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#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) (Page 17)

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Posted: 24 December 2014 at 11:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by madhufx9...

What can I tell GirlClapClapClap
Amazing!! And Ashlok in ur Ff is made from hell!!! Best jodiLOL Told u dear! hellish couple WinkLOL they totally deserve each other! Evil SmileLOL
Oh my Astha is way too much, she is super cruel, some times I feel that I'm cruel..
For cutting flying kites, blown balloon of kidsLOL but what was that... I'm nothing infront of ur Astha... Yep she is borderline psychotic Evil Smile you just watch buds shlok is nothing infront of her OuchLOL she will lead him a horrendous tap dance! LOL

She locked a boy, who has astma, and she she is relating it when he kissed her cruelly!!!!

She tortured Animals ShockedShockedShocked , this I can never do... I love my pets, thank god I'm not like AsthaROFL, but poor girl she is reproching Ouch and she is trying to stop shlok, she dnt want him to punish himself with his deeds...


What ever, but I cannot take shloks's side completely..., he is trying to give pain to one who.hurted him in past, in the process he is hurting someone who is totally unrelated...
He should have chosen some other part to take revenge... this is cruel... Yep but he is a man Wink and on top of that burning with revenge Ouch from the past 24 yrz not going to defend his actions but he was not born psychotic but was made psycho! Evil SmileWink

Hopefully he gain his senses soon before commiting more worst ...

Thank god atleast he related Pain in Astha's eyes with her Tai's... Told you that i wrote that scene for a purpose Wink wanted to show his flashback of his sis! I gave a hint in flashback too! If you've noticed! Wink


Pic was creepy, but loved it... The last pic yep it is red riding hood and the wolf! WinkLOL
Loved today's dose... Thanks dear! Big smile
Tha k u so much for ur horrendous update Thanks dear! Tongue Will try to give you a nirma one now! EmbarrassedLOL

Merry christmas... Merry Christmas to you too dear! Wink
Thanks for pm MahiHugWelcome dear! Big smile

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 12:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by madhufx9...

What can I tell GirlClapClapClap
Amazing!! And Ashlok in ur Ff is made from hell!!! Best jodiLOL
Oh my Astha is way too much, she is super cruel, some times I feel that I'm cruel..
For cutting flying kites, blown balloon of kidsLOL but what was that... I'm nothing infront of ur Astha...

She locked a boy, who has astma, and she she is relating it when he kissed her cruelly!!!!

She tortured Animals ShockedShockedShocked , this I can never do... I love my pets, thank god I'm not like AsthaROFL, but poor girl she is reproching Ouch and she is trying to stop shlok, she dnt want him to punish himself with his deeds...


What ever, but I cannot take shloks's side completely..., he is trying to give pain to one who.hurted him in past, in the process he is hurting someone who is totally unrelated...
He should have chosen some other part to take revenge... this is cruel...

Hopefully he gain his senses soon before commiting more worst ...

Thank god atleast he related Pain in Astha's eyes with her Tai's...


Pic was creepy, but loved it...
Loved today's dose... 
Tha k u so much for ur horrendous update

Merry christmas...
Thanks for pm MahiHug

cutting flying kites, blown balloon of kids AngryAngry Shocked Ur Devil too 

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 12:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Subhashini_chow

Originally posted by mahirmukhtar

Originally posted by Subhashini_chow

Originally posted by mahirmukhtar

Originally posted by Subhashini_chow

Hey Mahi Forgot to tell u 
Merry Christmas Heart
and this song is dedicated to like U sweet devil Big smile



And a Merry Christmas to you too sweatheart! Hug

And i loved both songs the devil within and fear the feverTongue , love those type of songs Wink, thanks dear a great christmas gift from you! Hug

That song the devil within reminded me of Dance With The Devil, that too is a dark song just like that Tongue, i made an Ashlok Vm on that, posted in the forum, hmmm! Ermm i think in october! Wink

I like that VM Dance with Devil ..I watched so many times ..i know thats Vm is Urs Big smile..Shlok has really  grey shaded person in that  

You watched it i didn't know ShockedWink  thanks dear for liking it! Wink
Arey I commented over there Using My Astha shlok Chanel Confused Not as subhashini 

Acha acha so you were Astha Shlok ShockedLOL and i was confused that who's that! Wink

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 12:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Subhashini_chow

Originally posted by madhufx9...

