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#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) (Page 32)

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sathuraj

Chapter 11:

Awesome update dear...
 
Shlok is too rude in handling astha...
 
he is using his power on astha to get what he wants...
 
after that horrible handling he got what he wants...
 
Poor astha has to go thru so much...
 
Finally Kirlosher got the mail...
 
Kalindi fainted as soon as she saw the picture...
 
so how is anjali connected to kirlosher...
 
I am so curious to know what going to happen next...
 
Thanks for the superduper update...
 

Thanks buddy! Wink And you are of course welcome dear! Always my pleasure! Wink

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sathuraj

Chapter 12:
 
super update dear...
 
Shlok having the worst nightmare of his life...that too astha is the one who bring it back...
 
does the nightmare relate to anjali and adhvoot...
 
Why he has to trouble astha for that...
 
Poor astha...inspite of her worst condition...
 
she worse abt her parents...
 
Hope shlok wont trouble her more...
 
Why and what adhvoot is trying to hide from the police...
 
Thanks for the wonderful treat ...



Thank you so much sat for your lovely comments! Hug

Yep the nightmare is related to his past! Wink 

And Astha is very spirited dear she'll survive him! Wink
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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Surish

Another deep dark and techy mind controlling. spine tingling bass throbbing teaser!Fantastic!

Thanks dear! Big smile
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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sathuraj

Chapter 13:
 
My god...u r a gifter writer dear...
 
I hate this shlok ...why he has to torture astha for the mistake her parents did...
 
inspite of her pleading so badly...still he continue to torture her...
 
who is this sanjana now...
 
what is shlok going to gain by doing this to astha...
 
while he get the happiness what he has lost...by doing this...
 
wont astha's scream and cry melt his heart...
 
Poor astha tried her best to defence herself from him...
 
he is too stronger than her...
 
why is adhvoot silent still...
 
why cant he open his mouth...when he know his daughter life is in danger...
 
thanks for the wonderful treat...
 
 

Thanks sat i'm really overwhelmed! Hug

And why Shlok is doing that he has a very solid reason behind it! 

His heart has been turned to stone and he doesn't feel any human emotions now but he'll start feeling them under the influence of Astha! Wink

And Avdhoot is silent because he is guilty conscience! 
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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by potomac

Oh..So he knows what he did...but doesnt know he is still aliveShocked...Interesting!!!...WaitingDay Dreaming

Thanks dear for sharing your views! Wink Will update tommorrow! Wink
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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jhumjhum

I'm really sorry Mahi for this late reply just read last 2 part n teaser wow thrilling update dear. Shlok going dark in his revenge mood n Astha somehow understand all her fault. Teaser so Avdhoot get who doing this many more mystery to come out. Congratulation for your new thread n thanks for PM dear waiting for next update.

No worries sweetheart! Wink

And thank you so much dear! Big smile Will update tommorrow! Wink

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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Efinah36

Awesome teaser
Update soon

Thanks dear! Wink Going to update tommorrow! Big smile
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Posted: 26 December 2014 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by hp_2006

Mahiii...Take a bow my dear..Hats off to you..Superb writing..Clap
Simply out of the world.. Star

Aastha has turned numb towards his torture now..I loved the way you explained her feelings and mixed up memories of the past when she tortured other living beings too..Smile

Now Aastha is feeling sympathetic towards her assailant and wants to influence him with her words.Wow I loved the twist honey..This story is getting interesting day by day..Thumbs Up


Aww thank you so much sweetheart! Hug

And me too loved writing the twist! LOL Thanks again Naina! Wink

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