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#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) (Page 20)

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 1:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ashlok

Originally posted by mahirmukhtar

Originally posted by ashlok

Originally posted by mahirmukhtar

Originally posted by ashlok

Ohh Mahi
Back again for uuu

Why SHLOK is stalking aastha??
Do they have any pasttt connection??
Revenge???

Okay part 7
The sub tittle is superbbb
First lesson
What do u mean??

I think its the first fight romance between themmm
Embarrassed

I love the poem u have written on the top
Ohhh lovelyyy one
Its explaining how the attraction is turned into the dose of dark loveee

SHLOK is watching her pale face with a satisfaction smileee
Sooo cruel he isss

Poor aasthu
It will be really horrible
She is shivering in fearrr

And aasthu feels like a jungle cat stalking its preyyy
Wooww Mahi what an example u have thrown to express ur idea
Hats offf budddy

But even in that horrible situation tooo
She thinks about hot breathe and cold touch combination

That's reallly superbbb

So finally SHLOK accepts that he has lust for herrr
What a weird imagination SHLOK had
He wants to feeel her each an every sense and also he wants to break her innocence

It seems like aasthu is in real troubleee

He kissed her
That too with lip to lip
Woowww amazing cold love storyyy

I love the way u expressed and portrayed the whole scene by wordsss
Crushing her warm lips against his cold oneee
Woow u r a real poettt

He bit her lip
And I love the way u r saying that
He didn't kiss but he did raping with her mouth

Simply superbbb honeyyy

Ohhh so cruel
I didn't expect these from SHLOK
But its unique as uuu

Okay now I am really excited to know what will happen nexttt

U know my eyes r wide open when I was reading this chap
Even I didn't blink
Really he is Sooo cruel
I don't know how aastha is gonna handle himmm

And even after all those situation tooo he demand her a kissies that tooo on lipsss

Sooo scary maaan
And poor she
What can she do other then fulfilling his demandsss

The ending was tooo scaryyy
The destruction started...ohhh reallly amazing storyyy

And he wants more...
That scares me alot


Angry Clap Hug. Hats off buddy
Wants to read more n more
Bcoz my lust for ur story is also seems like not satisfied

But my brooo Angry
He is fighting again for lappy
So my time is overrr
Will read red tomorrowww


Thank you so much aishu for liking the poem and loving this update! Big smileI personally loved writing that chap too!WinkAnd no worries buddy you you take your time will wait for you!Wink

And ofcourse i want to addict you so how can be you satisfied!LOLLOL

Will wait for more of you!Wink



Don't worry already u had sucessed in ur mission of addictong me to ur story mahiii

Congratz again buds

Go ahead

May god bless u


Thank you so much dear!Hug


Again saying thanksss

Did u forget
Saying thanks to fronds r forbidden samazla???

Oops LOL  my mouth zipped now! WinkLOLLOL

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 1:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ashlok

Actually I wanna quit for now
But my heart wanna read moreee

So here I come again mahiii
Part10
Waking up to horror

Title itself adding a horror feeling dear

My mind is now surrounded by many unanswered questions
Hope I get the ans sooon

Poor avdhoot
I can feel his state mentally and physically

Poor he is
But what he did in his past??
Another question popping in my mind

And I can see the true love tears from kalindis eye
Poor she
How could she imagine of losing her daughter

But surely SHLOK is merciless

Looking more forward honey

Can't waittt
To see aasthas reaction

Ohh again coldie
I can't believe this

Angie is also an equipment used to get aastha

SHLOK is really a selfish man
But I am eagerly waiting to know why he is doing all these

So he cleverly used Angie
Ohh my gosh my head is going to twirl arounddd


I did not expect this kind of suspenses

Ohhh man u r really great in expressing the ideas clearly and vividly

Hats off to u mahiii

The way u are expressing every emotions r superbbb

Fantastic story

Won't thank you now samazla! LOLLOL

But love you for your comments and sharing views with me dear! Wink

And suspense dear Wink no buds will make you faint until you reach chapter 14! Evil SmileROFL
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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 2:18am | IP Logged
Unres n pg15

