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#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) (Page 50)

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 6:06am | IP Logged
Wow Mahi what an exciting update liar Avdhoot at his best he is a mastermind it will be super exciting to saw Avdhoot n Shlok's face off both r evil in their own way. I'm still confused about Shlok's intension about Astha but in all this play Astha getting worst punishment I know she is not that innocent but she don't deserve this also. Thanks for PM dear eagerly waiting for next dose Wink.

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 9:18am | IP Logged
Been silent reader unable 2 comment but today finally got time...beautiful updates dear...u know I love dark fictions...keep giving us more...n do pm me... Smile

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 6:51pm | IP Logged
Intenseee chapter dearest
So avdhoot knows anjali and sanjana but he lied about them
Liked that aastha wasn't afraid of him
But I am afraid what shlok will do next?  
Will he do something baaad?
At least let her get clothed again 
She is stark naked xD
Continue soon mahi
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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 7:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sathuraj

Chapter 16:
 
What an awesome update... Thanks dear sat! Big smile
 
I really adhvoot a lot...
 
why he has to lie to the police...inspite of his daughter's life is in risk...
 
he narrated a whole lot of new story to the police guy... Yeah he is trying to hide his sins! Confused
 
does he have a big gang who works for him...
 
how he is talking to...
 
so did adhvoot guessed who has kidnapped astha... Yes! Wink
 
Ashlok...shlok is very rude to her...
 
finally astha got some answer...she was not kidnapped for the resturant incident...
 
they was some other reason too...
 
thanks for the wonderful treat dear... My pleasure dear! Hug
 
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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 7:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sathuraj

Yippee...
 
finally managed to read all ur fantastic update dear...
 
what an amazing writing skill...
 
its pleasure to read ur creation...
 
Eagerly waiting for ur next update...
 

Thank you so so much sat! Hug It's always a pleasure for me to read your lovely comments! Big smile
I am really thankful to you that you are liking my writing! Big smile

And ofcourse will update soon dear! Wink
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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 7:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jhumjhum

Wow Mahi what an exciting update liar Avdhoot at his best he is a mastermind it will be super exciting to saw Avdhoot n Shlok's face off both r evil in their own way. I'm still confused about Shlok's intension about Astha but in all this play Astha getting worst punishment I know she is not that innocent but she don't deserve this also. Thanks for PM dear eagerly waiting for next dose Wink.

Thanks dear! Big smile Yes Shlok and Avdhoot are both mastermind! Wink Yes Astha doesn't deserve to be punished for this she is being squashed between two rivals, but it's also true what goes around always comes around, everyone is punished for their sins, the method of punishment may differ...

And Avdhoot is being punished as his daughter is abducted, Astha is being punished for torturing animals, by bearing that torture on herself. After all she will realize their pain only when she herself will bear that pain...

Shlok's intentions are that he wants to break her spirit by making her fall for himself so much, that she will crave his touch, as she is innocent in the matters of desire or passion...

Ofcourse will update soon dear! Wink

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 7:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by GoWithTheRhythm

Intenseee chapter dearest 
So avdhoot knows anjali and sanjana but he lied about them
Liked that aastha wasn't afraid of him
But I am afraid what shlok will do next?  
Will he do something baaad?
At least let her get clothed again 
She is stark naked xD
Continue soon mahi
Really loving itClap

Thanks dear for sharing your views with me and for loving it! Wink

And Shlok is keeping her naked on purpose! EmbarrassedWink You'll know why in the next updateEmbarrassed

And will continue soon dear! Wink
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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 7:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by i_m_aastha

Been silent reader unable 2 comment but today finally got time...beautiful updates dear...u know I love dark fictions...keep giving us more...n do pm me... Smile

Welcome dear! Hug I would try my best to live upto our expectations dear! Wink

And thanks for loving it dear!  Big smile Will continue soon! Wink

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