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#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) (Page 25)

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 9:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sumayya_Ejaz

Hmm so avdhoot is the real villain he thought that shlok was killed but don't know his name. W8ing for the next chapter Smile

Will update tommorrow dear! Wink

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 10:02pm | IP Logged
Interesting teaser 

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 10:13pm | IP Logged
awesome \
thanks for pm
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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 10:15pm | IP Logged
I want to celebrate new year...dont give me heart stroke update soon yaar...shock pe shock...Evil Smile  Update soon or i will chase u in ur dreams...

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 10:49pm | IP Logged
Hey mahiii

I m back again
Actually yesterday night around 10pm I feel like I wanna read the other chaps tooo
So I read it out

But I need to give u my analysis as always nah
That's why I am here today

I am warning u that this post might be more longer than others as I am going to talk abt chap 11,12 &13

So bear my talks and blabbering
Hmmm SHLOK is very criminal minded one
His plan was amazing

But this is so mean about him
Still I believed that there will be a strong reason behind SHLOKs action

And u r great Mahi by giving us a multi emotion full chapters daily

And u know u made my day and of course night tooo

Even I suggested one of my cousin about ur this ff
And she said that she will read it
I hope she will like it tooo

But u know I want more of my dark chocolate
Ur dark choc contains bitter,sweet and many more tastes
Which r adding more beauty to ur story

Thanks a lot dear for giving us this wonder full story

Being a writer is something very difficult
As they need to fulfill readers expectations fully

And u r doing a fabulous job as a professional writer
I want ur autograph now

Bcoz may be u can grow into a popular one
In that time it will be difficult to get the autograph nah?

That's why I wanna take it now samazla???????
Okay come back to part 11
As usual ur poem and sub title suits very well and I like it to the crore

And other request mahi update sooon
Asap Asap Asap

Otherwise my head will blast thinking abt the suspenses u have thrown on me


This SHLOK is very cruel
But why does he want avdhoots private email addresses
Again something fishyyy

I hate the way he manhandling her
Pooor sheee

I love the way u portrayed their kissing sorry
I think kissing won't suits them ROFL

Raping with her mouth suits the besttt
But I didn't expect theses much from SHLOK

Its a real shock to me
I feel pity on aasthu for facing such a situation

But I love aasthas spirit
Way to go aastha

Then shlokie started to threatening her
That was really cruel

Poor she
She has no other options than revealing

Poor kalindi
Even I feel myself like crying after reading her situation

And ramu kaka aka raamlal is a traiter
How could he do like this ??
Real animal

Again who is anjali
I know maybe she might be SHLOK mum but how anjali is connected with avdhooot

I was staring ur pic
That was reallly superb honey

Can't wait to taste the other piece of dark choc



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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 11:03pm | IP Logged
Mahi...waiting for more ...loved it ...both...darkest secrets and teaser...can't  write more ...my system  working up...4th time to post it ...Tfs ...looking for Ur next update..

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 11:05pm | IP Logged
Hey now come to part 12
U know I love ur writing

N my lust for ur writing seems like never ending
But when school starts in January iwont be able to read continuously

Even The thought of that is making me sick
***bitting my nails***** as I don't know what u have stored more for meee

What a horrible nightmare
Now I feel pity on SHLOK

Loosing our beloved ones in front of our eyes are like real mental and physical agony ever

He is waiting to take this revenge for 24yrs

Sooo I think he might around 6 or 7 yes old when the incident happened

Pooor boy
But its unjust of punishing aastha

She didn't do anything to him
Only her parent does

Shlokie bear need to control his anger

Now I am very excited to know what had happened to anjali
And of course what is haunting avdhoot tooo

Plz unveil this mystery sooon dearrr

But why is this avdhoot hiding everything
Poor kalindi

She is also suffering a lot without any reasons

Now my temper is getting high
Why did avdhoot lie to the policeee??

Something is really gonna blast
But I am honestly waiting waiting for ittt

ASAP ASAP ASAP



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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 11:12pm | IP Logged
Hey again here with part 13

Mahi it was an excellent update
With so much emotions

Ur story is getting more n more interesting

I wanna read stories in a go
As I cant be patient until the suspenses r revealed

But now I am eagerly waiting to know abt SHLOKs past

I want to know what avdhoot did in his pasttt

Can't wait to read honeyyy

But I hate the way SHLOK manhandling aastha

That was cruel
And the physical harassment

I hate those words tooo

Hope to read more

And again who is this Sanjana

Surely she will be his aunt or sister but no GF

My heart says Sooo

I got to go byeee honey

Happy new year

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