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#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) (Page 49)

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 4:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sathuraj

Chapter 15 Authors Note:

 

Thank you so much sat for liking the poem! Hug

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 4:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sathuraj

Chapter 15 Teaser:
 
Wow..amazing teaser... Thanks sat! Big smile
 
Finally Adhvoot ready to open his mouth...
 
rushing to read chapter 15... You do that sweetheart will wait for you! Wink
 
 

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 4:24am | IP Logged
Chapter 15:
 
Super duper update dear...
 
Shlok past is troubling him a lot...
 
His happy family has been shattered into pieces...
 
this guy is completely broken and trying to take revenge...
 
He has become emotionless after those worst incident in his life...
 
Adhvoot has finally opened his mouth...that too in drunken state...
 
he manage to figure out who would have done it ...
 
but is it shlok life that he spoiled or are there too many...
 
then its going to be difficult for him to find shlok...
 
Kalindi finally got the courage to shout and find out...
 
will adhvoot reach on time to save astha...
 
Poor astha finally recovered herself and want to console him but she back off...
 
she is not so cruel...indeed...
 
Shlok...back to monster form...he hate astha's eyes more than her...
 
its remain him of his father...
 
what an wonderful update dear...
 
its always a treat to read ur wonderful creation...
 

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 4:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sathuraj

Chapter 15:
 
Super duper update dear... Thanks sat! Big smile
 
Shlok past is troubling him a lot...
 
His happy family has been shattered into pieces...
 
this guy is completely broken and trying to take revenge...
 
He has become emotionless after those worst incident in his life... Yep he is turned into stone! Ouch
 
Adhvoot has finally opened his mouth...that too in drunken state...
 
he manage to figure out who would have done it ...
 
but is it shlok life that he spoiled or are there too many...
 
then its going to be difficult for him to find shlok...
 
Kalindi finally got the courage to shout and find out...
 
will adhvoot reach on time to save astha...
 
Poor astha finally recovered herself and want to console him but she back off...
 
she is not so cruel...indeed...
 
Shlok...back to monster form...he hate astha's eyes more than her...
 
its remain him of his father...
 
what an wonderful update dear... Thanks a lot sat! Hug
 
its always a treat to read ur wonderful creation... My pleasure dear! Hug And for me the treat is to read your lovely comments dear! Big smile
 


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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 4:55am | IP Logged
Chapter 16:
 
What an awesome update...
 
I really adhvoot a lot...
 
why he has to lie to the police...inspite of his daughter's life is in risk...
 
he narrated a whole lot of new story to the police guy...
 
does he have a big gang who works for him...
 
how he is talking to...
 
so did adhvoot guessed who has kidnapped astha...
 
Ashlok...shlok is very rude to her...
 
finally astha got some answer...she was not kidnapped for the resturant incident...
 
they was some other reason too...
 
thanks for the wonderful treat dear...
 

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 4:58am | IP Logged
Yippee...
 
finally managed to read all ur fantastic update dear...
 
what an amazing writing skill...
 
its pleasure to read ur creation...
 
Eagerly waiting for ur next update...
 

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Posted: 29 December 2014 at 5:33am | IP Logged
Awesome Update
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Very nice...
Pretty interesting story..

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