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#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) (Page 19)

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 12:50am | IP Logged
Actually I wanna quit for now
But my heart wanna read moreee

So here I come again mahiii
Part10
Waking up to horror

Title itself adding a horror feeling dear

My mind is now surrounded by many unanswered questions
Hope I get the ans sooon

Poor avdhoot
I can feel his state mentally and physically

Poor he is
But what he did in his past??
Another question popping in my mind

And I can see the true love tears from kalindis eye
Poor she
How could she imagine of losing her daughter

But surely SHLOK is merciless

Looking more forward honey

Can't waittt
To see aasthas reaction

Ohh again coldie
I can't believe this

Angie is also an equipment used to get aastha

SHLOK is really a selfish man
But I am eagerly waiting to know why he is doing all these

So he cleverly used Angie
Ohh my gosh my head is going to twirl arounddd


I did not expect this kind of suspenses

Ohhh man u r really great in expressing the ideas clearly and vividly

Hats off to u mahiii

The way u are expressing every emotions r superbbb

Fantastic story

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 12:51am | IP Logged
Thank u mahir for the update...
Merry christmas mahir..
Beautiful update...
Shlok is very cruel and treating her very badly...
Though he has some reasons his actions cannot be justified...
Astha is nt an innocent she is paying for her deeds now...
So astha now decided to help him fr his redeemption..
I hope love will blossom soon bet them whether it is dark or soft...

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mahirmukhtar

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 12:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mahirmukhtar

Originally posted by ashlok

Originally posted by mahirmukhtar

Originally posted by ashlok

Ohh Mahi
Back again for uuu

Why SHLOK is stalking aastha??
Do they have any pasttt connection??
Revenge???

Okay part 7
The sub tittle is superbbb
First lesson
What do u mean??

I think its the first fight romance between themmm
Embarrassed

I love the poem u have written on the top
Ohhh lovelyyy one
Its explaining how the attraction is turned into the dose of dark loveee

SHLOK is watching her pale face with a satisfaction smileee
Sooo cruel he isss

Poor aasthu
It will be really horrible
She is shivering in fearrr

And aasthu feels like a jungle cat stalking its preyyy
Wooww Mahi what an example u have thrown to express ur idea
Hats offf budddy

But even in that horrible situation tooo
She thinks about hot breathe and cold touch combination

That's reallly superbbb

So finally SHLOK accepts that he has lust for herrr
What a weird imagination SHLOK had
He wants to feeel her each an every sense and also he wants to break her innocence

It seems like aasthu is in real troubleee

He kissed her
That too with lip to lip
Woowww amazing cold love storyyy

I love the way u expressed and portrayed the whole scene by wordsss
Crushing her warm lips against his cold oneee
Woow u r a real poettt

He bit her lip
And I love the way u r saying that
He didn't kiss but he did raping with her mouth

Simply superbbb honeyyy

Ohhh so cruel
I didn't expect these from SHLOK
But its unique as uuu

Okay now I am really excited to know what will happen nexttt

U know my eyes r wide open when I was reading this chap
Even I didn't blink
Really he is Sooo cruel
I don't know how aastha is gonna handle himmm

And even after all those situation tooo he demand her a kissies that tooo on lipsss

Sooo scary maaan
And poor she
What can she do other then fulfilling his demandsss

The ending was tooo scaryyy
The destruction started...ohhh reallly amazing storyyy

And he wants more...
That scares me alot


Angry Clap Hug. Hats off buddy
Wants to read more n more
Bcoz my lust for ur story is also seems like not satisfied

But my brooo Angry
He is fighting again for lappy
So my time is overrr
Will read red tomorrowww


Thank you so much aishu for liking the poem and loving this update! Big smileI personally loved writing that chap too!WinkAnd no worries buddy you you take your time will wait for you!Wink

And ofcourse i want to addict you so how can be you satisfied!LOLLOL

Will wait for more of you!Wink



Don't worry already u had sucessed in ur mission of addictong me to ur story mahiii

Congratz again buds

Go ahead

May god bless u


Thank you so much dear!Hug


Again saying thanksss

Did u forget
Saying thanks to fronds r forbidden samazla???