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 2:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Priya_ShrAvi

Amazing update my choco chip Clap Star Clap
and I can see...your hell bent to addict me more..fat chance... Already addicted 10000% Confused
I read your update as soon as wake up Big smile and it made my day LOL Will have on your knees my vanilla pudding! Evil SmileROFL

Coming to the update Wacko Already wacked up WinkLOL you have a long way to go babe! Evil SmileLOL
Hmm...I don't like your astha Confused I pity her ...for her state and going through all this for no mistake of her..that's it...but she's a total psycho Wacko Yeah Borderline personality disorder Wink just wait buddy you have no idea what she would do to him! Evil SmileLOL
Torturing puppy Confused but slapping tiny baby Angry spoilt brat!!
Locking nerd boy in BR...knowing he's having asthma Confused today her mother locked in a private hell...who's also having asthma... Karma hits back!! Kalindi is suffering bcos of astha...(for no mistake of her).in the same way astha going through all this bcos sadistic behavior of her father...here also it's not astha's mistake...
But that's how karma play...it hits your dearest one and you go through hell...seeing them suffer!! Cry Yep what goes around always come around! OuchWink

OK I'll stop here...ikr am going overboard LOL but I have seen ppl with such behavior...apologize for my ranting Ouch No apologies my vanilla pudding Wink i have seen that Wink, that's why i took that concept, dark psychological love story! Evil Smile
And 3 cheers to you for writing such realistic characters..Star.unfortunately they do exist Ouch and a tight hugg n muah for writing such a diff story... You have a twisted brain my choco lava 
Twisted no doubt on that my pudding! Evil SmileROFLAnd a bear hug to you too from your own devil mahi! Evil SmileHug Loved psychology as a subject Wink, wanted to benefit from the knowledge and the research! WinkLOLLOL

Loving the fact that astha trying to be rational and even helping shlok to come out of his private hell...redeeming herself... Yep they are the one and same! WinkLOL

Now what's next choco chip...can't wait to read dearu... Embarrassed Another shock my vanilla pudding and that too soon! Evil SmileLOL 
 

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 2:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by srilotus

me secondDancing
res
Mahi...i m speechlessClap
love love ur way of writing dearBig smile
Shlok is a rapist damm...i hate this Shlok...hate hate hate him to the coreAngry
poor Astha...tolerating Shlok and and her own father's deeds
Mahi..plz show her stronger side...
 

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 3:14am | IP Logged
Heartwrenching, poignant and riveting! Perfectly captured in your enveloping wit and spirit! Astha the enduring herione with dauntless courage and unstoppable resolve has been reduced from Shilok's  torments of hell to the flames of purgatory.

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 3:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by srilotus

Originally posted by srilotus

me secondDancing
res
Mahi...i m speechlessClap
love love ur way of writing dearBig smile
Shlok is a rapist damm...i hate this Shlok...hate hate hate him to the coreAngry
poor Astha...tolerating Shlok and and her own father's deeds
Mahi..plz show her stronger side...
 


Thanks Sri! Hug
Shlok didn't rape her dear he was about to but stopped due to his flashback! Wink

And Astha isn't poor dear OuchLOL you didn't read the part where she hurts animals Wink she is a borderline psychotic Evil Smile , she will be stronger but at the same she will be weaker too, just wait she will make his life hell!

They both are sadists and psychos! Evil SmileLOLAnd deserve each other! Wink
Truly a couple made in hell! Wink
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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 3:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Surish

Heartwrenching, poignant and riveting! Perfectly captured in your enveloping wit and spirit! Astha the enduring herione with dauntless courage and unstoppable resolve has been reduced from Shilok's  torments of hell to the flames of purgatory.


Thanks dear for your wonderful comments! Big smile

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