What can I tell GirlClapClapClap
Amazing!! And Ashlok in ur Ff is made from hell!!! Best jodiLOL
Oh my Astha is way too much, she is super cruel, some times I feel that I'm cruel..
For cutting flying kites, blown balloon of kidsLOL but what was that... I'm nothing infront of ur Astha...

She locked a boy, who has astma, and she she is relating it when he kissed her cruelly!!!!

She tortured Animals ShockedShockedShocked , this I can never do... I love my pets, thank god I'm not like AsthaROFL, but poor girl she is reproching Ouch and she is trying to stop shlok, she dnt want him to punish himself with his deeds...


What ever, but I cannot take shloks's side completely..., he is trying to give pain to one who.hurted him in past, in the process he is hurting someone who is totally unrelated...
He should have chosen some other part to take revenge... this is cruel...

Hopefully he gain his senses soon before commiting more worst ...

Thank god atleast he related Pain in Astha's eyes with her Tai's...


Pic was creepy, but loved it...
Loved today's dose... 
Tha k u so much for ur horrendous update

Merry christmas...
Thanks for pm MahiHug

cutting flying kites, blown balloon of kids AngryAngry Shocked Ur Devil too 

Yep subhashini WinkLOL that's why she likes the FF! Evil SmileROFL

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 12:08am | IP Logged
awesome update daughter of a devilLOLEvil Smile

wohoo!! how cruel is astha, but still i can't say that she deserve that kind of punishmentSmile but i'm hating astha for what she had done to those innocent animals, nerd boy and to the other children Angry from now on i will calll  astha a astha the psychotic shlok got her soulmate oh i mean soul demonEvil SmileEvil Smile

poor shlok he was so small to suffer those type of incidentsCryCryCry
maybe avdooth has a upper hand in shlok's dark past but why astha need to suffer that Cry anyways i'm loving it moreEvil SmileEvil Smile

thanx for the PMBig smile
do update soonBig smile



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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 12:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nim_var

Mahir, that was a brilliant update on X'mas day. Merry Xmas to you. 
Aastha is such a complex person and selfish at the core. She realized her truth and tried to save Shlok so that she could save herself. Wah ...wah... She showed her cruel streak when she admitted her deepest secret that she tortured animals for fun. An imperfect girl who lies, cheats to get her way.

The almost rape was described perfectly. My guess is that Avdhoot was part of the gang that raped / killed his tai and he is now taking revenge on all those perpetrators. By kidnapping and raping Aastha, he will avenge his tai.

That is why Avdhoot is pale on seeing the note and the email. Wink

Thanks nimms Wink and a Merry Christmas to you too buddy! Hug

And Astha is a borderline psychotic Ouch and these people feel every emotion to the extreme you just wait buds she will make his life real hell! Evil SmileLOL

Both of my characters are flawed, psycho OuchLOL and truly made for each other! WinkLOL

And about Avdhoot we'll see dear! WinkWinkLOL

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 12:17am | IP Logged
Hey Mani
I'm back as I promiseddd

Hope u liked my previous comments tooo
Part part 8
Ohh man the title is superbbb
AWAITING THE DEVIL

Wowww and great starting once againnn
Poorrr aasthu

Its not a easy thing to bear
And I feel Sooo bad for herrr

But this SHLOK is real arrogant like our old SHLOK in ipkebp
He has no feeling and also he don't know the meaning of the word feelings

And u know SHLOK POV had frighten me tooo

All r his plan!!!!???
But this is Sooo cruel yaaar

But ur story is moving brilliantlyyy dear
Hats offf to u mahiii

Ohh maaan
Another plan
I don't know what is SHLOK planning nowww??

Pooor aastha be ready
Coldie is on fireee

Thanks a lot Mahi for giving us this wonderful story

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Posted: 25 December 2014 at 12:17am | IP Logged
Nice update...
Ashlok match made in hellEvil Smile
Do c.s

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