Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon... Ek Baar Phir


Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon... Ek Baar Phir
Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon... Ek Baar Phir

#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) (Page 26)

mahirmukhtar IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 6754

Posted: 25 December 2014 at 11:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ashlok

Hey mahiii

I m back again Welcome sweetheart! Hug
Actually yesterday night around 10pm I feel like I wanna read the other chaps tooo
So I read it out

But I need to give u my analysis as always nah
That's why I am here today Was waiting for you too dear! Wink

I am warning u that this post might be more longer than others as I am going to talk abt chap 11,12 &13 Talk away dear i'll always be here to listen! Wink

So bear my talks and blabbering Nope no worries on that i love your detailed comments! Big smile
Hmmm SHLOK is very criminal minded one
His plan was amazing

But this is so mean about him
Still I believed that there will be a strong reason behind SHLOKs action Yep there is! Wink

And u r great Mahi by giving us a multi emotion full chapters daily

And u know u made my day and of course night tooo My pleasure dear! Wink

Even I suggested one of my cousin about ur this ff
And she said that she will read it 
Aww aishu so sweet of you dear!
I hope she will like it tooo

But u know I want more of my dark chocolate
Ur dark choc contains bitter,sweet and many more tastes
Which r adding more beauty to ur story Won't say thanks samazlaa! WinkLOL

Thanks a lot dear for giving us this wonder full story

Being a writer is something very difficult
As they need to fulfill readers expectations fully Nope it's not difficult at all dear you can be a great writer too you have very good observation power, your reviews tell me that! Wink

And u r doing a fabulous job as a professional writer
I want ur autograph now You can take it dear! WinkLOL 

Bcoz may be u can grow into a popular one
In that time it will be difficult to get the autograph nah? If ever i grew popular you can become my review writer then i'll always be available to you! Wink

That's why I wanna take it now samazla???????
Okay come back to part 11
As usual ur poem and sub title suits very well and I like it to the crore Yep love poetry and quotes Wink they add a beautiful effect to writing, gives it power! Wink

And other request mahi update sooon
Asap Asap Asap Ofcourse will do tommorrow honey! Wink

Otherwise my head will blast thinking abt the suspenses u have thrown on me

You'll have a great shock, the blast will be nothing in front of it! WinkLOL
This SHLOK is very cruel
But why does he want avdhoots private email addresses
Again something fishyyy

I hate the way he manhandling her
Pooor sheee He is a devil, hence the manhandling! Evil SmileLOL

I love the way u portrayed their kissing sorry
I think kissing won't suits them ROFL

Raping with her mouth suits the besttt Yep agree with you! LOL
But I didn't expect theses much from SHLOK

Its a real shock to me
I feel pity on aasthu for facing such a situation

But I love aasthas spirit
Way to go aastha She is not only spirited she is other things too! Evil SmileLOLYou'll get to know once you read the other updates! LOL

Then shlokie started to threatening her
That was really cruel

Poor she
She has no other options than revealing

Poor kalindi
Even I feel myself like crying after reading her situation

And ramu kaka aka raamlal is a traiter
How could he do like this ??
Real animal

Again who is anjali
I know maybe she might be SHLOK mum but how anjali is connected with avdhooot

I was staring ur pic
That was reallly superb honey Yeah love gothic art and fiction, that's why am writing one! LOL

Can't wait to taste the other piece of dark choc You do that honey! Wink

mahirmukhtar IF-Rockerz

Joined: 10 August 2012
Posts: 6754

Posted: 25 December 2014 at 11:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ashlok

Hey now come to part 12
U know I love ur writing Yeah and i love ur reviews! Wink

N my lust for ur writing seems like never ending
But when school starts in January iwont be able to read continuously My uni is gonna start too! Ouch on 12th jan! Cry

Even The thought of that is making me sick
***bitting my nails***** as I don't know what u have stored more for meee I too won't be able to update regularly in jan! Cry

What a horrible nightmare
Now I feel pity on SHLOK Thought i should warn you Wink you'll love him, then hate him then love him again LOL

Loosing our beloved ones in front of our eyes are like real mental and physical agony ever

He is waiting to take this revenge for 24yrs

Sooo I think he might around 6 or 7 yes old when the incident happened

Pooor boy
But its unjust of punishing aastha Yeah no justification, but as they say blinded by revenge! Ouch

She didn't do anything to him
Only her parent does

Shlokie bear need to control his anger His hormones too! LOL

Now I am very excited to know what had happened to anjali
And of course what is haunting avdhoot tooo

Plz unveil this mystery sooon dearrr Very horrible mystery Ouch dear you'll run away LOL then who'll give me such beautiful review! WinkLOL

But why is this avdhoot hiding everything
Poor kalindi

She is also suffering a lot without any reasons

Now my temper is getting high
Why did avdhoot lie to the policeee?? Guilty conscience! Wink

Something is really gonna blast
But I am honestly waiting waiting for ittt Not a simple blast dear an atom bomb! LOL

ASAP ASAP ASAP will do! Wink

mahirmukhtar IF-Rockerz

Joined: 10 August 2012
Posts: 6754

Posted: 25 December 2014 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ashlok

Hey again here with part 13

Mahi it was an excellent update
With so much emotions You are making me want to say thank you! WinkLOL

Ur story is getting more n more interesting

I wanna read stories in a go
As I cant be patient until the suspenses r revealed Same here Winkwhenever i buy a book after reading the first two pages i jump to the last one in order to know the end! LOL

But now I am eagerly waiting to know abt SHLOKs past

I want to know what avdhoot did in his pasttt

Can't wait to read honeyyy

But I hate the way SHLOK manhandling aastha

That was cruel
And the physical harassment

I hate those words tooo Same here Wink but had to show that Ouch you'll know why in the 14th chap! Wink

Hope to read more

And again who is this Sanjana

Surely she will be his aunt or sister but no GF

My heart says Sooo

I got to go byeee honey Bye sweetie take care! Big smile Will wait for more from you! Wink

Happy new year And a Happy New Year to you too dear! Wink

mahirmukhtar IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 6754

Posted: 25 December 2014 at 11:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by hajr

Interesting teaser 

Thanks dear! Big smile
mahirmukhtar IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 6754

Posted: 25 December 2014 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -ChitraRocking-

awesome \
thanks for pm
 Thumbs Up

Thanks dear Big smile And you are welcome buddy! Wink
mahirmukhtar IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 6754

Posted: 25 December 2014 at 11:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by avni4

I want to celebrate new year...dont give me heart stroke update soon yaar...shock pe shock...Evil Smile  Update soon or i will chase u in ur dreams...

Going to update tommorrow avni! Evil Smile And a big earthquake coming your way! LOL

And you are welcome dear to chase me in my dreams but buds you'll be trapped in a devil's dream! Evil SmileLOL
mahirmukhtar IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 6754

Posted: 25 December 2014 at 11:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by akashavani

Mahi...waiting for more ...loved it ...both...darkest secrets and teaser...can't  write more system  working up...4th time to post it ...Tfs ...looking for Ur next update..

Thank you so much vani! Hug Am going to update tommorrow! Wink
sathuraj IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
Chapter 5:
Astha...did a mistake by pouring coffee on his face...
on top she started developing story and sheering crocodile tears...
my god...why she has to behave like this...
she is going to pay back for this act...
I wonder why shlok kept quiet...
Lucky the old woman save him on time...
otherwise the public would have created a lot of issue...
Is shlok reaction is silent before storm...
will get my answer in the following chapter ...
will read the rest soon dear...
Thanks for the beautiful treat...

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