper se ooper ka update.. Clap Thank you so much dear! Big smile

Awwieee!!!...my baby lost her innocence .. but i dont think so she is still Innocent and pure... hena Mahi.. Big smile Yep you guessed right maybe physically but not mentally! Wink

good to hear that he has arranged her a especial bedroom ahaan! Yep! Embarrassed

loving each and every revealation and twist.. Thanks dear! Wink

Angie got dark circles ;O
is she really worried for Aastha???? Yep but guilty conscience more now, Wink as she fears that Shlok had gotten information from her for a purpose, revenge on the coffee incident! She doesn't know the real reason...

Thanks for the PM You are welcome dear! Wink
Wonderful Update EBP.. Thanks sweetheart Hug 

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 11:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mahirmukhtar

Originally posted by Subhashini_chow

I am First LOL
Love the Poem U r a Star Star Sweet Devil Evil Smile Thanks dear! Evil Smile
he want Conquer ,devastate her and he make his Love her disease and 
freeze her with his Dark love Evil Smile 
Shocked Angie's father is ppartner with Avadhoot...If he have any hand of his in Avadhoot misdeeds Angry
Yep he is the police commissioner! Wink
I Feel  Angie will Play a key role to Busted Shlok in Future Confused
Her angel of Inocence away from her Cryshe completely fell into the hell 
which is he created by for her no return Angry
  Loved the pic! Wink

Angel defeted and devil won the this Time Angry
I am totally Confused his behaviour What he will get Sexually satisfying her LOL No clueOuch
What Type of revenge is he taking from her 

He wants to take total control of her mentally, physically and spiritually so she'll crave his touch, will be addicted to his touch, he wants to completely break her spirit, so that she would be just like him broken, an empty shell and her innocence gone, just like her father took away his innocence and left him broken... 

He took a Bedroom which is Specially made for her...But what about her proper needs 
Food ,cloths ..did he have any plan to feed her Big smile Yep in next update you'll see another side of him! Wink
P.S Happy New Year dear Hug Hope we get another  Update Before New YearBig smile

Happy New Year To You Too Dear! Hug And will try to update soon, if the chapter is completed by then, will definitely post it! Wink

I hope(Wish) he is not Completly succeed in to take all innocence of her and broke her ...rather than like to she finds his truth and heal his heart from wounds he got Cry

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 11:45pm | IP Logged
My words will bring to life the deepest part of ur untouched soul,

MY raw emotions will pull you in & force u to feel, 

MY raw passion will bring urs to the surface along with me, 

U Will not be able to ignore who u were meant to be.. 

As i force u to face ur inner fears & teach u abt the darkness of ur unexhibited needs,

I will invade ur habitat, I will explore u, I will take over u, 

I will completley control u, physically & mentally, 

I will make u fiend for me..

I will become ur new addiction, i will become ur motivation to create , 

I will effortlessly make ur legs weak & shake.. 

I will bring u to ur knees , i will teach u how to turn loose & let go.. 

Ur body will squimish & squirm ,cry out my name & ache for me, 

Ur hardend heart will break open for me...

The more u experience me the more u will learn & discover urself.. 

I will bring out the darkest parts of u, 

I will conquer & expose ur weakness, 

I will totally posses ur body like a spirit.. 

With ur eyes rolling back in ur brain, ur body movements are uncontained..

U have relinquished to me full control of ur physical use, 

I have ur body doin things u never thought it could do...


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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 11:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sathuraj

My words will bring to life the deepest part of ur untouched soul,

MY raw emotions will pull you in & force u to feel, 

MY raw passion will bring urs to the surface along with me, 

U Will not be able to ignore who u were meant to be.. 

As i force u to face ur inner fears & teach u abt the darkness of ur unexhibited needs,

I will invade ur habitat, I will explore u, I will take over u, 

I will completley control u, physically & mentally, 

I will make u fiend for me..

I will become ur new addiction, i will become ur motivation to create , 

I will effortlessly make ur legs weak & shake.. 

I will bring u to ur knees , i will teach u how to turn loose & let go.. 

Ur body will squimish & squirm ,cry out my name & ache for me, 

Ur hardend heart will break open for me...

The more u experience me the more u will learn & discover urself.. 

I will bring out the darkest parts of u, 

I will conquer & expose ur weakness, 

I will totally posses ur body like a spirit.. 

With ur eyes rolling back in ur brain, ur body movements are uncontained..

U have relinquished to me full control of ur physical use, 

I have ur body doin things u never thought it could do...



Thank you so so much my dear sat! Hug 
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Posted: 30 December 2014 at 12:02am | IP Logged
story Mahi!!

Dark and Hot  
  

I love it!!!


Edited by .Biggi. - 30 December 2014 at 12:02am

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