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#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) (Page 18)

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 12:21am | IP Logged
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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 12:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pirate.hunter12

awesome update daughter of a devilLOLEvil Smile Thanks ramit from the bottom of my devilish heart! Evil SmileHug

wohoo!! how cruel is astha, but still i can't say that she deserve that kind of punishmentSmile but i'm hating astha for what she had done to those innocent animals, nerd boy and to the other children Angry from now on i will calll  astha a astha the psychotic shlok got her soulmate oh i mean soul demonEvil SmileEvil Smile Told you they both are psycho and she is a borderline pshyco and these people are clingy and feel every emotion to the extreme Wink just wait buds she will make his life pure hell Evil Smile, he will regret the day that he kidnapped her! Evil SmileLOL

poor shlok he was so small to suffer those type of incidentsCryCryCry
maybe avdooth has a upper hand in shlok's dark past but why astha need to suffer that Cry anyways i'm loving it moreEvil SmileEvil Smile They'll both make each other suffer! OuchLOLLOL

thanx for the PMBig smile Welcome buddy! WinkAnd a merry christmas to you too! Wink
do update soonBig smile Will do! Evil SmileWink



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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 12:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mahirmukhtar

Originally posted by ashlok

Ohh Mahi
Back again for uuu

Why SHLOK is stalking aastha??
Do they have any pasttt connection??
Revenge???

Okay part 7
The sub tittle is superbbb
First lesson
What do u mean??

I think its the first fight romance between themmm
Embarrassed

I love the poem u have written on the top
Ohhh lovelyyy one
Its explaining how the attraction is turned into the dose of dark loveee

SHLOK is watching her pale face with a satisfaction smileee
Sooo cruel he isss

Poor aasthu
It will be really horrible
She is shivering in fearrr

And aasthu feels like a jungle cat stalking its preyyy
Wooww Mahi what an example u have thrown to express ur idea
Hats offf budddy

But even in that horrible situation tooo
She thinks about hot breathe and cold touch combination

That's reallly superbbb

So finally SHLOK accepts that he has lust for herrr
What a weird imagination SHLOK had
He wants to feeel her each an every sense and also he wants to break her innocence

It seems like aasthu is in real troubleee

He kissed her
That too with lip to lip
Woowww amazing cold love storyyy

I love the way u expressed and portrayed the whole scene by wordsss
Crushing her warm lips against his cold oneee
Woow u r a real poettt

He bit her lip
And I love the way u r saying that
He didn't kiss but he did raping with her mouth

Simply superbbb honeyyy

Ohhh so cruel
I didn't expect these from SHLOK
But its unique as uuu

Okay now I am really excited to know what will happen nexttt

U know my eyes r wide open when I was reading this chap
Even I didn't blink
Really he is Sooo cruel
I don't know how aastha is gonna handle himmm

And even after all those situation tooo he demand her a kissies that tooo on lipsss

Sooo scary maaan
And poor she
What can she do other then fulfilling his demandsss

The ending was tooo scaryyy
The destruction started...ohhh reallly amazing storyyy

And he wants more...
That scares me alot


Angry Clap Hug. Hats off buddy
Wants to read more n more
Bcoz my lust for ur story is also seems like not satisfied

But my brooo Angry
He is fighting again for lappy
So my time is overrr
Will read red tomorrowww


Thank you so much aishu for liking the poem and loving this update! Big smileI personally loved writing that chap too!WinkAnd no worries buddy you you take your time will wait for you!Wink

And ofcourse i want to addict you so how can be you satisfied!LOLLOL

Will wait for more of you!Wink



Don't worry already u had sucessed in ur mission of addictong me to ur story mahiii

Congratz again buds

Go ahead

May god bless u

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 12:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ashlok

Hey Mani
I'm back as I promiseddd Welcome buddy was waiting for you too! Wink

Hope u liked my previous comments tooo Of course dear loved them! Big smile
Part part 8
Ohh man the title is superbbb
AWAITING THE DEVIL Thanks dear! Wink

Wowww and great starting once againnn
Poorrr aasthu

Its not a easy thing to bear
And I feel Sooo bad for herrr

But this SHLOK is real arrogant like our old SHLOK in ipkebp
He has no feeling and also he don't know the meaning of the word feelings 
Yep he is a devil and a psycho no mercy from him! Evil SmileWink

And u know SHLOK POV had frighten me tooo

All r his plan!!!!???  
But this is Sooo cruel yaaar

But ur story is moving brilliantlyyy dear
Hats offf to u mahiii Thank you so much aishu! Big smile

Ohh maaan
Another plan
I don't know what is SHLOK planning nowww??

Pooor aastha be ready
Coldie is on fireee Yep he is for her! WinkLOL

Thanks a lot Mahi for giving us this wonderful story My pleasure buddy! Hug
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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 12:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ashlok

Originally posted by mahirmukhtar

Originally posted by ashlok

Ohh Mahi
Back again for uuu

Why SHLOK is stalking aastha??
Do they have any pasttt connection??
Revenge???