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 12:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mahirmukhtar

Originally posted by ashlok

Tatttaaataaah
I'm here with another comment on ur ff part 9

The title sounds horrible honeyyy
But looking forwarded

Its look like aastha is turning normal
But will it long last?!!!!??

That's the question which is popping in my minded
Okay come to the story again

Ohhh valuable gift
Again u r raising my bp

But how ramlal is aasthas driver right???
Hmm another suspense I loved ittt

Let me guess
Is ramlal kaka is a betrayerr??
I think Sooo
Bcoz definitely the package meant by SHLOK is aastha

Now my heart is beating very fastly
Lub tub club tub (can u hear the music of my heart)

Poor krisolakarsss
They are going through many thingsss

Where is aastha??
Is SHLOK had kidnapped her???
Why ???

U see my mind is fulfilled with many questionsss can't wait to read forward Mani
But again my bro is here to grab the lapppy


What do u mean by ur past is finally got u
Is avdhoot or kalindi r connected to col die with his pasttt

Ohh mahii
Kitna suspended???

Ohh I am really excited to read more
And its a great lovely update


Thanks aishu for sharing your lovely views with me Big smilei really enjoyed your comments buddy!Wink

And don't worry buds brother's do things like thatWinkLOLi don't have one WinkLOLthat's why i am able to write and update ! LOLLOLWill wait for you you take your time!Wink


Yeah bro and sis are real troubles
Again will c u tomorrow
Now I got the secret of ur daily update LOL

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 1:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by charanyaaj

Thank u mahir for the update...
Merry christmas mahir..
Beautiful update...
Shlok is very cruel and treating her very badly...
Though he has some reasons his actions cannot be justified...
Astha is nt an innocent she is paying for her deeds now...
So astha now decided to help him fr his redeemption..
I hope love will blossom soon bet them whether it is dark or soft...

You are welcome charanya! Hug

And merry christmas to you too buddy! Wink

And thanks charanya for sharing your views! Wink

They are both paying what goes around always come around! Wink

Love will ofcourse Wink blossom but it will be a dark love as they both are psychos and a couple truly made in hell! Evil SmileLOL
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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 1:35am | IP Logged
Great update..

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 1:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ashlok

Originally posted by mahirmukhtar

Originally posted by ashlok

Tatttaaataaah
I'm here with another comment on ur ff part 9

The title sounds horrible honeyyy
But looking forwarded

Its look like aastha is turning normal
But will it long last?!!!!??

That's the question which is popping in my minded
Okay come to the story again

Ohhh valuable gift
Again u r raising my bp

But how ramlal is aasthas driver right???
Hmm another suspense I loved ittt

Let me guess
Is ramlal kaka is a betrayerr??
I think Sooo
Bcoz definitely the package meant by SHLOK is aastha

Now my heart is beating very fastly
Lub tub club tub (can u hear the music of my heart)

Poor krisolakarsss
They are going through many thingsss

Where is aastha??
Is SHLOK had kidnapped her???
Why ???

U see my mind is fulfilled with many questionsss can't wait to read forward Mani
But again my bro is here to grab the lapppy


What do u mean by ur past is finally got u
Is avdhoot or kalindi r connected to col die with his pasttt

Ohh mahii
Kitna suspended???

Ohh I am really excited to read more
And its a great lovely update


Thanks aishu for sharing your lovely views with me Big smilei really enjoyed your comments buddy!Wink

And don't worry buds brother's do things like thatWinkLOLi don't have one WinkLOLthat's why i am able to write and update ! LOLLOLWill wait for you you take your time!Wink


Yeah bro and sis are real troubles
Again will c u tomorrow
Now I got the secret of ur daily update LOL

Yeah no bro and sis to snatch the lappy! LOL
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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 1:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mishtypiya

Great update..

Thanks dear! Big smile

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