#2 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 24 /(Pg-127) - Page 15

Originally posted by: ashlok

Yeah bro and sis are real troubles
Again will c u tomorrow
Now I got the secret of ur daily update 😆

Originally posted by: mishtypiya

Great update..

Originally posted by: ashlok

Again saying thanksss

Did u forget
Saying thanks to fronds r forbidden samazla???

Originally posted by: ashlok

Actually I wanna quit for now
But my heart wanna read moreee

So here I come again mahiii
Part10
Waking up to horror

Title itself adding a horror feeling dear

My mind is now surrounded by many unanswered questions
Hope I get the ans sooon

Poor avdhoot
I can feel his state mentally and physically

Poor he is
But what he did in his past??
Another question popping in my mind

And I can see the true love tears from kalindis eye
Poor she
How could she imagine of losing her daughter

But surely SHLOK is merciless

Looking more forward honey

Can't waittt
To see aasthas reaction

Ohh again coldie
I can't believe this

Angie is also an equipment used to get aastha

SHLOK is really a selfish man
But I am eagerly waiting to know why he is doing all these

So he cleverly used Angie
Ohh my gosh my head is going to twirl arounddd


I did not expect this kind of suspenses

Ohhh man u r really great in expressing the ideas clearly and vividly

Hats off to u mahiii

The way u are expressing every emotions r superbbb

Fantastic story

Originally posted by: Priya_ShrAvi

Amazing update my choco chip 👏 ⭐️ 👏
and I can see...your hell bent to addict me more..fat chance... Already addicted 10000% 😕
I read your update as soon as wake up 😃 and it made my day 😆 Will have on your knees my vanilla pudding! 😈🤣

Coming to the update  Already wacked up 😉😆 you have a long way to go babe! 😈😆
Hmm...I don't like your astha 😕 I pity her ...for her state and going through all this for no mistake of her..that's it...but she's a total psycho  Yeah Borderline personality disorder 😉 just wait buddy you have no idea what she would do to him! 😈😆
Torturing puppy 😕 but slapping tiny baby 😡 spoilt brat!!
Locking nerd boy in BR...knowing he's having asthma 😕 today her mother locked in a private hell...who's also having asthma... Karma hits back!! Kalindi is suffering bcos of astha...(for no mistake of her).in the same way astha going through all this bcos sadistic behavior of her father...here also it's not astha's mistake...
But that's how karma play...it hits your dearest one and you go through hell...seeing them suffer!! 😭 Yep what goes around always come around! 😉

OK I'll stop here...ikr am going overboard 😆 but I have seen ppl with such behavior...apologize for my ranting  No apologies my vanilla pudding 😉 i have seen that 😉, that's why i took that concept, dark psychological love story! 😈
And 3 cheers to you for writing such realistic characters..⭐️.unfortunately they do exist and a tight hugg n muah for writing such a diff story... You have a twisted brain my choco lava 

Twisted no doubt on that my pudding! 😈🤣And a bear hug to you too from your own devil mahi! 😈🤗 Loved psychology as a subject 😉, wanted to benefit from the knowledge and the research! 😉😆😆

Loving the fact that astha trying to be rational and even helping shlok to come out of his private hell...redeeming herself... Yep they are the one and same! 😉😆

Now what's next choco chip...can't wait to read dearu... 😳 Another shock my vanilla pudding and that too soon! 😈😆