Okay part 7
The sub tittle is superbbb
First lesson
What do u mean??

I think its the first fight romance between themmm
Embarrassed

I love the poem u have written on the top
Ohhh lovelyyy one
Its explaining how the attraction is turned into the dose of dark loveee

SHLOK is watching her pale face with a satisfaction smileee
Sooo cruel he isss

Poor aasthu
It will be really horrible
She is shivering in fearrr

And aasthu feels like a jungle cat stalking its preyyy
Wooww Mahi what an example u have thrown to express ur idea
Hats offf budddy

But even in that horrible situation tooo
She thinks about hot breathe and cold touch combination

That's reallly superbbb

So finally SHLOK accepts that he has lust for herrr
What a weird imagination SHLOK had
He wants to feeel her each an every sense and also he wants to break her innocence

It seems like aasthu is in real troubleee

He kissed her
That too with lip to lip
Woowww amazing cold love storyyy

I love the way u expressed and portrayed the whole scene by wordsss
Crushing her warm lips against his cold oneee
Woow u r a real poettt

He bit her lip
And I love the way u r saying that
He didn't kiss but he did raping with her mouth

Simply superbbb honeyyy

Ohhh so cruel
I didn't expect these from SHLOK
But its unique as uuu

Okay now I am really excited to know what will happen nexttt

U know my eyes r wide open when I was reading this chap
Even I didn't blink
Really he is Sooo cruel
I don't know how aastha is gonna handle himmm

And even after all those situation tooo he demand her a kissies that tooo on lipsss

Sooo scary maaan
And poor she
What can she do other then fulfilling his demandsss

The ending was tooo scaryyy
The destruction started...ohhh reallly amazing storyyy

And he wants more...
That scares me alot


Angry Clap Hug. Hats off buddy
Wants to read more n more
Bcoz my lust for ur story is also seems like not satisfied

But my brooo Angry
He is fighting again for lappy
So my time is overrr
Will read red tomorrowww


Thank you so much aishu for liking the poem and loving this update! Big smileI personally loved writing that chap too!WinkAnd no worries buddy you you take your time will wait for you!Wink

And ofcourse i want to addict you so how can be you satisfied!LOLLOL

Will wait for more of you!Wink



Don't worry already u had sucessed in ur mission of addictong me to ur story mahiii

Congratz again buds

Go ahead

May god bless u

Thank you so much dear! Hug
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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 12:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by avinu1

Nice update...
Ashlok match made in hellEvil Smile
Do c.s

Thanks dear! Wink And Agree with you Wink they are truly a hellish couple! Evil SmileLOL
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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 12:35am | IP Logged
Tatttaaataaah
I'm here with another comment on ur ff part 9

The title sounds horrible honeyyy
But looking forwarded

Its look like aastha is turning normal
But will it long last?!!!!??

That's the question which is popping in my minded
Okay come to the story again

Ohhh valuable gift
Again u r raising my bp

But how ramlal is aasthas driver right???
Hmm another suspense I loved ittt

Let me guess
Is ramlal kaka is a betrayerr??
I think Sooo
Bcoz definitely the package meant by SHLOK is aastha

Now my heart is beating very fastly
Lub tub club tub (can u hear the music of my heart)

Poor krisolakarsss
They are going through many thingsss

Where is aastha??
Is SHLOK had kidnapped her???
Why ???

U see my mind is fulfilled with many questionsss can't wait to read forward Mani
But again my bro is here to grab the lapppy


What do u mean by ur past is finally got u
Is avdhoot or kalindi r connected to col die with his pasttt

Ohh mahii
Kitna suspended???

Ohh I am really excited to read more
And its a great lovely update

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 12:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ashlok

Tatttaaataaah
I'm here with another comment on ur ff part 9

The title sounds horrible honeyyy
But looking forwarded

Its look like aastha is turning normal
But will it long last?!!!!??

That's the question which is popping in my minded
Okay come to the story again

Ohhh valuable gift
Again u r raising my bp

But how ramlal is aasthas driver right???
Hmm another suspense I loved ittt

Let me guess
Is ramlal kaka is a betrayerr??
I think Sooo
Bcoz definitely the package meant by SHLOK is aastha

Now my heart is beating very fastly
Lub tub club tub (can u hear the music of my heart)

Poor krisolakarsss
They are going through many thingsss

Where is aastha??
Is SHLOK had kidnapped her???
Why ???

U see my mind is fulfilled with many questionsss can't wait to read forward Mani
But again my bro is here to grab the lapppy


What do u mean by ur past is finally got u
Is avdhoot or kalindi r connected to col die with his pasttt

Ohh mahii
Kitna suspended???

Ohh I am really excited to read more
And its a great lovely update

Thanks aishu for sharing your lovely views with me Big smile i really enjoyed your comments buddy! Wink

And don't worry buds brother's do things like that WinkLOL i don't have one WinkLOL that's why i am able to write and update ! LOLLOL Will wait for you you take your time! Wink

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